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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Pia-

I like the start .this one seems to be one interesting story

yes interesting,till I dont forget the story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Lovely start
Action suspense sentiment
wow wow
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Very nice story.
Very promising.
Do cntnue soon.
Thnx 4 pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Loved the update. Waiting for mayur
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Amazing story.
It's awesome.
Please do continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
hmmm...seems interesting.
Sam is a tiugh cop and Indira is a single mother.
Bt kese?
hmmm...yh janeny k liye wait krna padhey ga.
Thxnx for update and Pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER - 1

CHAPTER - 2

[ PAST 6 years ago ]

A man was fixing a car,by lying on the ground under the car.Another man came to him and then kicked on the earlier man's leg and asked,"Kya be abhi bhi latka hua hai uske peeche,abhi aati hogi vo khaana lekar aur phir jab tujhe dekhegi to phir se chillaayegi."The man lying down replied,"Offo Sameer tu kitna darta hai usse.Kya karegi thora chillayegi,daategi aur to kuch nehi karegi na.Khaamakha mein khud bhi darta hai mujhe bhi daraata hai."Sameer laughed and replied,"Ha beta Mayu tu to kitna usse nehi darta hai mujhe pata hai."Mayank came outside from under the car and said,"Ha ha jaanta hu,mazaak mat ura mera.Khair uski daat ki to aadat par chuki hai ab mujhe to.Main nehi darta ab usse.""Kaun nehi darta kisse???"Both Mayank and Sameer turned towards the direction of the voice and found a college going girl was standing with a tiffin carrier in her one hand and a big stick in the other hand.She put the box on a table and then asked,"Kya baate ho rahi thi?"Sameer looked at Mayank at first and then at the girl and replied,"Mayu keh raha tha ke usey tujhse dar nehi lag raha hai.Tu aakar kar bhi kya legi,zyaada se zyaada daategi issey zyaada to kuch nehi kar sakti hai na."The girl mocked and replied,"Main kya kar sakti hu ye dikhaane ke liye hi to aaj ye danda apne saath laayi hu.Abhi aap dono zara jaldi kijiye mujhe college jaana hai.Abhi meri friends aati hi hongi."Mayank gave a disturbing look to the girl and went inside to wash his hands.The girl was Mayank's sister Suhaani.She served them the food and asked them to eat.She said,"Kitni subhe subhe aap dono kaam par lag jaate ho yaha aakar,naashta bhi karke nehi aate.Abhi maine dupeher ka khaana bhi ghar mein banakar rakh diya hai aap dono bas jaakar kha lena."Sameer laughed and said,"Dekh main to kha lunga par tujhe kya lagta hai ke ye khaayega?Isey koi hosh rehta hai kya?"Suhaani angrily said to Sameer,"Sameer bhaiya maine aapse kitni baar kaha hai ke khaate waqt baat mat kiya karo.Khaayenge kaise nehi?Khaana hi parega aur ye zimmedaari aapki hai ke aap is baat ka dhyaan rakkhe ke ye waqt par khaana kha rahe hai ya nehi."At that moment,someone called Suhaani from the back.Everyone looked there and found two girls were standing and on seeing them,Suhaani said,"Dekho mere dost bhi aa gaye.Jaldi khatam karo aap dono naashta."Sameer gave a smile and pinched Mayank and replied,"Le teri waali bhi aa gayi."Mayank was staring at one of the girls and on hearing Sameer's comments,he glared at him and then again resumed staring at her.The girl who was standing at the particular girl's beside said,"Vo dekh vo to tujhe ghure hi ja raha hai."The girl slapped on the girl's hand,who commented and then again called Suhaani.Mayank and Sameer both completed their breakfast and then Suhaani hurriedly left from there.

