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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: arjunratirocks

wow so romantic os sis just loved it

and while reading this os im blushing

Thank u so much for the comment 😃
it means alott to me sis
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hallo guys hope your having good time,
i wrote OS and it become long so i mad 2parts.
this one is all of you out there, who tolerate my bakwas OS's
who readed my last 2 os's and comment as well, and those who clicked the like botton thank u so much all of you from the bottom of my heart 🤗 have anice reading
@Tasnim here is the OS sis 🤗
Girl is opening Nupur's apartment door she got her own key, but something is wrong don't know why there's no moving or sound in the house Nupur where are you? is Nupur not wake yet? What the hell did still Nupur in bed by 8 morning? hope she'not sick or something like that, coz without her tonight's party will be disaster for sure, the girl go straight Nupur's room and without knock she open the door Nupurs lying middle of the bed and she has smile on her face, real smile which this girl haven't see like three months or something she took her mobile and clicked picture which she vowed silence she'll send later Nupur's dad it will make his day for sure.

Nupur was dreaming her daily routine dream which she has most of her time weather she's sleep or a wake since last 3 months, she was dreaming her ex husband actually not EX husband he's still her husband but they don't live together anymore they're separated, She don't know why she never filled divorce so is he.. but still he's in her life even though she left her country left their common friend so they don't have to face each other but still he's the biggest part of her life and is not easy to move forward.
Her dream was that she was arranging some staff in their living-room the sometime watching one of her feverate show called Glee, and she was singing with them moving with her hips swaying kind slow dance, Mayank was upstairs having a shower, but he came down stairs and he's standing right behind her back put his hands on her waist holding them firmly, she stopped what she was doing and lean to him he brought her closer then hold her tightly she closed her eyes and his lips were moving on her shoulders to her neck shiver run down to her spin, he made her turn around put his two fingers under her chin,, so he could see her eyes but they were close her lips were trembling so as her hole body, if he wasn't holding her shoulders she would've been on the floor,
His face was close that his breath was mingling with her and was about to claim her mouth, when she heard something clicked like a camera she opened her eyes and Dia is standing in her bedroom? Dia what the hell are you doing? and why are you taking picture of mine when i'm sleeping are you out of ur mine? Dia? she's not answering and she's looking at her like she never saw her "Dia say something or i'll kill you " she throwed at her her billows and they start laughing together. "Nupur today i'm so happy i saw you smiling for real,. God i wish uncle was here to see that smile," "Dia what are you talking about? forget i asked something lat's go we can't afford to be late today we got a lot to do this party we have to impress our guests as well our fat boss kkk"


We left the house after half an hour we didn't got time to have breakfast "Dia lat's get coffee on our way okey" they went go to the star bucks got their coffee then went to the office, Dia and her share 1 cabin ther's knock on their door, come in Dia said, hate to see his face 1st thing in the morning i mean my boss. she said then she remembered what someone said to her months ego..

"You know Nupur i hate when you woke up before i do, coz i love to watch you while your sleeping at least 10 minutes, so please try to stay in bed for while and close your eyes, then let me hold you close to me no movements or i won't responsible what happened, you don't want to be late on your office do you Nupur?" she said to him "i love you Mayank and kissed him passionately"
Nupur why are you having those too much dreams of him today? it feels like he's so near to her but she can't reach him "what is wrong with me?" Nupur get a grip and get on with your job or after 1hour you'll be without a job on the streets and Mayank wil not be ur knight and shining armour okey. she scolld her self.
After 5 evening they went to her apartment got change so they wore gowns Dia pink and and Nupur long gown with dark grey and black straps no necklace but long earrings mixed grey and black, they took a cab and they'e standing the back door of the hotel where they're having the party, one of the assistant come to Nupur and said "mam the part is about to start if you like to check before guests arrives come through this way"
they went with her checked everything and it looks fabulous, "sure tomorrow we'll get alott of praising our boss and our colleagues, Nupur said to the girl who were showing them around,"Thank you dear it looks amazing i'm sure our boss will appreciate with smile"

