*The Cavernous Perceptions*'A SaJan Saga||Pt12P#77

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 14 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: KaJen_AR_DMG
hey guys!

i'll add u right away 😃

its good tht u started this system!
makes it sooo much easier to pm eh!?😆

and Bidz!

GOOD LUCK TOMORROW!
and once its over, GET WELL SOON😆

Luv,
Aashi <3

Thanks Aashi for both understanding and your wishes! Yeah, with this system it is easier to PM 😉 Will check the pending list in a while!

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 14 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: aashizin
hey guys do add me hon and bidz have a speedy recovery sweety , we can wait take proper rest and care hon 🤗

Thanks for your warm wishes!

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rija

@gunurlove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#433

Hey Bidzy...thanks alot for sending me the link of this Beautiful SS...🤗

I think its your and Nivi's combine SS...but its really Awesome and mond-blowing from start to end...👏👏👏👏

Poor Sajan...they r passing through the so much pain...and faced the worst reality of life just bcoz of two so disgust and weird peoples...who never ever deserved them...😡😡😡

but then this pain only did bring Sajan together...😊

whole SS was very lovely...the way Sajan r sharing their cute and innocent friendship..its did remind me the Sajan's friendship in mjht😳😳😳

very well done guys...keep it up...and now i just started to read and u r on Bed rest Bidzy

i wish u get well Soon and Nivi and u both update again a very rocking part soon...

this time add me in your new pm list...😊

with Love

Rija

Edited by gunurlove - 14 years ago

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 14 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--
Get well soon bidu🤗

Thanks Ruchi!😳

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 14 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: gunurlove
Hey Bidzy...thanks alot for sending me the link of this Beautiful SS...🤗
I think its your and Nivi's combine SS...but its really Awesome and mond-blowing from start to end...👏

Poor Sajan...they r passing through the so much pain...and faced the worst reality of life just bcoz of two so disgust and weird peoples...who never ever deserved them...😡😡😡

but then this pain only did bring Sajan together...😊

whole SS was very lovely...the way Sajan r sharing their cute and innocent friendship..its did remind me the Sajan's friendship in mjht😳😳😳

very well done guys...keep it up...and now i just started to read and u r on Bed rest Bidzy

i wish u get well Soon and Nivi and u both update again a very rocking part soon...

this time add me in your new pm list...😊

with Love

Rija

Thanks Rija..

We are really glad you liked our SS idea. To be frank, the concept was Bidu Di's and it was so attractive I could not reject it.. A completely new concept!

We are truly glad we could keep the SaJan essence intact and remind you of their friendship in the serial!

And if you want to be added in the new PM list, then please add the given username in your buddy list!

We will surely come up with the next part soon but can't promise! :(

Thanks a ton..

Love,

Nivriti and Bidushy!❤️

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Bidz_Nivi

@Bidz_Nivi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: SajanRox
Important Message

Hey guys;
We have begun with the special PM system, We have added few people in my buddy list and I have to add a lot more in my buddy list :)
So guys, if you want PMs and have received the request from 'Bidz_Nivi' then please accept it :)

And yeah, those who haven't been added, please add yourselves! We will accept the request.

And there is one more important thing, Bidu Di has to undergo a surgery on 9th and complete bed rest for a week so we won't be able to update! I want you all to wish her a speedy recovery. And as you all know, I am really busy with new school so there would be no updates till a week until she comes back!

Sorry for that!

-Love,
Nivriti & Bidushy <3

Add this user in!

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#437

Greetings everyone 🤗..

Thanks for your wonderful response on the previous part and also for your best wishes for my surgery. It went well and I'm absolutely fine now by Almighty's mercy and obviously the love of you people. 😳

Thanks for pressing the like tab - mukitzz, Lekshmic7, hbkumar, tasnin96, KaJen_AR_DMG, princess_sara, kins103, gunurlove, MoNaYaRoX, ammykhan, daniella05, arjun-forever, SwaNia_2, 358674, saduf, Anjali_12, SM_317, fend, mars14, ..Ambika.., aashizin, AttractiveAdya, pragya_luvsajan, preety88, Shafoo, mijanur, deepti_mohit, --Ruchi--,

Here's the eighth part. We hope you'll enjoy. 😊

Happy Reading!
Love,
Bidushy and Nivriti! ❤️

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#438

And Their Feelings Grew Strong... - Part Eight

** Banner made by Pragya [pragya_luvsajan] **

Samrat, Gunjan, Mayank and Nupur were in the car. Samrat and Gunjan were on the passenger seat and Mayank and Nupur on the backseat. Samrat was driving. "Bro, after I drop Gunjan at her place, I'll drop you guys home? Is it okay?", Samrat asked politely to Mayank. "Samrat, aren't you gonna stay with us?", Mayank asked confusedly. "No!", Samrat replied plainly, or perhaps coldly. "Samrat, that's not fair! I need you specially in this condition and you won't be with me!", Nupur said making a sad face.

