Khuda Jaane k Main Fida Hoon...k ban gaye ho tum mere Khuda...

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Hey Guys. Ok so m hell nervous with this OS.😳 and excited too. Its on Monaya yes my first one on them wanted to write it long back but finally got time to pen it down.I could n't find better title than this<3

So please read it am waiting for your precious comments.
''Ugh not again! Its so annoying not to see him on time. Well he never is on time My unpunctual boyfriend".
She thought with a pout and an irritated look. She has been waiting for the past 15 minutes and still he was nowhere. She tried calling him but he didn't pick up knowing the fact that he would be scolded by her so punctual girlfriend.
After 10 minutes finally she saw him coming as usual smiling and making her go crazy on that smile but she is Sanaya Irani so can she so easily forget that her loveable boyfriend was late today?

Although she loved that he was there finally after making her wait anxiously for almost 20 minutes she camouflaged her anger and pretended not to have seen him and seeing her looking here and there Mohit smiled widely How adorable can she be? He thought and went towards her and as he approached her she almost prepared herself to bombard him with questions to which she already knows the answer.

But bad luck that Mr. Mohit Sehgal was too fast in this matter as always and so he presented her with a bouquet that was looking like a mini garden. He has almost managed to get all Sanaya's favourite flowers in it with a small card placed on it which said:

Sorry for just a bouquet because in such a short span of time I could just manage this so please accept it with a smile and you know why I came late so no apologies for that.'

Sanaya just could not believe her eyes so she read it again and this time opening her eyes widely and reading each word at least 3 to 4 times. She gave him a surprised look and after seeing his eyes staring at her with all the love she looked down. How difficult it was for her to control those tears and specially whenever he is around and does these types of stupid gestures. Stupid because they always make her cry and feel so blessed to have a person as loving as he was in her life.

Life has been so grateful to her touchwood. Mohit got worried and sat on a chair grabbing it near her to console her but was surprised to get a tight and warm hug in return and he calmed her down by patting her back and resting his other hand on her hair. They were in a public place but who cares? People will make statements and will exaggerate the adorable scene happening in front of them but when you are with a loved one then only his or her feelings are important not of others who just know how to degrade others.

After the breaking the hug Mohit cupped her face and asked.

Are you okay na baby?'

With you I am more than ok baby.'

They both smile warmly to each other. After reassuring the second time Mohit went to his seat and they ordered coffee for which they were actually there.

By the way why were you late Mr.Sehgal?

Aaa..aa...because of the traffic Miss.Irani.

Really?

Of course baby. Don't you know about the traffic of Mumbai?

No I don't know about the traffic I just know about my super fast boyfriend.'

She chuckled.

Yeah that I am.' Said in a dramatic way.

Both laughed and finally coffee was served. Both had a sip of the steaming hot coffee and were enjoying it more as they were in each other's company and due to the monsoon. They have been trying really hard to get some time for each other in this rainy reason and finally they got some. Sanaya's hyper mood got activated after it started raining because she just can't resist rains.

Mohit come on let's go.

Where?

Outside.

What? Are you kidding me?

Obviously not please let's go.

But for what Sanaya?

Of course to enjoy this lovely weather.

No we are not going anywhere.

But why? (made a sad puppy face)

I said na No and that's final.

Fine I am going you stay here my boring personality.

Not me we will stay here or will go home my cheerful personality.

Don't irritate me now baby.

You have a shooting tomorrow that too in the morning so please go home and rest.

Are you literally serious? You mean to say that was it for today? Just this coffee? Its so unfair.

If you will not go on time tomorrow then that will be unfair for you and for your fans.

How mean! (she said sitting and turing her face sideways)

Baby your health will get affected.

But...

Please baby.

You are so brutal.

I know that.

Please na. Please please please please (and her numerous pleads continued)

But for how much time?

Ummm just for a while. Now stop all this and let's leave otherwise the rain will stop.

Ah Ok Madam.

They were driving for the last 5 minutes and Sanaya was asking him to stop the car every now and then because madam wanted a place where she could enjoy freely without the intervention of any person. Suddenly she spoke.

Stop,stop,stop.

Here?

Yeah!

So what now?

What do you mean by what now? Get out of the car and let's enjoy.

Here?

Yup. (smiling like a kid who gets excited on getting his or her favourite toy)

Sanaya you have lost it and you are no getting wet in the rain.

Haww you are such a liar and you promised you will let me enjoy.

Promise? Did I?

Yeah.

No I didn't.

Can he win from her? Well technically no because she's way too smart. She got out of the car and moved here and there enjoying like a free bird. After so much time she was enjoying the rains like this just she used to do when in the boarding school. She felt so relieved away from the world,the media,the camera,the lights,the script it was just a normal girl with her boy friend enjoying every part of her life to its full extent.