The owner of the garage was Mayank and Sameer both,Mayank Sharma and Sameer Diwan.Mayank had only one younger sister Suhaani as family and his best friend Sameer.When Mayank was a young boy and Suhaani was an infant,their parents died.After the death of their parents,Mayank had to leave his home as his father was indebted and before clearing their loan,he died and so the house was seized by the bank.He even stayed in temples with his sister and started searching for petty jobs in order to feed himself and his sister.He took a job in a garage and then took a small one room house in rent.Once,in childhood,Sameer saved his life and from that day,they became best friends and Sameer,who was an orphan started living with them.Both of them started working in the garage and when they were in their teens,with the money they saved and a loan from the bank,both of them opened their own garage.Mayank and Sameer left their studies,in the middle and supported Suhaani's education.All the people of that area used to love both of them very much and also their sister.When both of them started earning a very good amount from the garage,they slowly resumed their studies at night colleges and at that time,Suhaani used to stay in the house of a nearby elderly couple as Mayank and Sameer couldn't leave their sister alone in the house.From young age,especially after his parent's death and also due to the responsibility,Mayank used to talk a bit less and was always very serious type of person.He never took interest in any outside things except his and his family life,but since past few years,his heart started beating and caring for someone else and she was Suhaani's childhood friend.

Suhaani and her other two friends reached the college on time.In the college,there was a boy named Dhruv,who was the son of an ill-famous builder.He had his eyes on Suhaani from the day she joined that college.Everyday,he used to tease Suhaani when she came to college.That day too he blocked Suhaani's way and asked,"Arey jaaneman kaha chali?"Suhaani asked,"Tumse matlab??Roz roz mujhe yu pareshaan karna zaruri hai?"Dhruv replied,"Ek baar tum maan to jaao rani phir dekho main to tumhe apne sar par beetha kar rakkhunga."Suhaani walked towards him and said,"Mere bhaiya ka ek ulta haath parega na to saara ye jo ishq ka bhoot hai na utar jaayega sar se.Samjhe?Hmmmh bara aaya!!"She pushed him away and went inside with both her friends.While walking,the girl on whom Mayank was interested,asked Suhaani,"Mmm Suhaani main tujhse ek baat puchu?"Suhaani stopped and said,"Tu to aise bol rahi hai jaise mere mana karne ke baad bhi tu bhaiya ke baare mein kuch nehi puchegi."The girl blushed and lowered her eyes and then looked at her sister.Suhaani said,"Nupur zyaada yu sharmaaya mat kar tu mujhe achche se pata hai ke tu mere bhaiya ko bohot pasand karti hai aur in fact mere bhaiya bhi tujhe bohot pasand karte hai.Dono ek dusre ko aise ghur ghur ke dekhte ho aur aise sharmaate ho na ke kya batau aisa lagta hai jaise tum dono ki nayi nayi shaadi hui hai."The other girl who was with Nupur,said,"Tujhe pata hai Nupur agar main teri jagah par hoti na to main to abhi tak usse shaadi bhi kar chuki hoti."Nupur said,"To jaakar kar le na Sameer se shaadi,tu to kab se bethi hi hai."The girl replied,"Haaye!!Par vo to meri taraf dekhta hi nehi hai."Suhaani asked,"Tu kahe to main baat chala du?"The girl replied,"Ha ha kar de na,meri to kismat hi sawar jaayegi."Nupur said,"Abhi ye sab choro aur chalo class ka time ho gaya hai."The girls left from there towards their class.

The girl whom Mayank used to like was Nupur,Nupur Bhushan.She was Suhaani's best friend alongwith her sister Indira.Nupur and Indira's family is also having a tragic life.Their mother married for the second time when Nupur was very small with the intention of giving her a father,after her own father's death.At first the man used to behave just like a father with her but as the girls grew up,that man's true intentions started coming into light.As Nupur was very beautiful her step father started casting his bad eye on her.Indira was that man's and Nupur's mother's daughter that is Nupur's half sister.Earlier Nupur used to love spending his time with her father but later on she started becoming afraid of him and didn't want to return home after college.At home,after returning she used to lock herself in her room and only used to come out while having food and never used to stay alone with her father.Nupur used to be the happiest person on the earth when she used to go to college and when her step father was not at home.Nupur also said that to her mother but her mother was very scared of her step father because he used to be violent with her often after drinking and when he was newly married to their mother,he used to do marital rape of their mother and Indira was the result of one of such marital rapes.Out of extreme fear and the tension of her kids' future,Indira and Nupur's mother used to keep quiet.Though Indira was that man's daughter but she used to love Nupur like her own sister and hated her father like anything due to his attitude towards Nupur and her mother.The man used to be very polite and well behaved whenever Indira was nearby as he didn't want to be in her bad books.Among the sisters,Nupur was a bit reserved one and Indira was just opposite to Nupur.

