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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am cross too.. why i want pmed...jaya... add me in
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is nt fair!u started writing n did'nt pm me.
i am damn angry!!!!
res.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
whenever i will update next part i will sure PM u all 😊
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Note :
my intention is not to insult any profession but i just wrote whatever happening and if any one feel offended please let me know 😊
this part is boring and i dint read it so please pardon my mistake


Part 5



Mayank left towards anjali room and he saw his dad out side her room looking at her lovingly and they both were shock to see each other, MD tried to justified his action

MD : wo wo actually tum log nupur ha nupur ke saath busy the aur anjali akeli thi isi liye mene socha ke yaha pe kisi ko to hona chahiye to main hi aa gaya looking here and there

M : in his shock state was just staring at his dad, his dad was feeling nervous he doesn't want to show him his emotional side

MD : mayank kya hua aise kyun dekh rahi ho ??? trying to be stern

M : aapko mean kuch nahi

MD : theek hain tum ab aa gaye ho to ruko yaha me jata hoon and before leaving look at anjali chupkese

M : Dad

MD stop at his place he felt so heaven listening that word DAD, it has been ages he listen that word from his son, even mayank was feeling releief and happy after saying that word DAD, its not word but its feeling its relation what they were speaking, they just want to hug each other, true they fought but they missed each other too very much but they cant becoz there is invisible gap which take place in these years, it will take time to fill that gap becoz both are hurt with each other deed. Both are right and wrong at there place.

M : apko pata hain anjali ka naam ??? kaise ???

MD : wo wo thinking while wo tumhari maa ne liya tha anjali ka naam nupur ke samane usi wajah se pata chala

Mayank knew his dad is lying but he doesn't want to make situation awkward he just nodded his head and their convo was inturptted by phone call

Nupur Room

SA : shhh beta bas chup ho jao ab aur nahi wiping her tear, beta agar tum kamzor ho jaogi to anjali ka kya hoga usko kaun sambhalega aur ghabrane wali koi baat nahi hain dekhna anjali bahut jald theek ho jayegi aur hamare saath ghar chalegi mujhpe bharosa hain na ???

N : nod her head in yes

SA : that's like a good girl kissing her forhead

N : maa mujhe anjali se milna hain ??? pleadingly

SA : nupur beta pehle tum apne aap ko sambhalo aur theek ho jao aur main tumhe khud anjali ke paas le jaugi please beta try to understand

Outside anjali room

MD : hello ha theek hain main wohi hoon haan apko lene aata hoon

Cutting call wo Dr. kapoor ka phone tha wo aa gaye hain bahar hi hain hospital ke main unhe lekar aata hoon

M : main bhi chalta hoon apke saath

MD : nahin tum yehi ruko anjali ke saath main aata hoon unhe lekar

M : nodding his head and soon he joined with doctor kapur and his dad

Nupur room

Nupur sleep on SA lap and SA was patting her head and M and MD entered to nupur room

M : nupur

SA : shhh wo so rahi hain dheere bol aur yeh hospital hain

M : slowly ok

SA can see happiness in his face and ask what ???

M : maa ek good news hain (whispering)

SA : she could not hear what did he said and signal him that she cant hear his voice

M said same thing whispering SA again couldn't listen anything and mayank repeated same tone and now irritatingly SA shouted on him

SA : kya keh raha hain jara zor se bol aur unki awaz sunakar nupur ki neend ud gayi aur wo uth gayi jhat se and SA made sorry face

N : kya hua maa ? and saw mayank there mayank mayank kya hua sab theek hain anjali to theek hain arre kuch bolo to she asked panically

M : Nupur shhh cupping her face anjali theek hain bilkul hi theek wo bahut jald apne saath chalegi ghar

Nupur was looking at his eyes to know and confirm that whatever he is saying is truth or not and saw tear in and his eyes and his eyes was showing happiness relief and finally and he understood her look and blink his eyes to make her believe that whatever he is saying is truth only no lie and she believe him and his eyes who never lied to her and she just hugged him

SA who was standing there with happiness and spread her hand on both head and they both hugged her and MD was just looking them and want to join them but he prefere to stay far away.

After breaking hug mayank tell the whole truth to them

Dr. Mehta and his team are fraud they cheated many people and earn money like that and dr. kapoor report against them and anjali is fine but still weak they just want to earn money from us so lied to us

Dr. Kapoor will be incharge of anjali case and told me that anjali will be under observation for 2 days due to her weakness thank god humein sab jaldi pata chal gaya warna pata nahi kya hota

Nupur was really scared after hearing that she can not believe her ears whatever she heard how any one can play with any one emotion and she just want to go to anjali want to take her in her arm and believe that she is fine and she got up from her bed and felt dizzy before she fall mayank hold her and made her sit on bed again

M : Nupur tum abhi bhi weak ho sambhalo apne aap ko tumhari tabiyat theek nahi please nupur sambhalo apne aapko anjali theek hain

N : mayank please mujhe anjali se milne do please

M : ok nupur pehle tum shant ho jao wiping her tears and they heard voice anjali's voice

MD brought her in room and nupur just took her and hugged her tightly and just cried and mayank just side hugged her and they were in same position.

Nupur and anjali were admitted, nupur was more weak after this incident, they got discharged after 3 days and went to there home they were feeling happy and relief and in this 3 days there family came more close to each other but still MD was keeping his distance with them and they were mostly formal towards each other.

Edited by THIS-IS-LIFE - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
this time i pm u all
and whoever are not in my buddy list send me buddy request so it will be easy PM u all 😊

sorry in advance whoever didnt got my PM 😔
Edited by THIS-IS-LIFE - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Awesome Part..
Loved it..
Great...
Mayank's Dad...
wants to be with his son and daughter-in-law but still maintaining distance...
Loved the whole chapter..

Thank god..Anjali is fine...
Ivery very nice part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
thnk god everything is fine
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
its a wonderful update ...
really nice
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
di u hvn't informed me about ur ss...
very bad
i m angry😡

bt the ss was nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
jayaaa thank u so mch for ur update sweetu
ahhh tere pm dekh kar bhaut he khusi mili mujhe...

accha sun ur update was mind blowing

Mayanks Dad knows evrything abt mayu. i mean mayank- nupur and un dono ki angel ka pal pal kahabr unko pata hai. but he dnt want to accept it. actually he loved them a lot but somehow he dont want to show it infront of them

oye maynk ne kya good news diya apne maa ko
zara mujhe bhi bata de

loved the way nupur hugged anjali and cried- a beautiful mother-daghter scene
Very nicely written jaya
awesome
keep updating

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