Don't let me go...[Updated at Pg.43 24th dec 2014] - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Phew finally read a long update 😆 but I have to say that it was worth it as I always say 😉

I enjoyed it thoroughly 👏👏👏👏👏 Just brilliant piece of writing.
As expected from an amazing writer like you ⭐️ I know k itne se comment se tumhara pet kahan bharey ga 🤣 bechare merey aunty uncle 😛
Khair I will also not stop here coz u know I can't without giving analysis to your brilliant work use ruin kar deti hoon na 🤣
Anyways main baaz nahi ayun gi.I will not say that I loved it coz u know my sentiments don't you?
The convo between the girls seems so familiar na 😉 well duniay goal hai so kahin mulaqat ho gayi hogi.
Awww my Sajan everything just reminded me off the old good times of MJHT!! 😳 The teasing,the love,the care,the attention,the friendship everything between Sajan is so so magial <3
They redefine love and I am reliving my Sajan again thanks a lot jaani for writing it so beautifully <3 <3 Can't thank u enough for this I love u a lot bas 😳🤗
Waisey ti you mentioned all Sajan scenes but came to my mind were
All their rain sequences. Rain connects to them at least I feel that way 😳<3
Be it the Adnan Sami popular song Salam-e- Ishq or the hot Zindagi Do Pal Ki ☺️
Their dance on Khuda Jaane that song connects me with them<3 So soulful and romantic<3 Its every line just makes me imagine Sajan dancing and I feel the song<3
Their second date ☺️ uff, the first bike sequence, obvoiously as u mentioned the famous gajar ka halwa scene. 😳 it was adorable. As u mentioned pani puri the valentines scene came in my mind<3 The rose giving scenes so many came as flashbacks<3
I loved the classroom scene totally Sajanish, the way they teased each other. Hpw adorable can they get? the scene before the library and even after it. Madly in love with Sajan all over again<3
Their concern for each other is so evident the flying kiss and the flirt scene bang on girl!! U nailed it. 👏👏 I could imagine each and every scene and the credit goes to u ad of course to my Sajan after all <3 😆
The basket ball scene awww. The trio once again saath saath!!
I so love Sajan and Benji and was so so happy that you gave him imp too. Their friendship is beyond words too good to be true<3 😳
Uff that girl is so freaking jealous and rude 😡 but Samrat's reply made it up for that and then their dialogues were so aptly chosen<3 So lovely and out of the world.
Sajan are just way too januable and just the best!!
Samrat so loves her and so does she!! The last scene was blockbuster bas itna hi keh sakti hoon<3
Bas ya aur likhun? 😛 😆
I hope that Angel ki Sweetheat ab satisfied hai<3 😳 and next update jaldi 😆 can't wait to read ahead<3
Edited by HSFA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
nice update, I loved the flirt wala convo
update soon
..-Ayesshhaa-.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Nice update..loved it :) the flirt wala convo was really good..;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Good update, Marie, and your thoughts on some, perfect.😛 SaJan as usual, januable. In their own world, their own lovey dovey world...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
It was a beautiful update yaar..Superb! Loved it <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awesomeee update Marie {yeh ehsaan wala comment nahi hai samjhi
uff..it's very difficult to choose a name among so many great titles...
girl2- marie 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: PRIYA_luvs_MS

awesomeee update Marie {yeh ehsaan wala comment nahi hai samjhi
uff..it's very difficult to choose a name among so many great titles...
girl2- marie 😃

Arre J ki female version...
Marie is G-1...Dint u see she was drooling over Gunjan/Sanaya in the library... 😆
G-2 is actually the secret admirer of Samrat n is jealous of Gunjan...so I won't take anyone's name...AS...
GUNJAN SE JEALOUS HONA MANAA HAI !!!!

@Marie... Sonia has suggested very appropriate titles...especially..the first one...don't let me go!!
BTW...is it really a short story ??...The length of the update is telling another story..😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
hey marie superb story i loved both upd seriously loved it u penned down wonderfully 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: juhi_sajan

nice update, I loved the flirt wala convo
update soon

Originally posted by: ..-Ayesshhaa-..

Nice update..loved it :) the flirt wala convo was really good..;)

Originally posted by: SwaNia_2

Good update, Marie, and your thoughts on some, perfect.😛 SaJan as usual, januable. In their own world, their own lovey dovey world...


Originally posted by: MoNayaLover96

It was a beautiful update yaar..Superb! Loved it <3



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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Thank you😳
Edited by MSluvsSI - 12 years ago

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