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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pia-

Awesome one
Do cont soon


thanks pia 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

aacha ji finally u updated
thank u so much jani
i dknot know how i missed this part- sorry jani...

anyway sweetu the update was super cute
i alwz loved S.A and Mayur scene- S.A was the best mom and MIL in the world.
loved their convo
it was fantastic
awwwsomeee

now i m waiting for mayur nok jhok

plz do update soon

aur ha thoda longgg update de dena


its ok and its not ur fault i dont PM anyone 😊
long update let see 😆

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is also filler update 😆

Part 13


In the room

Everything was decorated for newly wedded couple and it was really awkward for mayur becoz their relation they knew it very well.

M : nupur you go and change and I will clean this stuff

N : ohk and nupur rush from their to avoid anymore awkwardness

M : thank god yeh maa bhi na and clear all the stuff

Nupur arrived and mayank went for change.

M : nupur I hope you wont mind becoz I wear shorts and banyan

N : nope I don't have any problem and you don't need to change your life style becoz of me

M : same goes to you

After changing mayank came out and nupur was busy settling her belonging

N : mayank me apne kapde kaha rakhu

M : (sitting on bed) tum yeh sab chhodo kal subah karna abhi tum yaha aao

N : (awkward) she knew what is next but she was prepared for this and one day it has to come so she slowly slowly she went towards bed she was nervous, awkward

Mayank was looking at furiously and amaze to see her speed of walking

M : nupur kya hua tum itna kyun slow chal rahi ho bahut thak gayi ho kya come fast

N : haa mayank and she came fast their and stand their

M : arre khadi kyun ho baitho

N : haan

Mayank was confuse with her behavior and he checked her forehead and nupur was nervous and scared

M : tumhe fever to nahi hain aur tumhe itna paseena kyun aa raha hain itni garmi lag rahi hain wo bhi is sardi ke season me

N : kuch nahi mayank

Mayank took her hand in his and she felt shivering

M : hey nupur why are you shivering everything is all right and she started crying

N : (crying) mayank mayank I am still not ready

M : ready for what ? tumhe kahi jana hain kya ?

N : nahi mayank main abhi bhi us baat ke liye ready nahi hoon jiske liye tumne mujhe yaha bulaya

M : kyun ? arre nupur bad thodi der fir so jana, dekho nupur aaj hum nayi shuruaat kar rahe hain apni zindagi ki isi liye

N : kyunki I need sometime

M : ok nupur agar tum ready nahi ho to so jao hum kal baat karege

N : baat ? tum baat karna chahte the

M : haan lekin koi baat nahi hum kal baat karege tum rest karlo

N : ohh to tum baat karna chah rahe the mujhe laga ki

M : (confusingly) kya laga tumhe ?

N : kuch nahi chhodo bolo tum kya bolna tha

M : kyu ? tum to ready nahi thi na

N : haan pehle nahi thi lekin ab hoon

M : kya nupur tum bhi na kuch samaj nahi aata mujhe

N : wo sab chhodo aur bolo kya bolna hain

M : sure ?

N : haan baba bolo ab

M : ek minute ruko main abhi aaya, tumhare liye surprise hain

N : (excitedly) surprise ? kya hain jaldi batao

M : surprise hain nupur bata dunga to wo surprise kaise rahega ?

N : to jaona jaldi lekar aao

M : haan haan lekar aata hoon ruko

Mayank came back with gift for nupur

N : (childishly) dikhao dikhao kya laye ho

M : nahi pehle apni aankhe bandh karo

N : (making face) theek hain and spread her hand and said do ab

M : (smiling at her antics) yeh lo

Nupur opening her eyes and open her gift excitedly

N : OMG OMG thank you mayank thank you so much

M : tumhe pasand aaya

N : haan bahut bahut pasand aaya lekin main isko lagau kaha

M : jaha tumhara man kare waha

N : nupur give look to her new room main waha lagau

M : waha please nupur waha chhodkar kahi bhi laga lo

N : lekin mayank wohi best place hain jab bhi raat ko soyungi to uska face dekhkar soyungi aur subah uthungi to uska face dekh kar hi uthungi

M : lekin nupur unke baju me iski tasveer kaisi lagegi

N : kuch nahi mayank bahut acha lagega please na mayank

M : (reculuctantly) theek hain lagalo

N : awww you are good and kept that picture near einstine pic by god kitna sona lag raha hain mera shah rukh hai na mayank

M : (teasingly) haan haan nupur bahut acha lag raha hain agar tumhara SRK jaap khatam ho gaya ho to hum so jaye

N : haan good night SRK kiss on her pic

Mayank just hit on his head pagal and smile at her

N : mayank tumhe mujhse kuch baat karni thi

M : haan baitho yaha nupur did just whaterver he said

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..
Hehehe Nupur bhi na ...pata nahi kya kya sochti rehti hain..
it was too short update..
continue soon loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

nice part..

Hehehe Nupur bhi na ...pata nahi kya kya sochti rehti hain..
it was too short update..
continue soon loved it...


chhota lga tujhe 😲
nupur bhi antic hain na 😆

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part
Nupur was really crazy..
Mayur scene was awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mayur conversation was beautiful
Do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
oyeee itna jaldi updae kya
suraj kaha se nikli aj>????????????

BY GOD - believe nehi ho rahi hai ki tu- tune update kya

but whatever i loved this update

hehehehehe Nupur bhi na- bilkul pagal hai
pata nehi kya kya sochte rehte hai- agar ye mayank ko maloom apr jata na pher poor mayank ki chehra dekhne ka layak hota

lovely update

muahhh

Do update as soon as possible
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks tasnim 😊

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