AN OS-'Behti Hawa Sa Tha Woh' FINISHED

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Am on a break and thought of this beautiful song from 3 idiots applied to mjht...
Just a very short OS
Behti Hawa Sa Tha Woh
It was three years after the accident. Jiju and I thought Di was dead. We blamed him for the accident. How I wish we never left him in the hospital. How I wish I didnt treat him that way. How I wish Jiju didnt slap him. Jiju lost a wife and me a sister. When I came back from Morena, Dia asked me why I was avoiding him. She was very angry and told me that Di was her sister as well, and he was her friend. It was just an accident. I tried to explain my point of view, but even Uday Bhaiya and Benji told me that I was really stupid.
When Jiju saw Di, I didnt believe him and when he supported Jiju, and along with Dia, Uday Bhaiya, Benji, Suhaani, Adhiraj tried to help Jiju, I stood apart, stubborn that DI was still dead. How I wish I didnt snap at him that night, hurting him to the core.
The day Di came to us, the day Dhruv's real character was revealed and the day Di turned out to be our Nupur, he disappeared. He just left after bringing Di to us. Bui and Bauji came to see Nupur, and were very happy. He had called them. Jiju's mom also came. He called her. That night everyone got together. He stood apart. He smilingly said he has to leave.
Next day, he was out of reach. Concerned, Jiju, Uday, Benji and Adhiraj went to his place. The house was locked. Raka, his domestic help was leaving. He informed them that Samrat had left the previous night. He had left a letter to each one of us. To Jiju he wrote that he was going away. He was happy that one big family has got together. He felt like an outsider. He asked Jiju to look after Nupur, me, Dia and Uday. To Nupur, he left a sweet, brotherly letter. To Uday and Benji and Adhiraj he had left cards, thanking them for being with him. To Dia, he left a nice letter telling her that she was his rock support through his dark times. To Suhaani he left a private sibling letter. And to me he left a box of memories that he had stored during the three years.
Di is angry with me and Jiju for having blamed him. Dia, Uday and Benji are heart broken. Jiju is full of remorse that he could not apologise. Suhaani is mad at me.
And I resolved to find him. Years are passing by. Bui has asked me to get married to Niel. I could not. I went to every city of India, every little town and village. I went abroad. He was nowhere. Three more years have passed by. Di was now a mother to twins. Dia and Benji were married due to Chachaji's pressure. Uday is still a brahmachari. Suhaani and Adhiraj are now parents as well. They all are helping me find him, specially Jiju.
I decided to take the help of Exel College. Past students. Saxena sir. Annie and Jacko. Even Sheena, Purab, Cj, Ranvijay. They are all willing to help. My favourite students Rohan and Ash are also helping me. Everyone who knows him are helping me. But he is nowhere.
I decided to appeal after five more years, through this song. I posted it online, in papers and everywhere.
Behti hawa sa tha woh
Udti patang sa tha woh
Kahan gaya usse dhoondo
Behti hawa sa tha woh
Udti patang sa tha woh
Kahan gaya usse dhoondo
Hum ko to raahein thi chalati
Woh khud apni raah banata
Girta sambhalta masti mein chalta tha woh
Hum ko kal ki fikar sataati
Woh bus aaj ka jashn manata
Har lamhe ko khul ke jeeta tha woh
Kahan se aaya tha woh
Choo ke humare dil ko
Kahan gaya usse dhoondo
Sulagti dhoop mein chaaon ke jaisa
Raigistaan mein gaaon ke jaisa
Mann ke ghav pe marham jaisa tha woh
Hum sehme se rehte kooein mein
Woh nadiya mein gotey lagata
Ulti dhara cheer ke tairta tha woh
Baadal awara tha woh
Yaar humara tha woh
Kahan gaya usse dhoondo
Hum ko to raahein thi chalati
Woh khud apni raah banata
Girta sambhalta masti mein chalta tha woh
Hum ko kal ki fikar sataati
Woh bus aaj ka jashn manaata
Har lamhe ko khul ke jeeta tha woh
Kahan se aaya tha woh
Choo ke humare dil ko
Kahan gaya usse dhoondo

