With Your Ocean Eyes Heal Me Forever NEW update on 71 - Page 19

firstly toh am loving this story so much

can't describe that feeling in words..you are indeed an awesome writer..never ever underestimate your skill samji

Chapter 2: "Mr. I-am-sinking-still-in-the air"

title is so good👏

loved the way you wrote sam's feelings..and also of his understandable wife ki

"Kuch nahi soch rahi hu ki Jisko hamesha taliyaa sunne ki aadat thi usko ...i loved this line

"hawan karenge." shit ye mere friend ka status tha and i was laughing like a maniac Samrat turned and softly said. Sarcasm at best.

"ek chiz to sahi bolo... Muh Laal nahi kala karvaa naa bolte hai.." she rolled her eyes.

"Agar tumhaari Lip stick LAAL hai to mera muh LAAL hi hogaa naa... seriously tum mera muh KAALA karvane ke liye Black Lip stick to nahi kharidi naa?" he looked at her with doubtful look.

omggg kamini kaha se aate hai tuje yeh ideas

"you know what India ka Law aur ladkiyon ka awww.. dono hi samaj ke bahar hai." Again Mr. Samrat The Shergill is back.

i totally agree with samrat

"lambi raat ko agar choti karni hai to so jana chahiye ,raat ka ehsaas bhi nahi satata aur subah ka intezaar bhi"

damn it

how the hell these lines get into your brain 😡

they are so beautiful 😳

samrat - Gosh I still can't understand this girl.

kinjal - and i can't understand you girl

i totally loved the way you portrayed gunjan's feelings for why she's doing this..and also the her understandable nature😳

Every morning starts with praying to God. having peaceful breakfast and waving good bye

i seriously thought ke aisa hi hoga

well same thing goes for these two, 'Samrat' & 'Gunjan' . Yup everyday Gunjan have to pray to Samrat to wake him up on TIME. And of course they always have peaceful breakfast bole to pin drop silence because Mr. Disaster had always created mess then fight then silent treatment means peaceful breakfast and lastly good bye say what.

tu na twist ki maharani hai

bygod can't imagine uss lines ka meaning ye hoga

gunjan's threat was awesome koi bhi pati saare kaam fatafat kar lega after that.

"Chaaiii me dooba biscooot ho gaya ... mein to awai awai awai loot gaya.." Samrat was singing song while dipping biscuit in tea to irritate gunjan. Actually it was his favourite pass time.

tu na muje maar daalegi

& that kissing scene was so hilarious

good job

gosh kitne gaane gayega aaj yeh 😆

"Kaise kahen kisse kahe kuch samajh nahi aata zindegi kaise uljha deti hain kuch panno ko, ke akshar milna mushkil ho jaate hain.. "

again a beautiful line

omg never thought the boy with silver spoon will have to go through all this

am literally in tears right now..which are about to shed😭😭

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Chapter 3:"Mr. I-have-seen-all-crimes-and-i-am-pure" (another side of Childhood)

this story is really unbelievable 😲😲😲

am shocked beyond limits after reading it😲

Chapter 4: "Mr. my-Life-is-screwed-still-I-am-ME" (fighting with life stories)

Career ruined - checked

No money - checked

Have nothing - checked

no friends - checked

no family - checked

no love/care/relations checked

no dreams- checked

hope crashed - checked

no trust - checked

no other option - checked

Not good enough - checked

no reason to live - CHECKED

no words for this list

absolutely no words👏

okay how did you managed to write it

gosh these feeling is killing me now..cant even imagine wat all samrat has to go through his childhood 😲😭

"And... Have to end my life."Gunjan closed his diary. No Samrat Couldnt do it no..

exactly he can't end his life like that

i just wanna hug you right now

*tight bone crashing hug*

trust me am always there if you ever need a shoulder to cry on...

"With your Ocean Eyes Heal Me Forever"

and i always love how you end the chapters with this line

too good man👏

Chapter 5: "Mr. I-am-pressure-cooker-and-I-can't help-me " (f**ked life stories)

😆😆am waiting to know how you gonna write this one now😃

you r really good at writing emotional stuff sachii 😊

do i hav to say how much i love those amazingly mind blowing mr & mrs names you write 😳<3

extremely sorry for the late reply