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meftal

@meftal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

arwen,nidhi,namita,akashruti,bhawna,thanks to all of u

bhawna welcome back to the forum

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Bonai

@Bonai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

this one is also very mithi mithi, Raj & Kranti's expressions and dialogs are well written, very natural, it sounds like a married couples usual conversation. Seher is i think uski ma se bhi bari KK hai, itne thore time me itna hangama macha diya aur Raj ki halat kharap kar di... humm
meft u r writing so well, keep it up. utilise ur vacations more & keep writing, sorry dear for replying late.

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meftal

@meftal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

bonai ,this post was not preplanned in my mind,actually the day i wrote,i broke a glass ,ithought to use it some way,it was written suddenly,well it's mine fav. too.thanx to u😃

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Bonai

@Bonai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: meftal
bonai ,this post was not preplanned in my mind,actually the day i wrote,i broke a glass ,ithought to use it some way,it was written suddenly,well it's mine fav. too.thanx to u😃

to seher ko tumse training mili 😲😆, manna parega kafi achhi training di hai. without planning bahat achhi scene likhi hai.

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