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Originally posted by: BabajiKaThullu

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Finally read it all, I must say Radhi you've grown so much as a writer by leaps and bounds 👏 Honestly I wasn't expecting such a mature and complicated lovestory from you 😆 But you have surprised me big time, wait a go girl! And as I promised I'll give you my review of it.
The story: Okay so at first when I read the concept, I'd say I was a little intrigued and a bit disappointed as well 😆 Intrigued because I liked how the story will be in flashbacks and I wanted to know what was samrat hiding from gunjan and what exactly happened to him? Disappointed cause you already made them as husband and wife so I thought that we aren't gonna get their love story 😭 Which btw I was very wrong about, we do get the lovestory 😃 So that complain goes out the window. And you know the other thing I'm disappointed about 😉 😕 No need to mention it here but I feel it could be fitted into the story after an intense emotional scene. Tell me what do u think about it? 😆. Also I loved how the story switches from the past to the present, that makes it quite unique and refreshing, hats off to you for handling it so well 👏 Also I loved the humor quotient to it, which is so you 😆 Some of the jokes really cracked me up 🤣 hope you continue it further as well. The emotional scenes are also nicely written, I love how you break out of the too much mushiness by adding a little humor to it, otherwise it could become dreary, but yeah expecting a full on kjo movie style emotional scene towards the end.
The characters: okay I have to admit I'm completely in love with your samrat ❤️ because he is so much like me 😆 In mjht I used to relate to gunjan but here I completely relate to samrat. I love that he is smart, sharp, intelligent and sarcastic nowadays hardly any heroes are like that 😭 Also I completely loved his sense of humor. And my heart went out to him when I got to know his life story. Really such as awesome, inspiring and strong character. You totally deserve an applause for writing it.
My second most favorite character is gunjan, no not her 😆 It's gunjan's dad, I just love that guy! The fulfilled father in law, loved his bond with samrat especially the fb chat 😆 I for some reason imagined rishi kapoor as him, hope to see more of the duo in the story.
Coming to gunjan, well she is pretty much gunjan 😆 And how come gunjans in most of the FFs are doctors? Maybe coz she is smart hehe. I like that she is sweet, shy and innocent. But she cries too much yaar, it gets irritating sometimes. I'd really like to see her as a brave and daring wife who will be the pillar of strength for her husband, instead of relying on him too much. I hope to see some growth into the character while keeping the real essence of it intact.
Well that's all for my review my final verdict is that I really love it and looking forward to reading. Also this might be my longest reply ever 😆 I don't like typing too much but with an ff like this I'm forced to. Awesome job Radhi!!!!
Also plz pm me the link for black and white,it's my fav ff but I haven't read it in a while coz I couldn't find it 😆 And continue soon both of them, itne bade reply ke baad I think I owe you an update 😆

Originally posted by: Tinkerbelle88

Finally read it all, I must say Radhi you've grown so much as a writer by leaps and bounds 👏 Honestly I wasn't expecting such a mature and complicated lovestory from you 😆 But you have surprised me big time, wait a go girl! And as I promised I'll give you my review of it.
The story: Okay so at first when I read the concept, I'd say I was a little intrigued and a bit disappointed as well 😆 Intrigued because I liked how the story will be in flashbacks and I wanted to know what was samrat hiding from gunjan and what exactly happened to him? Disappointed cause you already made them as husband and wife so I thought that we aren't gonna get their love story 😭 Which btw I was very wrong about, we do get the lovestory 😃 So that complain goes out the window. And you know the other thing I'm disappointed about 😉 😕 No need to mention it here but I feel it could be fitted into the story after an intense emotional scene. Tell me what do u think about it? 😆. Also I loved how the story switches from the past to the present, that makes it quite unique and refreshing, hats off to you for handling it so well 👏 Also I loved the humor quotient to it, which is so you 😆 Some of the jokes really cracked me up 🤣 hope you continue it further as well. The emotional scenes are also nicely written, I love how you break out of the too much mushiness by adding a little humor to it, otherwise it could become dreary, but yeah expecting a full on kjo movie style emotional scene towards the end.
The characters: okay I have to admit I'm completely in love with your samrat ❤️ because he is so much like me 😆 In mjht I used to relate to gunjan but here I completely relate to samrat. I love that he is smart, sharp, intelligent and sarcastic nowadays hardly any heroes are like that 😭 Also I completely loved his sense of humor. And my heart went out to him when I got to know his life story. Really such as awesome, inspiring and strong character. You totally deserve an applause for writing it.
My second most favorite character is gunjan, no not her 😆 It's gunjan's dad, I just love that guy! The fulfilled father in law, loved his bond with samrat especially the fb chat 😆 I for some reason imagined rishi kapoor as him, hope to see more of the duo in the story.
Coming to gunjan, well she is pretty much gunjan 😆 And how come gunjans in most of the FFs are doctors? Maybe coz she is smart hehe. I like that she is sweet, shy and innocent. But she cries too much yaar, it gets irritating sometimes. I'd really like to see her as a brave and daring wife who will be the pillar of strength for her husband, instead of relying on him too much. I hope to see some growth into the character while keeping the real essence of it intact.
Well that's all for my review my final verdict is that I really love it and looking forward to reading. Also this might be my longest reply ever 😆 I don't like typing too much but with an ff like this I'm forced to. Awesome job Radhi!!!!
Also plz pm me the link for black and white,it's my fav ff but I haven't read it in a while coz I couldn't find it 😆 And continue soon both of them, itne bade reply ke baad I think I owe you an update 😆

