PurVir SS -Redemption |Final part on page 5 - Page 3

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

Manasi..You are definitely the saviour of our forum..

Finally read Both the parts..❤️This is so painfully beautiful and pure..The way you have expressed Virendra's guilt and emotions..Just so perfect ! And Mama Sarkar..Captain of our ship..Loved how he made Purvi realize her set of mistakes too..

Can't wait for the 3rd part ! Damn I can sense how soft it is going to be❤️

Aayu 🤗🤗

So happy you liked it ❤️

Next part mein Panchayat n Vir ki maafi

Originally posted by: Nezuko

Read both parts in one go waiting for the third one

Manasi lagta hai kafi difficult raha hoga 2nd part likhna

Actually I understand why but you know it comes out pretty nice 👏

Writing vir's character is quite difficult

Good one manasi👍👍👍

Nezu 🤗

Thank God the 2nd part came out decent! Vir is a complex character to write coz he doesn't emote openly!

Plus I don't even enjoy seeing angst...toh likhna kitna difficult tha poocho mat🙈

Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Nezu 🤗

Thank God the 2nd part came out decent! Vir is a complex character to write coz he doesn't emote openly!

Plus I don't even enjoy seeing angst...toh likhna kitna difficult tha poocho mat🙈

@bold and even after that you did such a good job

Waiting for the third 😆😆

Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Kya tha yeh 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Aapne to Kamal hi Kar diya I used to think aap itte achhe episode reviews dete ho but SS kyu nhi likhe purvir pe aaj Aapne likh Diya

Vaise Mene bhi socha tha likhu Kuch par this is perfect Di 🤩 rula hi Diya Aapne to 😭🤩😭🤩😭🤩

Originally posted by: Nezuko

@bold and even after that you did such a good job

Waiting for the third 😆😆

3rd part probably late night or early morning!!

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Kya tha yeh 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Aapne to Kamal hi Kar diya I used to think aap itte achhe episode reviews dete ho but SS kyu nhi likhe purvir pe aaj Aapne likh Diya

Vaise Mene bhi socha tha likhu Kuch par this is perfect Di 🤩 rula hi Diya Aapne to 😭🤩😭🤩😭🤩

Piyaaaaaaaa 🤗

PurVir hai hi aaise ki likhe bina raha nahi jaata☺️

So happy you liked it 💔

Please you also write...the more the merrier 😆

Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Piyaaaaaaaa 🤗

PurVir hai hi aaise ki likhe bina raha nahi jaata☺️

So happy you liked it 💔

Please you also write...the more the merrier 😆

I knew this part will be a treat so decided to take all of my time and read it at one go without any interruption and I got late because of that.

I soo want this to happen..Vir letting everything out of his heavy heart, that too on MS shoulders you wrote that part so beautifully that I got tears yaar, that rarely happens. The dialogues oooh!! they gave chills. I don't think we are gonna get even percent of this.. but all of us do need Vir breakdown he need a shoulder to cry on exploding all his insecurities 🤧🤧

The whole part was beautifully penned but as I had mentioned Vir and MS part was 😚😚😚❤️❤️ waiting for the 3rd part

Just wow very good

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

I can see it in front of my eyes. Beautiful writing❤️

I also could picture the whole story 😊