SaJan OS ...SomeOne Special..! Completed :) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabulous OS meeri...Starting was very Touchy...but at last Happy ending...Sajan confession was very nice...and the best thing of this OS was...first time ever i think...Sheena in Positive Role😆
Thanks for the Pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
beautiful os 😳
well penned.. 😃 loved it ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Mahiii

Wow marie very nice OS... it had everything in one shot! lovely... thanks for the PM dear :))))))))



Thank You Mahi <3

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Part-2...

Confrontation...fight..hurt...fear to lose again...desperation to hold for ever...confession...love...passion...togetherness
forever...
Haye Marie..ye tumne kya likh dala 😳



Thank you so much api ! I'm glad you enjoyed <3

Originally posted by: SwaNia_2

Yayyy, happy ending. I like happy endings in fiction, the only place where we can decide. Small MU's cleared by both, firstly by accepting that each was wrong in the behaviour, no ego clashes ever. Then, a heart to heart talk, a frank, open talk, and there we go, all MU's cleared, happies endings. That was SaJan. Thanks Marie for updating and ending the story on a happy note.



Thank you di.. Good to see your happy comment ! I liked them too !! My pleasure ..Your comment is a treat to read :)



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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Fabulous OS meeri...Starting was very Touchy...but at last Happy ending...Sajan confession was very nice...and the best thing of this OS was...first time ever i think...Sheena in Positive Role😆

Thanks for the Pm



Thank you rija di ! After long time reading your comment ! Glad to see you here !

Originally posted by: aashizin

woww simply wonderful OS 👏👏 u penned down superbly 👏👏



Thank You Ashi di <3 Felt great seeing you here <3

Originally posted by: juhi_sajan

finally mere sajan khush ho gaye😃
toh ab me bhi khush ho gayi😃
lovely update marie, tfs



Thank you juhi <3

M hapy too <3

Originally posted by: VruShanRashi

beautiful os 😳
well penned.. 😃 loved it ❤️



Thank you <3 Welcome here :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Really nice~~
Marie 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Sweetheart aren't you tired of getting praised again and again? 😉😆 I mean like wow, girl how do you manage to do it every single time? Sooo impressed by your skills. This piece is for sure one of the best pieces that I have read ever. Loved it to the core.
And the best thing about your write-ups are that you manage to grip your readers till the end. A tense start following with a theme of separation to a happy end this is your work.
Sajan are special for each other that's for sure.😳 The way they love each other no one ever can. Their unconditional love and care towards each other from the point where Samrat saved his Chashmish from drowning in the pool till the time he confessed it to her...the love was always there...he just realized it a bit late. He is a slow learner 😛 And what to say about my Gunjan...she is a gem of a person...sacrificing nature and caring for her loved one is her trait...seeing everyone happy around her is what she does all the time. Even she liked Samrat from the start. Love was bound to happen between them.
You took us on a roller coaster ride through this brilliant stuff!! MJHT yaad a gaya. hayyee mere Sajan I wish MJHT 3 a jaye. Uff!!
The situation and the way you described their feelings was an absolute delight to watch. Keep it up!!
Still in Sajan mode after reading this.❤️ That Sheena ugh hate her but still she was a bit better here. Phew at least did something nice.
I loved the way how Gunjan expressed her grief on seeing Samrat like that awww. 😭😭 Gunjan and Benji are the duo that I always adore. Hats off to their friendship. 👏 Samrat's pain was too evident as his Chasmish left him. Truly made for each other. Finally her efforts bore fruit and Samrat responded. Loved how she poured it all out at last and her confession made Samrat wake up from the long dead sleep. He was living finally. The realization on seeing Samrat back in their lives she was on 7th heaven. Awww she truly needed him.
The best part was how they talked out about everything...every single thing. It was painful yet beautiful leading to a beautiful confession. Aww. 😳
It was sweet and just januable finally Samrat got the courage to accept his feelings for her and they were bonded for eternity. The journey came to a full circle I must say.
Love u for more now for writing this. Btw who is the special friend for whom you wrote it?😃 I want to know that who is so lucky to claim this OS with you.
Happy now? I hope so 😉 you are!! 🤗




Edited by HSFA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: HSFA

Sweetheart aren't you tired of getting praised again and again? 😉😆 I mean like wow, girl how do you manage to do it every single time? Sooo impressed by your skills. This piece is for sure one of the best pieces that I have read ever. Loved it to the core. Sweetie you know i don't like praises n i don't write for praises too 😆.. I m glad i did impress you 😳 Thank You Sweets <3

And the best thing about your write-ups are that you manage to grip your readers till the end. A tense start following with a theme of separation to a happy end this is your work.
Sajan are special for each other that's for sure.😳i m happy i didn't ruin the pace of the story ..gladly the way i had imagine to write this OS it came out absolutely the way i wished (: The way they love each other no one ever can. Their unconditional love and care towards each other from the point where Samrat saved his Chashmish from drowning in the pool till the time he confessed it to her...the love was always there...he just realized it a bit late. He is a slow learner 😛 And what to say about my Gunjan...she is a gem of a person...sacrificing nature and caring for her loved one is her trait...seeing everyone happy around her is what she does all the time. Even she liked Samrat from the start. Love was bound to happen between them. These two characters make me fall for them again n again ! i still fantasize these two ! Such amazing characterization . The way Gunjan was calm Samrat was energy.. Gunjan was music Samrat was song <3I love the way how they complete each other <3 Realization and Confession always took long when you have such amazing best friend at stake... Not everyone is lucky to have their best friends as soul-mates (:
You took us on a roller coaster ride through this brilliant stuff!! MJHT yaad a gaya. hayyee mere Sajan I wish MJHT 3 a jaye. Uff!! I wish with MoNaya n better storyline 😆
The situation and the way you described their feelings was an absolute delight to watch. Keep it up!! Thank you :)
Still in Sajan mode after reading this.❤️ That Sheena ugh hate her but still she was a bit better here. Phew at least did something nice. I always thought her character would be nice but truly i hate her so much 😡
I loved the way how Gunjan expressed her grief on seeing Samrat like that awww. 😭😭 Gunjan and Benji are the duo that I always adore. Hats off to their friendship. 👏 Samrat's pain was too evident as his Chasmish left him. Truly made for each other. Finally her efforts bore fruit and Samrat responded. Loved how she poured it all out at last and her confession made Samrat wake up from the long dead sleep. He was living finally. The realization on seeing Samrat back in their lives she was on 7th heaven. Awww she truly needed him. Samrat-Gunjan-Benji ah i love these three together ! they were fun and amazing friends ! Wish they could write storyline including these three it would have been amazing to see how they explore Samrat-Gunjan ,Samrat-Benji and Gunjan-Benji Relationship.. It would have been fun to see the depth of their friendship..
The best part was how they talked out about everything...every single thing. It was painful yet beautiful leading to a beautiful confession. Aww. 😳
It was sweet and just januable finally Samrat got the courage to accept his feelings for her and they were bonded for eternity. The journey came to a full circle I must say.
Conversation .. pour your heart out thats what sajan did every single time thats what made me innocent n sweet <3
Love u for more now for writing this. Btw who is the special friend for whom you wrote it?😃 I want to know that who is so lucky to claim this OS with you.
Happy now? I hope so 😉 you are!! 🤗I love you too <3 I 'm much happy seeing this comment .. Thank You !



Edited by MoNayaAshiq4evr - 11 years ago

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