Oks its one of the best compliment i have ever get 😃 as a writer I always get lotsa complements but I have grown up as a writer is something i always wanted to get from my readers but finally i earned it 😆

Why didn't you expect any mature Love Story from me? 😛

The Story: well for that I don't need to think much as I already knew whole story as its Real Life based Story. Yes, Its you this is not my Imaginary Love Story its Real Life Story of Some one. I just penned down all scenes. Can say just wrote story of Someone's Life. Thats it.

The Characters : Samrat : Its not Imaginary Character as i said above its very much real life character I just named it 'Samrat'. That person is very close to my heart so i am just writing down his story and its very EASY for me to write character of Samrat. as i have known that person so closely. But Gunjan: well its damn tough character to write. for me i have to think 100 times before writing her character and her dialogues.. I know the reason behind your loving Samrat. but Gunjan is THE MOST IMPORTANT person in Samrat's life. and her character is most difficult character for me.. and Yes its also very much real life character. this is just starting of Gunjan's character. just wait and watch about her character in future.She played very much important role in Samrat's life and how much loveable she is. you will come to know soon. right now i am writing story of A MALE. Not Bichari poor Female oriented Story. so you should have loved Samrat. but Gunjan is not less you will love her too 😆 She is DOCTOR? well its not typical not because she is smart and intelligent and blah blah. 😆 because this is REAL LIFE story and that GIRL is very much Doctor in real life too 😆 Don't call Samrat a Hero he is just simple human being . he just like to do things on his own way without caring much about others 😛 and how will this affect Gunjan well you have to see next updates. I was so sure that you will love Samrat. and i am sure too that You will hate Samrat in future. as He is good & Bad as real life normal human being.
I hope in future you will Samrat's mother very much 😆 Don't judge Gunjan yet thats all I wanna say as her character is not as simple as you think 😛

Oh yah you write a long reply 😆 I will surely update soon 😛

It's true you have really grown as a writer, there is a massive difference in your writing style in this ff compared to the previous ones and I'm certainly not complaining about it. Why I didn't expect a more intense and complicated story like this from you? Well I should've if I would've known you've come such a long way 😆 That's means I'll expect a lot in the future, hope you're ready for it.
No way! It's real 😲 No wonder it's so relatable and some of the events in Samrat's life like childhood abuse and molestation, why didn't I think of it before? Ofcourse it has to be real, unfortunately it is an ugly reality what you wrote, I applaud you for penning it down 👏 My heart literally went out to him then. Needless to say that I love your samrat, and yes he is just a normal humanbeing, I'm just used to the word hero 😆 Hence I used it without thinking, but I did say I relate to him so that pretty much makes him normal. And no I won't hate him ever no matter what you throw my way 😆 Because I see where he is coming from, you just can't blame him after all he is been through. One more thing after knowing that samrat is real, I have a lot of respect for the person on whom he is based.
And wow gunjan is based on a real doctor! I'm also going to be one so it's pretty cool then. Yeah I think her character will go through a lot of growth, as she is the one who will heal him after all. I do feel for her too because it's difficult to deal with the skeletons in someone's closet. She will face a lot of emotional trauma in dealing with all his issues, it's not gonna be easy for her I know, looking forward to those scenes. Yeah it must be very difficult to write on her behalf coz she is not the victim here like samrat, it is easier to write for people who are suffering as you can express a lot here than for the ones who empathize with the sufferer as penning down their thoughts and conveying their feelings could be quite difficult, but kudos to you as you've conveyed it pretty well so far.
And I'm looking forward towards loving gunjan's mom, her dad is already in my favorite list 😆

Originally posted by: ..Daffodil..

Babaji pehle ek update toh de do 😆

de diya check page 64

kidhar hai update?🤓 u have not even added link in d pm..

Originally posted by: BabajiKaThullu

de diya check page 64

oh 64 pe hi continue kela aahe..