Rakshak - PurVir SS |part 3 updated on page 7|

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Here is a short story on PurVir, revolving around the ongoing track (1st April). Purvi is kidnapped and Vir is in delhi, unaware of the adverse situations in Rewari.


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Part 1 : Vir returns


It's been 4 days since Vir left for Delhi and Purvi went missing. In the morning of the 5th day Vir sets back for Rewari. Throughout his work tour, his intuitions kept on telling him that something devilish is happening. He couldn't connect on call to Purvi and thus Prakashi gave him a pseudo image, of which he is ignorant until now.

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As soon as he reaches Haweli he feels a sinister. His eyes immediately go searching for Purvi and his little kids. Vir gives a call to Juhi and Manas but none of them responds. This startles him. He could see none - neither prakashi nor anjali. He rushes to the kids room and finds them sleeping on bed. He sighs in relief, oblivious of the catastrophe awaiting him.


Vir steps closer to find the once pink, lively faces of his children turned into pale and weak. He freaks. He tries to wake them up by sprinkling water on their faces. Juhi regains consciousness. She hugs her dad and starts crying. Vir has never in his life felt so much of terror surrounding him. He was panic stricken.

Vir - key hua tum dono ne? Ye key haal bana rakha hai apna? Aur ye Manas ....??? (He still dint wake up)

Juhi - Baba Anjali chachi bhot buri hai. Unhone him dono ko 2 din se kuch bhi khane ko nhi diaa... 😭

His kids are hungry from the past two days and that's why they looked so weak and that's why they were lying unconscious. He hugs her tightly and a tear roles down his cheek. A father cried for he witnessed the worst scene in this world - of not being able to feed and take care of his kids properly. He immediately goes to the kitchen and brings food for both of them.

Manas wakes up. Vir feeds both of them with his hands. His chest felt heavy with the burden of miserable sight of his kids. Once they were pacified, Vir gathers them close to his chest as if trying to heal the broken piece of his heart. He caresses and kisses them.


Vir's anger was on seventh sky when he recalls "anjali chachi ne hume khana nhi diya..." He controlled his fury in front of kids but vowed to punish this devil b**ch for harming these little pieces of his heart.


Vir - mhare jaane ke baad key hua yha? Anjali yo sab kar rhi thi tmhare sath aur kisi ne use roka kyo naa? Purvi kaha thi ?

Juhi - Baba.... (She sniffles bcz of crying) Baba, jis din ap yha se gye the us din se MAA kahi gayab ho gyi hai ...💔

Vir - key matlab hai tera? Purvi ko kya hua?

Manas - haa baba.... Humne jab unhe dhundne ki koshish kri to Daadi aur chachi ne hume bhot daanta, aur maara bhi (he starts crying) hume khana bhi nhi diya.

Juhi and Manas then narrate all the incidents that took place in the past 4 days - their attempts of contacting Vir and finding Purvi, tortures they suffered, the police interrogation and what happened at sakshi mill.


Juhi - Baba ....sab log bhot gande hai. Koi humse pyaar nhi karta. Jabse Maa gyi hai kisi ne unhe bachane ki koshish nhi kri siwae sudha aur priyu mausi ke. (She said disappointedly)

Manas - maa bhot achhi hai. Hum unke bina nhi reh sakte. Unhe wapas le aao na Baba please... (He folds his hands to plead and cries)


Vir was baffled on hearing the truth. The kids were not inventing the plot this was sure, but why prakashi and others behaved in this manner was above explanations for him. He wanted to lash out at everyone for being so careless towards his wife and children but was helpless at this moment. He could see pain and longing in J&M 's eyes. This was intolerable for him. If what they said was true then he was standing on the verge of losing his beloved family. But consoling J&M was his priority at this moment.


Vir - tum dono chinta mat kro. Mai aa gya hun naa. Ab sab thik kar dooga. Aur mai vaada karta hun tum dono ki maa ne sahi salamat wapas lekar auga... (His voice was resolute - whatever might happen he will save his Bawri at any cost).


Vir puts them to sleep and calls his sister. He asks her to reach haweli right away. She was the only one he could trust right now to look after J&M while he, Yogi and MS would be out solving this mystery. Meanwhile, Vir called MS and Yogi and told them about everything he heard from kids. Also, he had a talk with Sudha and Priyu. All 5 are in haweli waiting for Vir's sister to arrive so that they can leave. They were perplexed as to what exactly is happening around them. They were worried for Purvi's well being and anxious about who was behind this. Each one of them had their own suspicions and theories but none of them expressed in words bcz it needed evidence, which they lacked at the moment.


A nagging doubt troubled Vir again and again - Maa ne mere ta jhooth kyo bola? Anjali par to manne waise bhi bharosa naa hai par maa...? Itna sab ho rha hai aur yo dono ghar se gayab ?

He is concerned about Purvi. He is missing her presence heartily. He feels sorry for being absent when his wife needed him the most, when his children were in a vulnerable state. He fears losing his love again, he fears not being able to save the mother of his kids once again. 🥺


Being the Mukhiya, he have had enough experience dealing with cases of hatred taking route to a crime. He knew his mother was a prime suspect after the statements he heard but his heart dint want to believe. "Mai bhagwan se yahi maagta hun ki is sabke piche koi bhi ho par tu naa ho Maa. Kyoki agar yo sab tune kiya hai to mhare vishwas ka bhot galat fayda uthaya hai tanne. Aur mere pariwar ko is trah chot pahochane ke lie mai tanne kade maaf na karuga."

His thoughts were interrupted with the entry of his sister. Vir briefs her with the paradoxical situations they are caught in. He takes promise from her that she will look after his kids in his absence. Vir gives her sister a new private number using which she can contact *only him* at anytime if she needs. He was determined to take every step cautiously so as to avoid any harm hovering over his family. He guarded the haweli with some of his most trusted men and gave strict instructions. He is bothersome - the one who kidnapped Purvi might try to harm J&M as they are the eye witnesses.


Yogi - bhaiya.. ap chinta mat kijiye. Haweli ki suraksha ki zimmedari meri hai. Mai vaada karta hu bachhon ko kuch nhi hone duga. Ap bas bhabhi ko sahi salamat wapas le aiye.


Yogi's words encourage Vir. He feels proud to have a supportive brother like him. He pats his shoulder and they leave for Sakshi mill, with a hope that they might find some clues there regarding where they might have taken Purvi this time...... !!!



To be continued.... 😊

Mystery is yet to unfold !!


Part - 2 : page 3

Part - 3 : page 7

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Too good 👍waiting for the update.

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Waah !!! Carry on m liking this stoyline👍🏼

Ab Vir ki toli Prabhurjali ki karegi Aisi taisi 😈

Glad you brought his sister back 😆❤️

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Wow!! This is very good Supriya 🤗

Yogi and Vir's sister both have a role to play👏


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This is an awesome story line.... Very neat and logical plot..... Also very interesting.... Looking forward to reading more....

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Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Waah !!! Carry on m liking this stoyline👍🏼

Thanks yaar ❤️


Ab Vir ki toli Prabhurjali ki karegi Aisi taisi 😈

Glad you brought his sister back 😆❤️

Yogi aur uski sister ko gayab kar dia serial me.. socha unhe wapas le aau🤪

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Originally posted by: esha143

This is an awesome story line.... Very neat and logical plot..... Also very interesting.... Looking forward to reading more....


Thanks a lot ❤️

I'll be updating it at the earliest possible😃

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Are sibling force sath me😎😎

Apki story line jaida mast chal rakhi hai

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Loved it ❤️

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