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Posted: 11 years ago
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heey guyzz i m writing for a first time hope u all will like it ..
Epiosde 1 :

A boy in early 30 was completing up his work in a office when he get a call from his best friend samrat

Samrat:oyye joru k gulam kaha hain tu aaj dinner karne ghar aaja mjhe pata hain teri pyari biwi nahi hain

Aurr jab tak wo waps nahi aa ajti tu humare sath hi dinner karega

Mayank: bhai I don't think main aa paunga office me kaam bht jyada hain and you know maine extra time karne ka decide kia hain kynki bass abb kuch mahine aurr bache ahin and main suse sab kuch dena chata hu apna time bhi to abhi mjhe kaam kar lene de

Samrat :dekh agar sirf meri baat hoti to sayad main maan bhi jaat but ye teri behen aurr meri biwi hain na isse hum dono anhi taal sakte so itzz better tu aaja

Mayank : Hmm gunjan ki baat hain to aan padega yar waise bhi iss time main kissi se war k mood me nahi hu chal byee will meet u in 2 hrs

Samrat sensed the sadness in his voice and smiled this two Mayank and nupur best couple in the world .they wil fight when they are together but will miss each other even if they are seprated for a second .Their love is incomparable they have faught so many battles to be with each other but ya finally the made it their love made it they are happly married and that too from last 4 years.

Mayank who was raping up his work when his mobile rang and flashed the no. which he so wanted now yaa his wife nupur called him who was at her Mother's home for her delivery . she was 7 month's pregnant and mayank left her to her mother's house for her better care because he knew he will be so much bussy in his work which he has to complete in coming 2 months after hat he will give all his time to 2 most important person of his life he came at yesterdat night alny after leaving them at her mother's place but it seems it ahs been year that he did not talked to her mayank picked up a call and heasrd the most beautifull voice of the univers

Nupur : to khadus kaam kar rhe ho na yahi check akrne k liye phone kiya tha yahi bol k mjhe bheja hain naa yaha ki tumhe kaam hain to kam hi karna rat bhar main bhi dekhti hu aaj gahr kaise jaate ho tum chod dia mjhe yaaha pata nahi kya maje milte hain mjhse tumhe door jake with that tear came out of her eyed and her voice got choked..

Mayank : sona plzz rona band karo plzz u know na main tmhe rote huei nahi dek sakta plzz babu tum mere uppar chiila lo plzz lekin ro mat varna humara baby kya bolega kitni rondi mummy hain uski

Nupur : tum mera majak banna rhe ho Mayank ek to mjhe akela chod dia uppar se majak bana rhe ho

Mayank: Sona mai akha majak bna rha hu main to wahi bol rha hu jos sach hain aurr sab ladkiya apne ghar jaane ko roti hain aurr tum gahr jaake roti ho issi liye kahta hut um ajeeb ho kahi tumahre gahr wale tumhe sata to nahi rhe mjhse dahej ki mang to nahi karenge naa ...

Nupur : yaa she smiled on his worst joke but what to do only he can make her smile her love. Sona I m missing u plzz jaldi se mjhe wapas le jao

Mayank : sweto mjhe bhi tumse alag hona achha nahi lagta but this is for our future humare aurr humare baby k liye kar rha hu sab bass 2 mahine main sara kam finish kar dunga use bhi akm time lagega aurr uske baad no over time sirf 9-6 ki job janu please mera sath do...

Nupur : Hmm I know mayank soory maine tumhare uppar chillaya love u jaan and please abb tum gahr jao 9 baj rhe hain abhi tumhe samrat k yaha jaana hain dinner karne then tum gahr bhi jaoge niklo abhi office se turant.

Mayank : hmm to tumne kaha tha samrat se kya jarurat thi iski sona..

Nupur : dekho kis chig ki ajrurat thi kiski nahi main tumse nahi puchingi samjhe wife hu amin tumhari so jao auu wo karo jo maine kaah main bhi to tumhari baar man rhi hu..

Mayank : jaisi agaya aapki Boss byee sona love u...

Nupur: bye tc and love u sweto... dinner kark call me na jaan

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sreevijayan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very cute start...pls update the next part soon...loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratulation dear
thank u so much for starting a Mayur FF
beautiful start
plz do cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
loved it
plz update next part soon
sorry my like button isnt working
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats dear on starting the ff.. welcum to the writers club... hope u flourish as a writer...


it was a very sweet and cute update... looking foward for the story aur yeah kya tu ny tu do months k separation program bana ker rekha hai mayur k...

best of luck n keep it up..
thanks for the pm
wonderful start
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woww lovely start dear..very nice
Nupur is pregnant:-D n yeh kiya mayank oska pass nhi h...
Continue soon..n plz next time pm me 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start. plz pm me when you update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely. Continye soon. Plz pm me

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