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Paulomi Debnath

@-Paulomi-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

😃Hello!!😃

😆I was always there so no welcoming back to me!!😆

😛Iam going to start another story,but hey not now,after the ending of IM and M3 when I'll restart my other stories,with them there will be one update per week.😛

☺️This is actually my dream story,a story which contains,high voltage suspense thrill, action, twists, mystery,confusion everything.In short it will be a total roller coaster ride of Bhool Bhulaiya and this will be probably the longest story of my life.☺️

😊There will be two parallel stories of SARA (Sameer & Indira from HD) & MAYUR,former will be there in the present and the latter will be there in the past.😊

😳But Mayur fans dont get upset,I promise you wont be disappointed.Just that you have to trust me,I have always listened to you but this time,you have to listen to me.Please thats a request.😳

😃Thats what I can say now but nothing more than that.So please fasten your seat belts and enjoy the ride.😃

😉I have not made the banner actually I didn't find any suitable imagination and there is also a secret reason behind it.😉

[ Actually a story on SARA & MAYUR was requested to me by FARIA,who has now became a non regular reader😡but still Iam fulfilling her wish as you know my heart is so big ]

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Paulomi Debnath

@-Paulomi-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

CONCEPT :- The concept of the story is that it is a crime drama,which will start from the investigation of a murder by protecting the only eye witness of that crime.This investigation will lead to a massive conspiracy which will be a matter of countrywide red light.No one but only a single cop has the the ability and stamina to stop this with many secrets related to his life being unfolded in the procedure.

INDEX :-

CHAPTER - 1 PAGE - 7.

CHAPTER - 2 PAGE - 12.

CHAPTER - 3 PAGE - 18.

CHAPTER - 4 PAGE - 23.

CHAPTER - 5 PAGE - 27.

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

woow...another story on my favourite couples...waiting to read it...and am sure u r gonna rock as usual...

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely Concept !! Do Continue Soon !!

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dpro

@dpro

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Wow - a new FF
Cool😎
Waiting for update😃

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Paulomi Debnath

@-Paulomi-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dpro
Wow - a new FF
Cool😎
Waiting for update😃

thanks

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Paulomi Debnath

@-Paulomi-

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya258
Waiting fr Update 😃

thanks

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shimu1

@shimu1

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome yaar
please update first part soon

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Pallluuu- Hal ALLAH
a new FF- and that's too on MAyur and Sara
it would be awesome jani
thank u so much for bringing Mayur and sara in one frame
i liked ur concept- thrill, twist, confusion , romance - ufff i m really very happy
bur i couldn't get one thing that Sara will b in present and mayur will be in past- how and why?sara r mayur ek sathe kaj korbe na?
Mayur k past a dili keno?😭😭
character sketch dile hoito ektu bujhte partam
kintu kichui bujhte parchi na
any way waiting yaar
jaldi update kor