Mohit was smiling adoring her as he knew that as actors they really miss these pleasures of life so he couldn't resist more and switching on the radio went outside and stood behind Sanaya. She looked back as felt his presence and smiled.

See its so fun na?

Yeah but let's do fun in my way What say? (he winks at her and she blushes lightly)

She knew what he meant by his way'. He is such a romantic na but more than that he makes her feel special at every instance. He pulled her near asking for a dance.

At least I can do a couple dance with you. So shall we?

Shut up!! Of course you can and soon you will be perfect in them.

I believe if you say so.

They were chatting when they heard the RJ after the commercial.

So guys its monsoon let's play a romantic and soulful number then for all you and especially for the lovers so that they can have the feel of being in love especially today here you go catch you after this my wonderful listeners.

The music starts...

Aaa. Aaa

They look at each. This song was so special for them so many memories were refreshed. Drowned in the pool of memories they swayed with the music.

Sajde mein yun hi jukhta hoon

Tum pe hi a ke rukta hoon.

Kya yeh sabko hota hai?

They moved to and fro remembering their masti and fun on the sets. They felt complete with each other.

Humko kya lena sabse

Tumse hi sab batein ab se

Ban gaye ho tum meri Dua

Today they were feeling the same happiness of being together because today there was no hurry it seemed as if time has stopped.

Sajde mein yun hin jhukta hoon

Tum pe hi a ke rukta hoon

Kya yeh sabko hota hai?

Time has indeed stopped and has made them lost in each other's eyes.

Humko kya lena hai sabse

Tumse hi sab batein ab se

Ban gaye ho tum meri Dua

Their eyes conveyed the immense love that they have for one another.

Khuda Jaane k main fida hoon

Khuda jaane main mit gaya

Khuda jaane yeh kyun hua hai?

K ban gaye ho tum mere Khuda

It was a promise to be always by each other's side.

The music continuing...

He twirled her making her land safely in his arms and both smiling to each other.

Ooo...ooo...

Tu kahe tou tere hi kadam

K main nishanon pe

Chalo rukun ishare pe

She danced like she did as Gunjan.

Tu kahe tou khawabon ko bana

K main bahana sa

Mila karun sarhane pe.

Mohit came behind her and hugged her passionately while as face was as radiant as the moon glowing to its full capacity.

Ho tumse hi sab dil batein seekhin

tum se hi yeh raahien seekhi

tum pe marr ke main to jee gaaya

He made her turn to his side while cupping her face and planting a small yet loving kiss on her forehead.

khuda jaane ke main fida hoon,

khuda jaane main mitt gaya,

She closed her eyes feeling so blessed and he lifted her up in his arms

khuda jaane yeh kyun hua hai,

ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda,

Then gently put her down staring at her angelic like face.

Dil kahe ke aaj tou,

Chupa lo tum ko panahon mein,

K darr hai tum ko kho doonga

They both hug each other tightly never to let go of each other feeling pleasure to be in their safest zone.

dil kahe sambhal zara

khushi ko na nazar laga,

ke darr hai main to ro doonga

After breaking the hug Mohit had tears in his eyes.

o karti hoon sau vaade tum se,

baandhe dil ke dhaage tum se,

yeh tumhe na jaane kya hua

Sanaya shaked head in negative and wipes the corner of his eyes. Assuring him with hand gestures that they are and will be always together.

khuda jaane ke main fida hoon,

khuda jaane main mitt gaya,

They hugged again.

khuda jaane yeh kyun hua hai,

ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda,

I love you'. He whispered.

sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon,

tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon,

I love you too'. She replied.

kya yeh sab ko hota hai,

hum ko kya lena hai sab se,

They slowly moved to and fro while hugging each other.

tum se hi sab baatein ab se,

ban gaye ho tum meri dua,

They remembered the beautiful days of their lives when they became official...their confession was simple but yet powerful to live with them forever.

khuda jaane ke main fida hoon,

khuda jaane main mitt gaya,

Memories become more exquisite when you share it with a very special person.

khuda jaane yeh kyun hua hai,

ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda,

They are living the most beautiful reality of their lives that there is no space for dreams touchwood!

After the song ended they broke the hug.

Thank you would be so less to pay gratitude to you but still going by the ritual thanks a lot baby for allowing me to enjoy and live my life full after so much time and for making it all the more special for us.

Aha...I should say thanks baby. Thanks a lot for coming in my life and teaching me the right way to live life,thanks for spreading colours of happiness in my life,thanks for making it worth living thanks for...

She puts lips on his fingers.

Ssshhh. That's enough. (she said annoyingly)

Huh why?

I hate you.

May I know the reason of this sudden change?