"Bhabhi, you know the reason naa, and don't worry, whenever you need me, I'll be there but I can't stay in that home," Samrat said to Nupur staring at her through the mirror and his expressions turned supportive and sweet. Gunjan was confused in the midst of this serious family conversation."Why doesn't Samrat wanna live in his own home?", she wondered.

"Samrat, Arnav is on a trip with his friends and he'll be back tomorrow. So, at least stay tonight.", Mayank said to Samrat in a pleading voice. "Who is Arnav?", Gunjan suddenly asked curiously and the rest three made a serious facial expression.

"Arnav is our youngest brother," Mayank informed Gunjan. "Oh! So why did he went on a trip, in spite of knowing that you guys are coming?", Gunjan asked Mayank and Nupur, getting more curious. Samrat interrupted by saying in a stern voice, "Gunjan, now as you are my best friend, so you should know one thing! Never talk about Arnav in front of me."

There was a silence for a while. Gunjan, understanding that it might be a serious matter, decided not to speak further. Mayank stared at everyone's faces and to lighten up the mood, he said in glee, "So its decided. Tonight Samrat will stay in Shergill Mansion."

"Okay!", Samrat finally agreed and said smiling. With this, the rest three broadly smiled. Soon they arrived in front of Gunjan's house. "Bye Samrat!", Gunjan smilingly said. "Bye and take care!", Samrat sweetly said with an equal warm smile. Then, Gunjan turned back, bid farewell to Mayank and Nupur and went to her home.

***

Leaning against the wall, Samrat intently stared at the sky. The full moon was enlightening everywhere, even being slightly covered by dark clouds. Seeing that, he realized something. His life was similar like that of the sky. "Dark clouds, umm just like my past," Samrat exclaimed and frowned. "The light of the full moon, just like my friendship with Gunjan," he said further and his face lit up. There was something special about her that always brought a smile on his face, he thought and smiled.

"Gunjan! She's so different and unique," said Samrat with sparkles in his eyes. Just then, the moment of Gunjan smiling at him in airport flashed in his mind. He contently smiled and said, "Thank god that everything is normal now." Saying that, he sighed in relief.

"What do you mean Samrat?", Samrat heard a familiar voice behind him. He turned around and saw Nupur standing in front. "Arey bhabhi aap? You should have slept by now. Why are you still awake?", he asked and Nupur smiled seeing his concern for her.

"Actually I wasn't sleepy, that's why thought to chat with you," Nupur replied Samrat and walked near, opposite to him. "Oh," Samrat said with a formal smile and looked at the sky again. "Something is fishy!", Nupur thought in mind.

"Samrat, what were you talking about being normal and all?", Nupur asked curiously. Casually smiling, Samrat replied, "Oh, woh actually, I had a fight with Gunjan but everything is normal now, that's what I was thinking."

"Oh okay," Nupur said removing the doubt of something being fishy from her mind. "So, devar ji, how's Sheena? When are you both getting married?", Nupur asked excitedly. "Bhabhi, we aren't together anymore," Samrat replied, expressionless.

"What? But how? I mean you both were deeply in love with each other naa?", Nupur asked, dumbfounded. Samrat didn't respond. He headed to his bed and sat.

"Samrat, tell me something," Nupur asked Samrat worriedly sitting beside him. Samrat rested his head on Nupur's lap and answered plainly, "She was in a relationship with me just for my properties, and couple of weeks ago, she got married."

Nupur was too stunned to react on it. Samrat was her best buddy after Mayank. Seeing him like that was the last thing she would ever want to see. Softly caressing his forehead, Nupur said in a low tone, "I'm sorry Samrat! I should not have asked you this."

"It's okay Bhabhi. I don't care about it anymore as I have Gunjan with me," and with this, a strange smile crept on Samrat's face. Nupur was surprised as well as happy. She remembered her first meeting with Gunjan and told herself in mind, "Gunjan is a nice girl."

