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pari

@pari29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: pennu
Areh ro math meri.. pari...
It seems thumari kanhi me twist aa gayee....

Raj ko nahi.. balki Kranti accident huwa he na....

Good job Pari..

cahle kisi ka to accident huyaa naa😆😆 dono main se kisi ka bhi ho par dosra to us ka khayal rahe ga naa😆😆

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pari

@pari29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Arwen...
i really like this pari👏...................i have a feeling that something like this will be shown in MRD..............kranti needs a jhatka to realize her true feelings for Raj..............so a raj on death bed.................great and if raj is on death bed cos he was doing some krantikari work than sohne pe sohaga😊

thaks arwen even i've also want this to happen its sounds too good na atlest they come to know dat they r made for each other and relise there true feeling

@purvi thaks to u too for ur comments n yes ur rite at that time dey also ahve cars, and OT

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Yeh MRD hai..please..Kekta ka show mat bana..accident aur fir seva and all that..operation theatre..mangalsutra..uff..please..nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...

Tune likha hai achha..par tera post edit kia jaayega..itna bada font?Kis lia?

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

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+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Pari very well written dear👏...one request.,..can u just reduce your font size please😳...its really big and hurting my eyes

Loved the way u hv expressed Kranti's emotions in your story👏😳...See u hv written about Raj's accident here and in the show Kranti meets with this unfortunate accident of falling down from the staircase😭..looks like creatives took some idea from your story only😉😛

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pari

@pari29

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: jyoti06
Pari very well written dear👏...one request.,..can u just reduce your font size please😳...its really big and hurting my eyes

Loved the way u hv expressed Kranti's emotions in your story👏😳...See u hv written about Raj's accident here and in the show Kranti meets with this unfortunate accident of falling down from the staircase😭..looks like creatives took some idea from your story only😉😛

yeh jyo thak yaar its was my first try and i thak all of u for ur honest comments and jyo i'm trying to reduse the fount size bt its getting some problem bt i 'll definetely do it n yes jyo cretives to take ideas from are r updates calo raj ka naa sahi but kranti ka hi sahi par accident to dekhaya naa chaye ja bhi ho kisi ka bhi accident ho dusara to us ki seewa kare gaa hi

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Very good job rapi socho and aur likho.

Infact this is only possible when the clout id distrust Krani has for Raj. A very good thought and well written as well. Keep it up.

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Pari ............

This is your first try .......... and I think you've done a good job ....

Writing always improves as you continue to do it ........

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pari

@pari29

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

dawan, rajana thanks dear for ur comments , but still i'm confuse shall i contuiune or not

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abhishekstixgen

@abhishekstixgen

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

when shall we get to read the next part..waiting for it

waise accidents during those times seems a bit typically ekta kapoor kinda stuff.....not bad the circumstances could have been different

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apus fan

@sami01

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

wow ji i am replying late as i loged in abhi subha hui hai yahaan forum is most active when i am sleeping i hate thsi time diference i like ur idea pari....scene could be given authentic 1940s touch and we sincerely hope to see something like this ..in our serial

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