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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#321

Nice update, poor Nupur I felt so bad for her...Mayank shouldn't have slapper her, what different does it make him... I felt really bad seeing her cry... and when she said this line... That was it..

(she has tears in her eyes)main kabhi baahar nahin jaaongi mujhe mat maaro

Mayank is gulity and that tell him how he regrets his actions...Awesome update, please continue soon...

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Gul

@DhanakZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#322

O dear that was really so beautiful update

I loved mayank concern for Nupur

and Precape is really un believable

Thanks for pm

cont soon

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#323

tht was sooo niceee love it

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SHILPA-CUTE

@SHILPA-CUTE

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Posted: 14 years ago

#324

very nice part dear.
cont soon...😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: princez_94
Nice update, poor Nupur I felt so bad for her...Mayank shouldn't have slapper her, what different does it make him... I felt really bad seeing her cry... and when she said this line... That was it..
(she has tears in her eyes)main kabhi baahar nahin jaaongi mujhe mat maaro

Mayank is gulity and that tell him how he regrets his actions...Awesome update, please continue soon...

(she has tears in her eyes)main kabhi baahar nahin jaaongi mujhe mat maaro

yes dear this one line brought tears in my eyes while writing it had everything her 17 years pain i am proud that i wrote this os whatever others think but for me it is my favourite os . I am also very happy for your support till now even for silent readers i am saying and i will end this os on a good note

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Posted: 14 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: mahakmev
amazing and lovely.i really hated mayank for slaping her how could he? but then he apologized and felt he was wrong.thanks for the update

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Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: ginny09
loved it 😊

i am srsly in love wid dis ff 😊

thanks fr writing such a beautiful ff 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-
part 8!
aww... dat ws cute!!!
MN... sab se door...akele Simla mein...😍
aww..luvd it 2 bits!
thnx 4 d pm!🤗
continue soon!

thanks dear for your valuable comments

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Posted: 14 years ago

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