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-Samira- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: arjunratirocks

hey dear so beautiful os loved the feel nd emotion of ur os but plzz write one more part of this os

Thank u for dear
i'll update row insha-ALLAH
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
nice one so mayur comes face to face now it seems something intresting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Awesome OS.
Keep it up.
Thanks a lot for the PM.
Good work!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
That ws lovely dear...
the dream part ws beautifully written...
Also the past...i can clearly imagine mayank saying all this...
But what happened bw them...why they r living separate...
Hope they will be together soon...
Oh loved the last smile of mayank...did he really forget everything...lol
Cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Samira...that is so beautiful.
Loved their past memories and their present sigh!!!
Both still love eachother that's y they dint take divorce.
Hope to see them together in next part.

And then living happily ever after ...
Cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Samira...that is so beautiful.

Loved their past memories and their present sigh!!!
Both still love eachother that's y they dint take divorce.
Hope to see them together in next part.

And then living happily ever after ...
Cont soon.

Thank u so much Ruchi for ur comment.
It means really alot to me 🤗
yeah they still so much in lov, that's why the didn't filed the divorce.
coz of Mayanks mistake, u'll soon to know th rest 😉 i'll update latter
thanks again
lov u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
waiting for ur update sami sis



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys here is next part
sorry it's too long
Here he's tonight not sure why he came to this party but now he's feeling good he felt like something good will happened in this party, coz it'll happend he was about to meet hif half, Mr Nupur Sharma she always makes his heart beat faster,

he hates when ladies try to get his attention, though they know he's married they want to get their piece of him, Women can't you se he lost interest of ladies years ego?, when he met his match, and these days he don't even give a damn to look at them twice, coz he picture them as the one person who matters to him in this world, someone who he loved not loved love her still to core., i thought she was different, she'll understand me more then my self, he said, but she left me. why wouldn't she? because i hurted her i didn' believed her, didn't comforted her when she needed me the most, it kills me to remember what i said to her, i wish i could turn back the time, but now i have to make her forgive me, show her i could be her old Mayu, that i could be whoever she wanted me to be"

He vowed silence all these things to him self, but Nupur will she ever forgive him?, she was so innocent sweet his sweet Nupur, who he adore the most in this world, he's feeling tonight like she's so near to him watching him somewhere in this room, he turn around to look, and he come face to face the face he ached to see the most, and missed the most Nupur looking at him like she saw ghost her face lost the colour, and looked so pale the glass she was holding looks like in a second it will be on the floor, and then Dia the girl who make him saw sense standing next to her moved close and took the glass she was holding saying something but that he couldn't hear,

One man who was standing beside him said " isn't she look beautiful i mean not look she's beautiful these kind of beauty is so rare in this world isn't Mr Sharma" He looked him and the expresion on his eyes made him shut his mouth and the guy left, while he was looking the guy Nupur left he looked around but she's nowhere, then he saw her going to the hall he moved quick she was running and stopped near the ladies restroom, her head bend and her hands were shaking, he stand right in front of her, "well well well look who's hear? the one and only my sweet adorable Nupur Sharma or Nupur Bhushan i've no idea which you use these days aren't you looking stunning sweetheart?" she looked up at him, her eyes were red due crying her lips were trembling, her face look so white like she'll faint any moment, he took hold of her shoulders and she struggle to get away from him, one of his hand moved to her face and carres her face, tears fall down on her cheeks he wept them moved close to her his other hand moved on her shoulder then to her neck, his thump carres her nape, she closed her eyes tightly then he kissed the edge of her trembling lips and she closed her lips and denied him, when he tried to get access on her mouth,, his tongue carres her lips and she give up and moved her face and hgged him tighly woonded her arms on his neck, they stay like that what it seem like forever and Mayank kiss her neck breathed her overwhoelming smell kiss her deeply her neck and she clung hugged him back.
Nupur what are you doing? why are you hugging him back Mayank? this ain't dream or your fantasy this's reality now he'll know how vulnerable you are to him, she cursed her self, then shove him back and he looked at her desirable eyes mixed with love and lot of pain, which he did to her then tried to smiled at her " Don't act like i forced you something that you didn't want Nupur please, i hate to see you looking at me like that, it makes me look like a monster"
She shook her head and run to the ladies then heard his cursing behind her back, she stand in front of the mirror the face she saw was horror' her eyes were red swollen, yeah they would coz she just met the worst husband of the world who doesn't believe his wife hate her to core, that was what she thought.
But why did he tried to kiss me why? so that he could brove i can't resist him? no women in her right mind to resist Mayank, she said, and why did she enjoyed his breave kiss him? his kiss made her look a like someone who was so thirsty and saw water fall, she felt like coming back to life from died why? "why does he have that power on me?" she kept mumbled and tears were running down on her cheeks