Because you always win. You always make me realize how bad I am in expressing my love. But I am proud of it as well. She declared

Proud?

Yeah because the way you express love for me no one else in the world can,the way you make me feel special no one can,the way you pamper me no one can,the way you bear my tantrums...

Now you stop it! You don't throw tantrums.

Well but some people think I do.

Then let them be because I damn care.

I am kidding baba.

By the way today you were no less haan you gave me a though competition.

I know.

Both laughs.

Now can we please leave madam?

Ummm

He glared lightly at her and she giggles.

Do I have a choice of staying here till late?

No you don't.

Hmm I know let's go then.

Yeah please because you have shooting early in the morning and for that you need rest.

Phew ok fine.

Although a bit sad as it ended a too quickly but still she had the most memorable time of her life so as she was moving ahead towards the car she jumped back and kissed Mohit on his cheek to which he smiled and kissed her back.

You are the best thing that ever happened to me.

Feelings are mutual my princess.

They sat in car and drove off having memories in their minds that would be cherished time and again.

This was an incident of the amazing couple called Monaya that despite having imperfections make a perfect couple,knowing each other's faults and accepting them as they are makes them even more adorable, changing the negatives of each other into positives is all what they do, cherishing love on each other is their routine. They are indeed special in every way possible<3

Phew wasn't it too big? 😆 Well I just couldn't stop writing I enjoyed writing so much I hope you people will be enjoying as much as I did 😳 For any mistakes please forgive me.
Anxiously waiting for the comments and likes<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fati 🤗
beautiful os

khuda jaane kitni saari memories referesh hogayi

how can monaya be so adorable

i loved the cute nok-jhoks

sanaya kiddish behaviour

mohit concern for her

there gestures

uff 🤪❤️

in monayaland now
Edited by additive_monaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chal aye.
Mine tou asey kaha jese aj hi unres milega 🤣
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Kudha Jaane k Main Fida Hoon..

This song would be always n forever for me dedicated to MoNaya/SaJan.. i instantly imagine mohit in red blazer n sanaya in White anarkali dress.. That was n would be always my fav dance sequence <3

Sanaya waiting for his boyfriend.. OMG How cute it was ..oh so wish i want to be in dat specific coffe house to watch those januable.. it was actually i feel like reading i m there any corner getting attracted by cute n adorable couple..

Mohit's entry <3 ahh loveable <3 he said sory coz he wants to manage more special for her..aww that was seriously so touchy moment <3 aww our Cute Sanaya <3 It made me remind of MoNaya mentioned about Mohit's birthday surpirses for her <3 ahh I Miss these two januables so much <3

AWWW when they call each other baby it actually skip my heart-beat lol.. totally MoNaya effect <3

Sanaya's never ending masti plans n Mohit's never ending care n concern for her..why why they are so perfect together <3 Touchwood !

I wish monaya get tiime to spent together always like this <3

AWW Kudha Janeey Songg !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UFF so Many Memories <3 this song sequence had made me to get crazier about SaJan n i remember exactly the next day i had watched all SaJan scenes LOL

aww their confessions <3 Truly Match made in heaven <3

Hayeee in MoNayaland missing them moreee.. wish we get MoNaya segment really soon n they stay bless always !!

The recent MoNaya pics were enough to make us crazy n now your OS <3 TOtally in MoNaya magic


Thank you for writing such a beautiful meaningful OS <3 LOved it amazing !!


Edited by MSluvsSI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: HSFA

Chal aye.

Mine tou asey kaha jese aj hi unres milega 🤣


i proved you wrong
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Posted: 12 years ago
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For the first and last time 😆
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Originally posted by: HSFA

For the first and last time 😆


dont we so over-confident madam pehle bhi galat prove kiya hai abhi bhi kia hai aur aage bhi karungi
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Originally posted by: additive_monaya


dont we so over-confident madam pehle bhi galat prove kiya hai abhi bhi kia hai aur aage bhi karungi

We'll see hayyee sajan 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fati what a beautiful OS i was smiling the whole time reading it it was just so sweet and romantic and beautiful just like our MONAYA and the song hayeee brought back all the memories of sajan khuda jaane sequence. U wrote it very beautifully sis just adored it hayee wish we could read/see monaya's day in real life too anyways loved all the scenes u wrote from her being fake angry coz he came late and and then Mohit bringing the flower haye romantic and then the fun sanaya was having to der romantic dance and words just loved it. Good job Fati so proud u wrote it in 1 seat haha kudos
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ommmggg Fatima 🤗
this is such an amazing piece of work

loved it
its so so so awesomeee

you wrote so many amazing memories of them together

that custom made bouquets...mohit bring for sanaya...aww that was so sweet

and you described their feeling so beautifully

thanx for the pm

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