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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww...what an amazing piece of news......👏👏
I am so glad to hear this..........😊😊
I would love to read your poems.........
as you are simply superb......👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: meftal

wow skepti congrats!!!!!!!!! really it's not surprising,ur words have magical powers,so when u r giving the treat.

Thank you Mef....................that's very kind of you to say so.
Treat?? Ok here is something
ENJOY...........................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: namita25

aww...what an amazing piece of news......👏👏
I am so glad to hear this..........😊😊
I would love to read your poems.........
as you are simply superb......👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼


Namita,
I have posted a poem in AA forum on Antara, why dont you take a look? And why dont you come to that forum and post there? Many of us have become regulars there...........so do come along.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx skepti,they are very delicious😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Skep!!! Congrats 👏👏👏
there no wonder in it, that your poems got selected...
you really deserve it.... can you post the winning poems here ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pennu

Wow Skep!!! Congrats 👏👏👏

there no wonder in it, that your poems got selected...
you really deserve it.... can you post the winning poems here ...

Here are the two poems:::::::::::::😊

Entry 7 Posted on Mother's Day on MRD

Flowers for Mother

I walked through the fields green
Where everything looked so serene
To pick up a bunch of Lady's Lace
Delicate and wild on the Earth's face.

Blue bells bobbed and Snapdragons too
To colour lavishly with their hue
Violets and Forget-me-nots
Sprayed by nature quite a lot.

Jasmines, mogras and lilies pure
White as pearls and so demure
Buttercup and the daffodil
Brightness in my heart does fill

You held me close and dispelled my fears
All these flowers are for you, my dear
I remember how you showered me with Love
That was silent and gentle like a sweet dove

Dewdrops on petals do recall
Like my teardrops that slowly fall
You were my truest and best friend
So why did it all have to come to an end?

I'm sure when we'll meet once more
We'll laugh and talk like we did before
Now as I see these flowers so true
I see in them little images of you

Entry 8 Thanks Sammy

In Heaven............

He painstakingly created the tree to thrive in the glade,
Not just to bear fruits and buds but also to give shade.
Happy He was at his own skill - admiring what he'd made,
His favourite angel didn't quite agree and said so unafraid.

"What", He cried, "show me now what creation you talk about
There just can't be one like the tree, of that I have no doubt."
The angel went through the clouds feeling a bit distraught
Espied the creature on the earth and to His notice brought.

"It's the mother with her child, like your tree in the glade
Bears pain and hardships and also gives her protective shade.
When its roots find no water, Your tree will wilt and dry
The mother will wilt if her child should even merely cry.

You may need to borrow much of her very soothing shade
To make Heaven more heavenly and greener the glade."
God himself was wondrous at His little angel divine '
The mother was indeed the best, a creature so benign

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks skep for posting the poems in this post, congratulations on your win but it is well deserved and not at all surprise for any of us here in this forum. Cant express but your writing may it be story or poem is something dear👏👏👏. Wish you continue to give us the gifts of ur beautiful poems and off course stories.

Sorry for being late to congratulate you but its ok because i got to read the poems in one shot here only😊. And about these two poems what else can be said these r the winners ⭐️, keep it up, all the best 👍🏼.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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congrats skepti👏again a great piece of work😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for sharing this piece of your lovely work with us... Both the poems are very good... I loved the first poem... Flowers to Mother...

"Dewdrops on petals do recall

Like my teardrops that slowly fall
You were my truest and best friend
So why did it all have to come to an end?"

it was very touching.... truely moist my eyes....
so this flowers are for you Skep....😊
and once again Congrats...👏
this a taken by me only...
Edited by pennu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Manalee .................thanks 😆
@ Pen ................... special thanks to you for appreciating and that too when poetry is not really to your liking. 😉

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