No Nupur you've no idea that you the one who have that power on me you make me loose control you took me world that i missed the most Nupur. why i couldn't control my self around you? " he hit his fists on the wall "ohhh it hurts man, but not hurts like the one i saw Nupur eyes, i wanted to go slowly with her but can't kept my hands when i saw Nupur , " Why did i thought that you abort our baby?"
But know it's the time he need give her answers and he'll have to answer to Nupur , why he didn't believe his Nupur, he'll have to and he knew how to make her listen. He went back to the party order drink him self and someone sitting next to him said, " isn't surprise that your here? or it's coincidence Mr Sharma? he looked the women who's talking to him and looking at him like she was about to hit him, her eyes was red with a angry and hate, he grinned at her then said, "Hallo to you too Dia how are you My OLD friend?. "go to hell with your old friend Mr Sharma what are you doing here? i'm sure you weren't invited coz i'm the one who send the invitation cards? or you manhandled someone to get the card so you can harass my Nupur? and she whispered "sorry i have to do this so Nupur won't suspect me Mayank" with a pleading eyes
"Dia i don't need to manhandle anyone to get a card coz your boss send with special delivery as your Nupur i don't have to harass her she's my wife if you don't have a memory loss? he said with a smile got it Dia"
" I'm not your wife Mr Sharma, you lost that right when you left me in that hospital needed you the most coz your ego is bigger then this building, so don't call me your wife got it IDIOT... He smiled coz now he can see his Nupur is back, with her old passion she never holds back what she want to say, she's always straight foward he looked her eyes held her so she won't look anywhere other then his eyes, that 's the only thing they can't ignore each other, then her boss come out of nowhere and said "Hallo Mr Sharma i see you met my two best girls" he shake his hand " it's pleasure to meet them again" so you know them ?" the boss said "yeah i know them verry well especially Ms Nupur right Bhushan?" looking a her intimetly

He's looking at her like he's going to eat her, his eyes holding hers like magnet when he was telling her boss how he knowed her,
Then her boss said "so that's great i would like the two of you to dance if you don't have broplem Mr Sharma?" how can he have brolem when all he want is, to make see how vaneruable i'm huh. she thought and said "Mr Mehra if you don't mine i would like to check something about the staff in the kitchen" she was about to move and Mayank hand sudenly take hold of her wrist and said " Dia could do Ms Bhushan but to her ears he said or Mrs Sharma" " Mr Sharma i hate you" she said "Ms Nupur please me and Dia will take care the staff go with Mr Sharma okey,"
She go with him he took her hand and his other hand sneeked to her waist and brought her closer holding her tightly and said " Nupur you still so fit in my arms aren't you loving it being this close to me? i'm so enjoying it Gosh i missed this so much that it hurts, "There's no women who fit's like this in my arms, even don't want another women to fit in my arms like you do" she looks up at him seeing his smiled make her want punch his face, " she never thought she'll see a day she want to smack Mayank and say go to hell Mayank, she was supposed hate being his arms but she's loving it why God why can you give me strength that i could hate him for ever why God? she thought and said with shaking voice "Mayank why can't i hate you? why can't i Mayu?

