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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...nupur also realized dat her drmz r her past life...interesting
luking forward

prerna_agrawal thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh.. it was such a nice update!!.. hope both confess soon... but why was the update so short... plzz write a bit longer updates... feel like reading more of this ff...

update asap!!.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update shubhs :)

finally nupur too realized her connection with dreams but why mayank is disturbed and avoiding her
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahh so so glad that Nups also knows abt hr past life now😊

Now waiting ki they fall in love again😳
Loved the part shubhu:D
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Posted: 12 years ago


Wishing all my readers a very Happy Ganesh Chaturthi. 🤗🤗

may Lord Ganesh take away all your troubles & bring lots of happiness in

your lives.

i am here with this week's update. 😃 hope you all will like it.



Part - 12






Mayank was in his room in a black vest & track pants

doing push-ups. he concentrated on the repetitive chore

to empty out his mind. A knock sounded on his door &

he looked up. door was pushed & his mom peeped in, " may

i come in Mayu ??"she asked smiling her typical 1000 watt
smile.

" good morning Maa !!! " greeted Mayank getting up &

mopping his face with a towel, " come on in ." Shilpa

walked in carrying a tray with a kettle & two cups. the

moment she walked in Shilpa could smell oil -paints which

let her know her son had been painting.

She knew it would be the case.

Shilpa kept the tray 0n a small table & took a careful look at

her son's face. she saw what she expected to see , fatigue

caused by a sleepless night. Mayank saw her looking at him

with worried eyes & he gave her a reassuring smile.

"you pour out the tea, Maa & i will washup & be back." said

Mayank going inside .
Shilpa just stood there undecided whether she should wait

for Mayank to show her the painting which had kept him up

for night or whether she should go & take a look at it .

she knew Mayank would not mind as he shared every thing

with her, his happiness, his problems ,things that troubled

him. that is why she was there in Mayank's wing early in

the morning ,to find out what was troubling him this time.

in the end curiosity won & she stepped in his studio &

gasped in awe.

she saw the latest painting resting on easel ,it was again of

Mayank's fav subject, Nupur.
This was his best painting to date. from the clothes in the

painting she could see Mayank must have painted it ,the

way Nupur looked on the day they both had gone for the

hike.

Mayank had painted Nupur sitting on a rock , her face tipped

up . *my son is so talented*,thought Shilpa with pride.

Mayank had captured Nupur exactly. the painting looked

beautiful & it felt like Nupur would start talking any second.

Nupur's eyes in the painting were life like. the mixed feeling

of love & admiration shining in her eyes was easy enough

to see. as Shilpa had seen it herself in Nupur's eyes ,she

knew it was not her son's imagination .

* so what is troubling Mayu then??* thought Shilpa.

Mayank walked in just then carrying the cups. " here you

are Maa!!!" he said handing over a cup to Shilpa. " so what

do you think??"

" its exquisite Mayu. you have captured her just so. i was

just thinking that my son is so talented." said Shilpa

smiling at Mayank.

Mayank felt a quick flash of warmth & pride at his mom's

praise. he smiled a broad smile that showed his dimples. "

thanks Maa!! " he said hugging his mom with one arm.

both sipped their tea companionably.


Shilpa set aside her cup & turned towards Mayank.she put

her palm on Mayank's cheek & asked him " so tell me whats

wrong Mayu?? you are not quite yourself for past couple

of days. whats happened ?? "

Mayank just shook his head in denial ," nothing Maa, i

am... " he trailed off at his mom 's *Don't try to fool me buddy * stare.

"drat!!!! i can never get off hiding things from you , can I

Maa ." sighed Mayank.

" you never should try to Mayu , i know my son inside out."

said Shilpa laughing.

" i don't want you to worry Maa." began Mayank.

"worrying about you is written in my job description Mayu !!

Shilpa cut Mayank off" now go ahead & tell me whats

wrong??"

" nothing is actually wrong Maa & i want it to stay that

way." said Mayank " couple of nights ago i had a dream

which reminded me of the pain , the despair of a shattered

heart.i dreamt of the day when Nupur broke off our

engagement , or should i say when Esha broke Aman's heart

along with the relationship. it came back flooding into my

heart Maa, it upset me very much. i don't want it to happen

it to me a second time . so i am staying away from Nupur

till i work it out . what if she does not feel the same way

about me ,as i do for her?? so i am taking it easy . "


Shilpa patted Mayank's cheek & holding his arm pulled him

infront of the painting. " look at this Mayu, look at Nupur's

eyes that you painted . how can anyone mistake the

feelings in them?? they are there beta,they are there for

you, i have seen them myself. and since when has my son

learnt giving up on any challenge?? i know my son will face

every adversity & come out victorious. i have every

confidence in you."

"Plus you want to know something?? Nupur also is not her

usual self for past couple of days , she misses you ,but does

not know what to do about it. " said Shilpa smiling &

hugging Mayank. Mayank hugged her back, he felt very calm

after talking to his mom.

he felt that now he could focus on his goal again.
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Edited by .SA. - 12 years ago
Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome...
loved it to the core..
loved shilpa aunty and mauank's convo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mayank and Shilpa Relation is so sweet.She is a very understanding and supportive Mother.Now waiting to see how Mayank will focus on his goal😉
Thnx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
D update was very nice..i lyk mayank and his maa's bond..i just wish the update next time is a little longer.. :-D
or a faster update may be ;-)
continue soon plz..
Auroni.92 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved mayu-shilpa aunty convo here...
Nd a req...can u make the font size a lil bigger...I feel difficulty in reading it...
Cont soon..

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