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Saritha

@Souparnikakk

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Pihu...you have got a good talent in writing. Keep it up! And one more thing, plz try to write on some more realistic ideas dear. You can convey the ideas beautifully but just need some focus on the language too. I'm not saying it is bad or not upto the mark. But just thought critically. I'm just expressing my humble opinion. Don't feel bad dear. All the best

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

beautiful and funny update. hehehe pehle do ladki to bahut he chalu nikli. lol. super advance. loved mayur meeting. update next part soon.

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Yashfeen

@Bhatakti_atma

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Hello

Read all the stuffs here..

They were amazing..

Keep writing

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pihu2june

@pihu2june

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Ruhana05
Superbbb update mayur meeting was awesome cont soon dear...

thank you 😊

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pihu2june

@pihu2june

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Souparnikakk
Pihu...you have got a good talent in writing. Keep it up! And one more thing, plz try to write on some more realistic ideas dear. You can convey the ideas beautifully but just need some focus on the language too. I'm not saying it is bad or not upto the mark. But just thought critically. I'm just expressing my humble opinion. Don't feel bad dear. All the best

thank u so much for letting me know your opinion.😊

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pihu2june

@pihu2june

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sreevijayan
Awesome shots dear...

thank you 😊

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pihu2june

@pihu2june

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Faria.
beautiful and funny update. hehehe pehle do ladki to bahut he chalu nikli. lol. super advance. loved mayur meeting. update next part soon.

thank you 😊