Edited by SamiraARTiMAYUR - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3
The soft voice and the pleading in her eyes nearly brought him to his knees, she looked so beautiful, even in her distress. The dress she was wearing is fabulous, They're swaying the soft music people also dancing, he looked her eyes and lost it, then he moved her to the corner, away from the people so no one can't see, he bent his head to look deep in her eyes, as he can see through her soul, but her sweet flowery smell reached his nose, making him inhale deeply, and his gaze moved to her mouth, to those plump pink lips that always seemed to be frowning or nibbled on by her teeth whenever she's worrying or thinking. then he kissed her,
At first it was soft so tender he lost his control, the first touch of their lips was like a current of electricity coursed through them. For the first time since in 3 months she felt life, Nupur's expression melted, revealing a glimmer of unmistakable heat Just like old time whenever they near each other. Then she was kissing him back her lips softened and clung to his, she whispered "Mayu" her kiss is the same passion like his, he broke their kiss and said "Nupur i don't want you to hate me, but can't see you have that power on me, you can make me forget the whole world just to look your eyes"
She tried to move but he held her more close and tightened his grib on her "Mayank i might not hate you or won't forget you, but we never going to be the old Mayank and Nupur and you damn well know that , so now leave me i got party to handle it okey"
No Nupur we can't be that Mayank and Nupur but you going to be back being my wife and coming back with me after tonight's party and you'll have to listen to me please? he pleaded, untill that this will do he stole quick kiss on her parted lips and left her there standing with shock ...
" Damn you Mayank damn you she said, why can't you leave me in beace? i hated for this strong man to see my weakness what the F***k he mean we'll go together tonight?. after the party finished she was talking the Manager of the hotel, and someone call her name behind her, she turn around and see the Moron Mayank her soon to be ex husband, grinning at her like idiot, she thought,
He came and stood close to her so close that she could feel the heat of his body, and said " sweetheart if you finished can we go home?" before she answered the the Manager said "sure Mr Sharma we just finish so you and Ms Bhushan can go" he extend his hand and looking at her, her gaze met his she forgot that she was so angry with him, and he came more closer, said " i hope you won't like to make scene here right my sweet Mrs Sharma. coz what i was suppose to tell you is not good to talk middle of this hall, so lats go to my suit upstairs okey"
"How dare you say that? Mayank and thing i would go anywhere with you? i won't go anywhere with you even if my life depends on it, so leave my hand and get away from me"
He pulled her close and she hit his hard chest, then he swung a glinting look down at her, his eyes were as black as midnight. The love,desire in them vibrated, she could feel her heart fluttering wildly in her chest, and his own heart was hammering so loudly agains her, the burning heat of his passion just drowned her to him, Why is he the only man ever to make me feel like this. " Mayank leave me"
He held her more closely, and Her fingers clutched at his shoulders, his arms held her crushed against him, "Do you really want to do this right now Nupur?" she' still lookin at him strugling to free her self and her boss come out nowhere. "Are things okay between the two of you?" he enquired gravely. " She look back her boss and said "everything is ok boss no worries" then look back at him she sent him a tense little smile, he look at her questionetly thought he heard wrong? and "Let's go now," she whispered. That smile almost did it something to him, but he tightened his fingers around hers. "Come on," he responded huskily. He still held claim to Nupur's hand, his fingers absently stroking her fingers,
They went upstairs to his siut opened the door, they are stood middle of the room not even looking each other, let alone talking, He studied her in the slow thickening silence. Her soft mouth was trembling, and he could see the quickened speed of her pulse beating at the side of her neck. Tension throbbed between them, and it wasn't all due to the silence but he was allowing to stretch.
The minute he closed door, and she felt her nerves grow taut, as silence engulfed the room.
So Nupur, it's possible that we can talk please?," he said in a huskly voice,
" You kow what Mayank cut the grab and come to the point, i don't have all night playing game with you, that minute if she had knife she'd put straight to his heart so he won't breath again ever so her heart won't ever respond to his, may be she'll apple to forget him, "I hate you.. really hate you, i never want to thought that
You were the biggest mistake I ever made in my whole life but don't make me think like that now"
but i wished you were die" she said
" Ohh my sweet Nupur if i'm going to die and going to hell , not going to hell though, going to Jannat, your going with me so don't worry honey, you know what we used to said each other, like my heart beats for you so that means if mine stop beating yours will be olso, so please try to listen to me, remember down stairs the way we were clunging to to each other, i love you when your like that so would you listen to me sweetheart?"
Are you crazy or am i going crazy Mayank? i don't understand what's happening here, but one thing i'm sure is that i'm not going to be your bedmate, did you forgot what you did to me months go? huh she said in angry..
How dare you Mayank? and that your so heartless cousin who bushed me on the stairs and made me loose my baby, and that too you took her side and believen her more then me and Sam? don't you have decency at all? what man are you ? oh i forget you don't have that decency in you, you're one bas***d heartless--- you're a--a self serving, arrogant," he moved and come stand in front of her he look so helpless and bent his head down, clasped his his hands on her shoulders and moving her backward then trapped her with his body and the wall behind her, he moved closer: she turn away and he frame my face with his hands . "At least now that basterd heartless did realise his mistake, would try you heart to forgive me please Nupur"?
She give a sharp cry as she wrench free of his hands encircling her. "you know Mayank i still remember everything you said to me i wish i didn't but i do i d-- do, how you made it clear you can't bear to see my face, can't look me in the eye anymore, you just said go Nupur just go DAMN IT, isn't what you said?
He tried to reached her she slapped away his hands. And she was going to faint so he held her arms she said Maya---Mayank and all of sudden her eyes were close.. he felt like the whole world go beneath his feet, couldn feel anything except Nupur in his arms looks like a lifeless, he took her to the bed lay her down sit next to her then took some water try to made her drink but nothing is going to help his eyes were moist,
He gathered her against him pressed kisses into her hair and knew it was the time he face the facts that he knew that his Nupur can't do something like that, and her situation he was the one to responsiable, but he have to make her forgive him for what he did to her actualy what he did to both of them.
Nupur wake ahh her head hurts and why i'm i sleeping in bed? i---- i was with Mayank right? " Nupur come on open your eyes come on i know you can do it sweetheart please Nupur, she rolled her head to the side , Mayank drew her towards him," open wake up and look at me please, i can't see you like this Nupur. he said
"Mayank " she whispered "my head hurts but i'm going to be okey if you let me go now your squeezing me" he let go of her but still his gaze locked with hers, he cupped his hand her nape and brought her closer, but she drew back, he smiled at her action said "i won't do anything you don't want Nupur but just sit here and i'll be back oke.
What is wrong with him? isn't he the Mayank who let me go months ego, and ever looked for me or come behind me? i'm the one who faint not him why is he acting strange? something is fishy he won't play another game with me i won't let him.
When he come back to the room,Nupur still sitting where he left that second he realise, she didn't move. he went to her, leaned down and brushed damp strands of hair from her forehead, Sweetheart i'm so sorry ...
She looked at him like she saw a ghost then pinch him like she was trying to make sure it was him, who is talking to her and she laughted and laughted, he looked at her then she stopped laughing her eyes glittered with tears and said "is that all you have to say? after all you put me through Mayank ? just leave me i want to go home, No Nupur you won't go home until you listen too me, he hauled her agains him, she put her hands against my chest and shoved him back,
"I have to control my self he said okey sorry but you have to lisnet to me Nupur,"
okey what do you want? ,Mayank , first let me hold you please ,slowly he reached for her. Gathered her in his arms. "You --- You is what i always wanted baby", No Mayank you don't want me if you want me or loved me you'd have believed in me, but you didn't , when i lost our baby you thought i aborted her/him what kind a mother abort her baby, before he/her sees this world? what kind mother do you think i was Mayank? he silenced her with kiss then cupped her face with my hands"
" I know Nupur i did the beggest mistake of my life and i'll regreg in my whole life, but please forgive me let us make another one with God's permision please honey,
Mayank when i lost our baby i needed you , i wanted your comort wanted you to grive with me, but you ignore me, how can i forget all of that?"
"I was so devastated when you lost our baby. I was lost couldn't see anything, and that evil Ria put posion in my head, that time she was telling how you didn't want our child, how you choose the job over then our baby, i was drunk couldn't see the right, and her lies, please Nupur please? he pleaded like small child, Her heart gave way her, she can't see him like this, but what he did wasn't something she can't easly forget,
"Please let me make you forget that Nupur, give me another chance to make it up all the bed things, i did to you i beg you Nupur please.".. Nupur eyes swimming with tears.

