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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

I just loved it!

Part-2 is really beautifully written samira...Nupur's pain,her emotions,her feelings
for Mayank is very well described and then Mayank's mixed emotions pain+anger,everything was perfect.Loved the small romance in restroom 😉

And Part-3 is just amazing...hated that Ria who gave false clues to Mayank that Nupur wants to abort,but Mayank was equally wrong in not believing his wife!

Loved the way you ended.

You know I feel if you have written 2 more parts and make it SS then I would be wonderful for me.
Anyways nicely written.

Keep writing more on Mayur😊

Love ya🤗


Awww thank u Ruchi it means to me so much sweeety..🤗
i love Mayur in thses situations emotional n everything 😉i
it makes them more Romantic couple,
they love each other that much that, they could 4get everything n can forgive each other
yeah i want olso wanted to made SS, then i mede it just 3 parts
i'll try to come up something alse soon insha-ALLAH
i can even think other then my Mayur ⭐️ they my stars
Thanks again Ruchi love you sweety 🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnim.

yeee thank u sami sis..
Love uuu
sami font thoda bara karo
its quite small .

edit

Sami Sis
the whole OS was wonderful.
in first part and 2nd part u've portrayed nups and Maynks feelings beautifully.
loved it so much dear.
and i really hate that ria... and i was angry on Maynk. why he didnt believe Nupur????
Nups ki gussa jayez hai..
thnax GOD maaynk realized his mistake..

Sami Nice Os sweet heart
u r simply an awesome writer..
Do write more n more OS
May ALLAH bless u



Tasnim i'm so glad that you liked it hun..
happy that was up to mark bit..
hated too for Ria as Mayank he olso hurt ou Nupur,
it hurts when u partner didn't believe you
i'll try to write something soon in sa-ALLAH
thnx agian sis 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you guys for all those who liked my previous OS and the encouraging it means lot to me,
i'll start new SS may be 5 or 6 parts not sure, but i'll post on Monday or Tuesday insha-ALLAH
Love Samira
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Posted: 13 years ago
uff samira it was heavenly...☺️
i loved it to the core...
wht a update...😍 i want u to pls write another part which would be the last part of mayur momentts pls ps...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drmaha

uff samira it was heavenly...☺️

i loved it to the core...
wht a update...😍 i want u to pls write another part which would be the last part of mayur momentts pls ps...

Maha thank u so much hun
sorry i finished this 1
but i'll make it up to u with SS only Mayur i can't think anyone alse 😉
i'll post it 2row insha-ALLAH
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi, i started new SS of my Mayur so i hope you won't dissapointed when u read it guy's
it took 2days to write
Suja Maha here is the first part 😛 tell me what you think
Nupur what can i say? she's beautiful sweet she has the biggest heart, she got her heart in her sleeves, she's so straight forwarded person,
If she want to say something trying to hold back, you can read her eyes can see her expresion that something is bothering her,
She got married and arrange married, her parents choose for her no one give her choice, they told her that she was going to get married and she can't say no, coz her parents are so rude to her most of the time, especially her mom?
She don't know why but she got the feelings always which says that, why Nupur that you don't feel much about this lady? isn't she's your mom? she asked her self a lot of times, why she never feels the pain or the happiness of her mom? once her so call dad and her very rude mom met accident Nupur was in college when she heard the news, the only person she felt to cry for was only her dad but some where inside her were feeling bit of happenes if that lady who never acted being her was died.
But she knows it's not good to wish someone to die, but she couldn't help it if someone hurts you treated you very badly as your not human you'll going to hate them wishing them they were die isn't?

But after her marriage she felt blessed, her husband was the sweetest person on earth that she ever met, he was so kind to her that sometimes if he do little thinks for her, she used to cry and he'll say if i knew it'll make you sad or cry i wouldn't give it or bough it for you? then she thought can he get more sweeter or kinder? and hug him like little child who saw his mom after school, earlier their marriage Nupur was still in college, so they agreed not to have child until she finishes her college, all was Nupur's idea and Mayank was so dilated the news like he was so hopping, that made Nupur bit weard felt like something is wrong,

She's started using it bills, so they won't be an accident, but the next month after she finished her college, Nupur forget to take her bills one time according to her, then next month she felt always weak always tired midday, she need a nap even if she's at work? to day in her break time she went to the canteen having her tea with her friends one of them had applepie and made Nupur nauseous, the she remembred that she missed one of her period and thought why my period is late it was never late? she suspected that she may be pregnant and decided to take pregnant test,

so she went to the pharmacy bought pregnancy test then went home, she knew Mayank wasn't at home she went straight to the bathroom, took the test and the test was positive, at first she was so shocked that she couldn't breath, cried and thought what will Mayank think? will he be happy? or will he tought she doesn't care her career? Then remembered the picture of her husband when he was 2 years he looked so cute and handsome, will my son will look like my husband his long nose full lips brown eyes with cute dimples...thought Nupur and got excited she couldn't wait until her husband gets home, so she could share the happiness, Will her husband be happy for pregnancy? or will he terrified when he learns he's going to be a dad? coz it happiness sometime when you weren't expecting it and you were so careful that you wouldn't want to happend this soon,it might shocks you too much that yo do or say something yo woud regret in you life time? Hope our Mayank won't be who will regret what he will gonna say
tell me guys what do you Think? pleaseee
Love Samira
Edited by SamiraARTiMAYUR - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
APIII!!!!!🤗
i was abt to leave now wen i saw ur post as i came to check if u posted ur ss or not...
n here i am...
love u lodsss...🤗
will read in d morning as its already 3.am😳
so...
UN-ressED😎

API...
its awesome ya...
i loved it lodsss...
u know 2/3 days ago i was actually thinking abt dis type of something...
as when we watched in "MJHT" dat Mayank misunderstood Nupur...so i was actually thinking dat i hvn't read something abt dat n evn wished some1 cud write smthing like it i mean if Nupur wud hv actually pregnent dat time hw Mayank wud accept it n all...n U DID SO...
thankkk u API...
though its different bt i loved it...lodsss
awww...
poor Nupur...
m hoping Mayank wud b happy...*fingers crossed*
loved it lodsss api...
u wrote it beautifully...
loved it a lottt...
plzzz continue soon...
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 18anila1

APIII!!!!!🤗

i was abt to leave now wen i saw ur post as i came to check if u posted ur ss or not...
n here i am...
love u lodsss...🤗
will read in d morning as its already 3.am😳
so...
ress😎

i thought ur not OL this time 🤗🤗
love u habibti waiting ur comment 2row insha-ALLAH
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice OS!
Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Premeer_Mayur

Nice OS!

Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the PM!

Thanks dear 😊
n ur welcome for the pm

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