In total 12 years have soon passed by. I was forced to marry someone I didnt know. Bauji and Bui forced me. Di and Jiju and others could not save me. I had failed to find him. He was gone. Whose Chashmish shall I remain. I could not even tell him that he had a daughter, whom I hid from everyone. When everyone found out, they became mad at me. Only Jiju supported me.
I cant forgive myself now. I really cant.
[EDITED]
12 years have now turned into almost 19 years. My daughter is now 18. She has got into Excel. Her name was Tanya Shergill. I am now divorced, my husband being a wife-beater. Jiju and Di were away for two years and are back now. Their sons are Rahul and Raj, Di's fav Srk-character-names. Dia and Benji are here, with no children, but loving aunt-uncle. Suhaani's daughter Sam or Samraati is at a school near Excel with Raj and Rahul.
I have realised that he wont be found. My hopes are still there. But there is no trace.
It was Tanya who was still searching for a dad she never knew. She was very angry with me and Jiju for some years when she heard how her dad was treated, and how she was hidden from everyone by me. Later she accepted my folly, on Di and Dia's intervention.
She is still searching. Day and night she is tracking, finding out, contacting and doing everything to find him. Her cousins are supportive of her attempts.
As she came to her third year, Tanya realised that her dad might not be alive anymore. I broke down that day when Tanya found out about an accident happening on a highway that very night he disappeared. He is given up for dead.
Di and Dia still had anger and resentment against me and Jiju. Jiju is now full of guilt, whenever Sam is remembered. Uday and Benji miss him terribly. Suhaani is still cold with me.
I remembered him everyday. I prayed for him everyday. I cried for him every single night. Bauji is now dead. Bui lived with me and loved Tanya dearly.
Tanya soon took up a job, having graduated. 23 years have passed by now, and all our hopes have died by now. Shilpa aunty suggested that we forget and forgive, and hold a puja.
Tanya's POV-
Wow. Finally a job. Away from everyone. How i wish I had Dad at this very moment! I have now got a job in Pune. And as a last minute holiday, am off to Darjeeling with my friends.
I have just arrived. The hotel is beautiful and ancient. The scenery is gorgeous. My friends Tina, Meena and DIna are now planning, and am staring out from the window. Dina hits upon an idea to visit a Home for aged, owned by her cousin. They drag me away.
We stroll through the beautiful building, where old people enjoy their stay, among the lovely hills. Suddenly I noticed a blind man sitting and dribbling a basketball. I was astounded. A blind, elderly man sitting and dribbling a ball smartly. I stared at him and saw a ward going up to him and handing him a small packet of chips, my Nupur Mausi's favourite chips. The old man exclaimed, ''By God, my fav chips, Dude!''
I stared and stared and stared. The blind man was Samrat Shergill, my dad, the man who never knew I existed, the man i never saw before. But that is my dad, smiling away.
A picture fell out of his lap. The ward boy asked and dad replied that the picture was of an Excel college gang. My feelings erupted and I called out DAD!
[NORMAL NARRATION]
Nupur, Dia, Benji, Mayank are at Gunjan's house, chatting in one room. Rahul, Raj and Samraati are laying the table. Suhaani and Adhiraj and Uday are bringing in the food from the kitchen. Tanya had called earlier, saying she had an important person to bring in the evening. Gunjan was helping Shilpa and Bui and now everyone was ready. Tanya called Raj, saying she was at the door and now bringing in a person. Everyone got up, their eyes towards the door. Tanya entered with someone.
For a second nothing registered, as they stared at the blind man. He was satnding, proud, happy and emotional. Then, it hit upon them. Simultaneously-
Nupur- Sa-samrat!
Mayank- S-s-sam!
Benji, Uday- SAM!
Dia- Sammmy!
Suhaani- Bhaiya!
Adhiraj- Samrat!
[EDITED]
Everyone stared at him gaping at the man standing before them.
[Gunjan POV]
I stared at him. I stood there, shocked, as everyone rushed foward, bringinging him, fussing over him. Everything seemed inaudible to me, and my eyes were on him alone. I was shocked that he was blind. I was shcoked to see him in a poorly state. Tanya walked up to me and cired- Mum? I asked her and she told me where she found him. My inside crumbled down as I heard. He had survived that accident somehow and was brought to the home for rehbilitation. He becamne blind.
Jiju had tears in his eyes. He looked at me and I at him. We both felt terrible for the horrible things we had said to him and done to him. Di and Dia and Suhaani were fussing over him. Benji and Uday were at his side, hugging him and talking away. Adhiraj stood at a side. Bui and Shilpa aunty also stood there in a shock.
Tears fell down my cheeks as I looked at him. He was asking after everyone pleasantly. But he didnt mention my name at all. Di suddenly blurted out that I was here as well. At that he looked blank and said ''who is Chashmish? My Chashmish died when you went away from us, Nups'' The ground below me fell. Nupur assured him that I was his chashmish but he refused. ''My chashmish would have told me about my daughter.'' I looked away, ashamed.
Tanya sat next to her father and said '' Dad please forgive her! For my sake!'' He refused to have anything to do with me. He put his hand on Tanya's head and told her that he would rather live away from everyone. He had a new life, and he was happier. I started crying as I heard him. I walked away and no one stopped me, even him, even Tanya.
As months passed by, he totally avoided me. He hated me. I missed the very Samrat whom I loved. Di and others had tried to patch up things then stopped on his insistence. He grew close to Tanya, and she to him.
Years passed by. Tanya was now a married mother. Her cousins were also married with children of their own. Di, others and I were growing old. He was still there, but not keeping well.
One fine day, Tanya went to his room. She found him sleeping peacefully. The sun was streaming onto his face through the window. There was a photo of me and him on his chest.
He was dead. Our world broke down. My world broke down.
[Tanya's POV]
Mum went into a deep shock after Dad died. Maussi and others were shocked as well, but as Dad was not keeping well, it was expected.
After some months, my little one went to Mum's room to find her unconscious on the floor. We rushed her to the hospital, where the doctor said she is no more.
Mum has died peacefully as well. I felt alone. Bad that my parents didnt make up before they died.
Later my husband set up a small home, and the house was named, dedicated to my parents.
It was titled SAJAN.
T H E E N D
Edited by suhaani.cid - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thats amazing bring tears in my eyes i m speechless

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG! =| Though I am not a SGian but still, this piece of writing has brought me into tears. I am less of adjectives to explain my exact feelings after reading this beautiful thing. <3 Your mind is really creative I must say, such a unique and beautiful idea. <3
-Annie.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice story suhani ...

awesome

finally sam back to his gang ... it was so touchy story.

plzz contnue soon

thanks for the pm.

plzzz update ur other FF too ... bahut din ho gaye yaar ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowow tht was sooo damm awesomeee love it very much plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its a nice story...do continue the next part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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firstly im glad you wrote on sam- whom you like so much.

and secondly, this was very nice . touching ...but why blind ????

make it like hes acting or something no...poor sam
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing...can't wait for the rest of it...please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG! Such an intense and sweet OS! Thanks for PMing me.. Continue Soon and do PM me for sure! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Waiting...PM me please once you have finished (hopefully soon...even tomorrow LOL)

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