"Why is Gunjan effecting me so much? Why do I smile when her name came in my mind? DAMN! I have to control my feelings. I can't ruin my friendship with her. I can fall in love for a second time," These were the thoughts going on in his mind.

"Samrat!", Nupur shook Samrat bringing him back to the reality. "Gunjan is a nice girl," she said smilingly. This was enough for Samrat to understand what his sister-in-law actually meant. "What you are thinking is impossible, bhabhi!", Samrat said to Nupur in a determined tone and got up.

"But at least, think about it once, and well, everyone is not same. Don't you have faith in Gunjan?", Nupur asked Samrat intently. Although Samrat had full faith on Gunjan and his heart was all ready to make her his, yet his mind was protesting. "We are best of friends! That's it, and bhabhi, i think you should go to sleep now," Samrat said coldly and Nupur frowned. "Okay, good night," Nupur said and went to her room.

***

Nupur's each and every word was deeply engraved in Samrat's mind. He kept on thinking about it for long, when suddenly his cell phone buzzed flashing - Gunjan.

"Gunjan, you? So late at night?", Samrat asked confusedly and on the other side of the line, he could see Gunjan's breathless voice. It wasn't clear. "Gunjan, are you alright?", Samrat asked with fears and anxiety on his face.

"Sam..rat.. there's.. no.. oxygen.. left.. pump.." Gunjan said in a weak voice and Samrat understood the whole matter. "I'm coming with your pump within short!", Samrat said seriously and hung up the phone. He hurriedly got up and rushed outside.

***

Samrat opened the door of Gunjan's house with a duplicate key he borrowed from the neighbour and went inside. He ran to the master bed and saw Gunjan taking deep breaths. "Gunjan!", he said, scared and rushed to her. Sitting beside her on the bed, he took her on his lap.

Immediately, he gave Gunjan the newly-bought asthma pump. Inhaling oxygen, Gunjan was finally relaxed. "What happened Gunjan? Suddenly this asthma attack?", Samrat asked worriedly, and the next moment, Gunjan enveloped her arms around his waist and cried her heart out. Samrat was dumbstruck and felt his heart broke into million pieces.

"Hey what happened? Tell me!", caring Samrat asked Gunjan, caressing her forehead. "Samrat, one of my Canadian friend *hiccup* saw Rahul *hiccup* with a girl *hiccup* on bed! They are too *sniff* close!", she said in the midst of her sobs. Samrat felt something burn inside him, as if he wanted to kill the person for whom HIS Gunjan was shedding her precious tears.

Breaking the hug, Samrat cupped Gunjan's face and kissed her forehead. "Stop crying! I don't like tears in your eyes," he said lovingly in an authoritative tone and wiped off her tears. Seeing the care for herself in Samrat's eyes, Gunjan smiled a little. She felt her heart satisfied. Samrat's togetherness had always made her SMILE and HAPPY. "Thank you for always being there," she said.

"You are most welcome," Samrat replied her sweetly, touching her cheeks. Then he made her lay properly on her bed. He sat beside her and started stroking her forehead. Gunjan was amazed as well as happy. "What are you doing Samrat? You should go home!", Gunjan said being amazed. Samrat smilingly replied in a firm tone, "I won't leave until you sleep." Gunjan sighed and said, "Okay". She didn't say anything further and closed her eyes because she knew that there was no point in arguing as Samrat always won.

Samrat kept on stroking Gunjan's forehead, just then, his eyes spotted the calendar on the side table. A sudden smile curved on his face finding something written above the date of 16th August. "My birthday," he read out loudly and smiled. He delightfully said looking at Gunjan's face who was peacefully sleeping, "So my dear best friend, your birthday is coming up! Umm.. okay, so i promise to make this birthday of yours the most memorable one."

***

Precap:
Arnav and Gunjan meet. Samrat sees this and gets damn furious.

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#439

Hey guys 🤗..

Here was the eight part 😳 .. We hope that everyone liked it and we could maintain the SG essence .. ❤️

Please press the like tab if you liked the update and PLEASE COMMENT .. About 40 members are in the PM list but only half of them comment regularly .. Why? 😔 .. If you are busy, then I'm sorry to ask you this but if you aren't, then PLEASE DO LEAVE A RESPONSE .. Even a single word or a sentence helps us to be motivated 😳 .. I'm really sorry if I sounded rude.. 😕

For PMs of updates, add [Bidz_Nivi] in your buddy list and we'll PM you 😊 .. Waiting desperately for your appreciations/criticisms .. 😳

Much Love,
Bidushy and Nivriti ❤️

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago