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Posted: 4 years ago
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Manasi Manasi Manasi!

I can not express how beautiful this is . I am just so happy that you are a Purvir shipper and we get to see these gems from you.

Love that MS plays a role. Purvir need a strong ally and MS fills in these shoes so well.

so looking forward to the remaining part(s)


Thankyou, my friend❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: nycgal

Manasi Manasi Manasi!

I can not express how beautiful this is . I am just so happy that you are a Purvir shipper and we get to see these gems from you.

Love that MS plays a role. Purvir need a strong ally and MS fills in these shoes so well.

so looking forward to the remaining part(s)


Thankyou, my friend❤️


Thanks Shree 🤗

Both Vir & Purvi need someone to sit them down & help them sort things out...nahi toh yeh dono baware bas bawal machate rahenge😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Manasi 👍🏼⭐️👏 both the parts are beautiful 😍♥

Love the dilemma n angst of vir n purs trauma ❤️

And

the way you have depicted the role of Mama Sarkar in the 2nd part it's sooo perfectly written wish they show something like this in the show but I doubt 🤔

Waiting for the 3rd part now 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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after reading your both pieces i can say plz EK give saba’s post to mansi and you better stay away from molkki our girl will rock the show❤️❤️

lots of love to you manasi ... my girl this is what a true purvir ian's wants but will get in OS only not on tv that’s the only sad thing . that vir opens his heart out to mama ji n then mama ji give sajdari things to purvi really hard needed in the show ... they should better show this👏👏👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I can see it in front of my eyes. Beautiful writing❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Manasi..You are definitely the saviour of our forum..smiley31


Finally read Both the parts..❤️This is so painfully beautiful and pure..The way you have expressed Virendra's guilt and emotions..Just so perfect ! And Mama Sarkar..Captain of our ship..Loved how he made Purvi realize her set of mistakes too..


Can't wait for the 3rd part ! Damn I can sense how soft it is going to be❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: RamonaG

Manasi 👍🏼⭐️👏 both the parts are beautiful 😍♥

Love the dilemma n angst of vir n purs trauma ❤️

And

the way you have depicted the role of Mama Sarkar in the 2nd part it's sooo perfectly written wish they show something like this in the show but I doubt 🤔

Waiting for the 3rd part now 😳


Thank you Ramona 🤗Glad you enjoyed it!!


I love Mama Sarkar...couldn't help involving him to get PurVir back on track!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: ImHemangi

after reading your both pieces i can say plz EK give saba’s post to mansi and you better stay away from molkki our girl will rock the show❤️❤️

lots of love to you manasi ... my girl this is what a true purvir ian's wants but will get in OS only not on tv that’s the only sad thing . that vir opens his heart out to mama ji n then mama ji give sajdari things to purvi really hard needed in the show ... they should better show this👏👏👏


Thank you so very Hemangi 🤗

I'm so touched that you found my attempt so worthy ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

I can see it in front of my eyes. Beautiful writing❤️


Thanks Pallavi🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Read both parts in one go waiting for the third one

Manasi lagta hai kafi difficult raha hoga 2nd part likhna

Actually I understand why but you know it comes out pretty nice 👏

Writing vir's character is quite difficult

Good one manasi👍👍👍

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