While returning home,Suhaani said to Nupur,"Dekh Nupur main seriously keh rahi hu ke mere bhaiya aur tu jab ek dusre ko pasand karti hi hai to shaadi kyu nehi kar lete?Mera bhai dikhne mein bhi achcha hai aur kamaata bhi achcha hai.Bohot khush rakkhega tujhe."Indira said,"Kamsekam mera hi chakkar chala dena apne Sameer bhaiya ke saath."Suhaani replied,"Thik hai main aaj tere rishtey ki baat karungi."When they reached outside the college gate,Mayank stopped his bike just in front of Nupur.On seeing each other,Nupur and Mayank both were shocked and both together uttered,"Sorry!!"Indira and Suhaani both were giggling looking at them.Both Mayank and Nupur angrily eyed on them and then Suhaani said,"Ye lo bhaiya abhi aapki hi baate ho rahi thi aur aap yaha aa gaye.Bohot lambi umar hai aapki,Nupur to aapko hamesha yaad karti rehti hai."Nupur,in or der to change the topic said,"Main chalti hu mujhe thore ghar ke samaan kharidne hai."Nupur was about to leave when Suhaani stopped her and gave a paper to Mayank and said,"Bhaiya ye lijiye hamaare ghar ka kuch saamaan jaakar le aaiye."Mayank made a face and said,"Ye sab mujhe kyu de rahi hai,ye ghar ke saamaan ka ye sab to tera kaam hai na,mujhe ye sab kyu thamaa rahi hai?"Suhaani replied,"Arey bhaiya aaj mujhe na indira ke saath kahi aur jaana hai aur phir Sameer bhaiya bhi toi abhi garage mein hai tabhi aap yaha aaye hai,to please aap hi lekar aaiye na."Mayank said,"Mujhe kaam hai bohot aur phir mujhe ye sab nehi aata hai karna."Suhaani replied,"Koi baat nehi aapki madat ye Nupur kar degi vo bhi to ghar ka saamaan hi lane ja rahi hai.Hai na Nupur?"Both Suhaani and Indira again giggled.Mayank said,"Main ye sab kuch bhi nehi karne waala hu Suhaani tu khud hi karna,main ja raha hu."Suhaani stopped her brother again and warned,"Bhaiya agar aap yaha se jaakar seedha ghar ka saamaan kharidne nehi gaye na to main aaj raat ko aapko khaana nehi dungi,yaad rakkhiyega."Mayank was about to say something but could not say anythingbecause he knew her sister's anger and said,"Thik hai thik hai jaata hu."He looked at Nupur and then in a hesitataing tone,said,"Market ke...bahaar...milte hai..."He started his bike and then Suhaani said,"Bhaiya aap isey apne saath bhi to lekar ja hi sakte ho na.Tu ja na bhaiya ke saath."Saying she almost forced Nupur to get up on Mayank's bike and then while she was searching for something to hold,Suhaani put Nupur's hand on Mayank's shoulder and then said,"Le ab nehi geeregi."Mayank was getting so embarrassed and Nupur was blushing like hell and then Mayank asked Suhaani,"Ho gaya tera??Ab main jaau??"Suhaani nodded her head and giggled and Mayank left.

CHAPTER - 3

Edited by -Paulomi- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Wow
mayu-nupz jodi
I love sameer and indira too
Loved the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: hasiniangel

Wow

mayu-nupz jodi
I love sameer and indira too
Loved the update


thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Superb update.
Already waiting for the next update.

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