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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was early in the morning kranti has to go for the prepration of some essential pooja.Raj and seher were sleeping.she ask raj to take care of her if she wakes up.

K-i will be keeping the milk on the table give it to her,r u listening???

R-hmm ok

After some times seher wakes up,she tries to wake up raj,but he rarely gives any response.she pulls his hair,started jumping on his stomach.

R-oh my angel plz let me sleep.

Seher started throwing pillow and other things on the floor,she gets down from the bed and takes bowl of milk that was present on the table and throws it on the floor.she gets a pen of raj opens it and made several linings on one of the wall.she hits the mirror of the window through a small pot.

R- oh my little revolutionary what have u done??he holds her up in his arm.if ur mother sees it she will be definitely killing me.

Seher was smiling,raj feels that his shirt has became wet.

R-oh god!! Now what's this dear…….let me make u to have bath and get u ready.

Seher had a bath,raj get's her ready,made her to sit on the bed with some of her toys.he started cleaning the room.suddenly kranti comes,she was shocked to see the situation of the room.seher looks up at her mother and smiles and says ma.raj was busy in his work and says-my sweety don't call ur mother now ,u wanted ur father to be scolded in front of u.

K-raj what's this??

R-kranti u………

K-I told u na to take care of her na,how can u be so uncareful??this is too much.

As kranti was scolding raj seher started laughing,raj had a smile on his face.

K-see how both of u r smiling,now u both don't talk to me.

Kranti goes in the kitchen

R-see ma has became angry,let say sorry to her.

He holds her up in the arm and goes in the kitchen,seher holds her dupatta from behind.

R-say I am sorry ma

S-i am choli ma

R-say I luv u ma

S-I lub u ma

R-say daddy luv u

S-daddy lub u

R-don't be angry

S-thont be angy

Kranti smiles,tears were in her eyes,she takes seher in his arm

K-how can I be angry my angel,u r my life,u r everything for me.

And kisses on her forehead.

Raj goes closer to kranti and says-where is mine gift of morning.

K-seher say I am sorry daddy

S-i am choli daddy

K-U r now a big boy………

s-u………busy in playing with the the chain of her mother.

Kranti goes

R-hmm let's get ready for the court u big boy………

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey mef🤗 🤗 thanx alot for this lovely post😊
Sehar......... is choooo chweet.....lots of kisses for her......she is cute n naughty too😆............m loving it.
i liked the whole conversation .......well written dear👏
keep it up👍🏼.....looking forward to have more n more😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dinky u loved actually i wrote it in a hurry,it suddenly comes in to my mind,i did not know that it wll become a story.😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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A happy fly
so cute conversation bet s, r, & k
we have new script writer👏😉😃
I loved the baby talk
waiting 4 next part
short sweet & cute


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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx sasha i am happy that u loved it😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow...mef this was really cute....i loved it👏
thanks for this yummy little story😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Meftal loved the entire part. Sweet one. Being in english made me to read it fastly. Ur making us to visit the forum daily.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Gr8 going mef..........................👍🏼👍🏼
loved it to the core...............
😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx a lot yaar it ws really a vry cute nd sweet story.........
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz keep on writing..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow its really a nice peice of writing '
kaash aise pyaare pyaare se scene hame MRD mein dekhne ko milte.

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