The sight of those tears hurt him, yet filled him with renewed hope. If she didn't care about him, why was she crying?
He waited a moment for her to say something, but she remained silent and he continued. "I was a fool to think that you could do such a think," he held her more closer and stroked the softness of her hair said "I love you Nupur" He thought at first, she hadn't heard him. She just went on looking at him, staring at him? but then he saw the rush of color into her pale face and he felt his heart swell, yes "I love you," i said again. "I adore you, honey, and are you coming home with me right?
i'm not saying i don't love you coz if did we both know it's lie, but Mayank you have to make me saying it without any doubt you have to earned Mayank, i want to forgive you, but one thing you have to do is your cousin Ria won't stay near our house or won't visit ever, even if her dad died in our house she won't put her foot in our door promise that Mayank,
Over my dead body, and Nupur you have my word ok, she won't come near us ,or to our house, as your love for me i do know you love me, but i'll earned how you'll expresess to me promise you that as well, "Nupur Sharma" he said as whispered and a kiss across her lips, "I'm nothing without you. I can't be the man I need to be, taking her mouth in a soft lingering kiss. "I think it's time for you to come back home to your husband, where you belong always"
"You the joy of my life" he said softly "you know that do you?." And you the heart beat and the love my life,"Nupur murmured, "forever."
but as she savored the pressure of his mouth on hers, she felt the first stirring of desire, a heat that slid through her veins. Her husband a very special man was kissing her, and she wanted him to and it felt so good to be true. Very, very good. it was utterly beautiful "Kiss me again," she told him. And he did.
Edited by SamiraARTiMAYUR - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I just loved it!
Part-2 is really beautifully written samira...Nupur's pain,her emotions,her feelings
for Mayank is very well described and then Mayank's mixed emotions pain+anger,everything was perfect.Loved the small romance in restroom 😉

And Part-3 is just amazing...hated that Ria who gave false clues to Mayank that Nupur wants to abort,but Mayank was equally wrong in not believing his wife!

Loved the way you ended.

You know I feel if you have written 2 more parts and make it SS then I would be wonderful for me.
Anyways nicely written.

Keep writing more on Mayur😊

Love ya🤗


Edited by --Ruchi-- - 13 years ago

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