The guests arrives mens with a tuxedo ladies with gowns she was looking around and she saw a man whose standing near the bar talking to blond lady, not talking to her she was doing the talking and he was doing the nod, but his attention was on his blackberry, and the lady touching his sleeves to get his attention, she was looking his back but somehow she noticed that he looks so sure of himself he's about may be six inch or something big broad-shoulders wearing tailored suit she looked down his shoes they were shining Italian shoes Mayank used to love these kind of shoes. she thought "what the hell am i noticing stranger and comparing to Mayank really i need to get drink otherwise i would go crazy thinking about Mayank today" she told her self and was about to move when the stranger turn around, and she stopped breathing, coz she now know why she was feeling all these things to day., The stranger was none other then, but her husband Mayank. she couldn't move her legs let alone to walk or run, and he's smiling at her as though nothing happend at all? " Gosh i hate you Mayank" she said in a silence
Edited by SamiraARTiMAYUR - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
APIII...🤗🤗🤗
love u lodsss...
n me too missed u a looottt...
i was really happy seeing ur pm n being d 1st person to ress here...😳
n OMG!!! wht an OS...By God!!!
loved it lodsss...
truly amazing...
different n unique...
awww...
loved MayUr past memories...
sigh!!! for der present...
bt m hopeful for der future...inshALLAH.😍
loved d smile Mayank gv looking at Nupur at d end...
ur title itself said a lottt...
so wont discuss jst wanna read d next part asap!!!
hopefully tomorrow ni8 as i will b busy in d morning... :(
so will eagerly wait for ur next part of dis OS API...
i loved it lodsss...
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
resss🤗APIII[/QUOTEI
I so wanted you to be 1st, an here are
missed u Habibt
🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
yeee
thank u so much samira Sis
u r sweet heart
edit


Oh GOD- sameera- u know this story is quite diferent.
i mean the biggest shock was mayur got separated...why Sameera???
whats the reason behind their separation..
awww i can feel how much Nupur loves Mayank..She was smiling by remembering their sweet memory.. and she really miss him a lot.when she said though they got divrced but still she feel him everywhere. she dint feel that they got separated. its convey the depth of their love..
u portrayed nups emotions, her feelings 4 maynk beautifully.
very interesting story sameera..
really wonderful
waiting for next part
hope u update next part soon


Edited by tasnim. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
hey dear i loved it...it was so unique and lovely os...

mayur got separated:( but still their for eachother shooo cute...
pls cont this os plsss this is a humble request,...




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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: tasnim.

yeee
thank u so much samira Sis
u r sweet heart
edit


Oh GOD- sameera- u know this story is quite diferent.
i mean the biggest shock was mayur got separated...why Sameera???
whats the reason behind their separation..
awww i can feel how much Nupur loves Mayank..She was smiling by remembering their sweet memory.. and she really miss him a lot.when she said though they got divrced but still she feel him everywhere. she dint feel that they got separated. its convey the depth of their love..
u portrayed nups emotions, her feelings 4 maynk beautifully.
very interesting story sameera..
really wonderful
waiting for next part
hope u update next part soon


Thank u Tasnim for the comment
n i'll update the next part 2row, you'll know why they were seprated 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: drmaha

hey dear i loved it...it was so unique and lovely os...


mayur got separated:( but still their for eachother shooo cute...
pls cont this os plsss this is a humble request,...




Thanks Maha
i promise i'll update the next part 2row insa-ALLAH
half already is written so i'll do it 2row 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: 18anila1

APIII...🤗🤗🤗

love u lodsss... Love u 2 sweety
n me too missed u a looottt...
i was really happy seeing ur pm n being d 1st person to ress here...😳 i'm happy that too
n OMG!!! wht an OS...By God!!! i was hopping that every1 will react like this it took me 2day to write this part
loved it lodsss... thank u habibti
truly amazing...
different n unique... i love this kind of Mayur who have both sides happy and the sad
awww...
loved MayUr past memories... me 2
sigh!!! for der present...
bt m hopeful for der future...inshALLAH.😍 they'ss have happy end don't worry i hate to see Mayur without a happy ending
loved d smile Mayank gv looking at Nupur at d end...
ur title itself said a lottt... I love this Mayank he's kind arrogant sometime a loving husband
so wont discuss jst wanna read d next part asap!!! You'll insha-ALLAH 2row
hopefully tomorrow ni8 as i will b busy in d morning... :(
so will eagerly wait for ur next part of dis OS API... 2rw this time you'll apple 2read, i'll update after work here in afternoon 4 u will be night
i loved it lodsss... thanks sis
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗 love u 2 habibti 🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear so beautiful os loved the feel nd emotion of ur os but plzz write one more part of this os

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