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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pearl10

thank god...finally mayu is back..."uski koi girlfriend hain??"...🤣...awww...nupsi is so sweet!!

loved their hug😍
update soon.
thnx for pm.
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very very lovely. update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Parts!👏 Well written and perfectly justified!
Waiting for the dinner!
Continue soon and thanks for the PM! :)
Love,
Nivriti
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely the way sam and adhi laughed i was also laughing with them osom dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 22 n 23...
nyc updates...
but i want More MN...
thnx 4 d pm!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 24
MN house
Both had finished dinner , nupur continuously telling him everything that had gone on in her mind when he hadn't turned up. Mayank was trying not to smile or laugh too much so that she wouldn't feel bad or get angry again. Poor girl, kitna dar gayi hogi.

she was about to put off the kitchen light when her eyes fell on a cover on the counter. she picked it up and found it had a cheque inside with mayanks name on it.

"mayank yeh kya hai?"

"finally!! Main kab se wait kar raha hoon ki tum woh dekhogi. Tumhari bolna bandh hoga tho hi tumhi dikhayi dega na," , mayank shook his head at her, "Tumhaare liye. Woh jo main extra project mein kaam kar raha tha, uska pay hai. aaj usiko complete kar raha tha taaki next week se main thoda free hojao."

He went up to her near the counter, took both her hands with the cheque in his own and continued," hamare first wedding gift meri taraf se." His eyes showing all the affection he had for her.

"but mayank, yeh tum mujhe gift nahin de sakthe," nupur replied back in a surprised tone," yeh tho tumhe maa ko dena haina. Yeh unke liye hai. hamare liye nahin."

Mayank was stunned, taken aback that he had not thought of it that way and amazed at nupur . he left her hands and looking at those eyes, full of concern for all those connected to her, cupped her face and kissed her on the lips intensely...his one hand moving to the back of her neck, he pulled her closer and nupur after an initial moment of surprise, felt herself growing helpless, till his hand on her neck pressed and she felt a shooting pain .

she struggled and broke free, her face flushed with the warmth of mayanks kiss but her neck aching with pain.

"mayank! Mera gardan!", she said in a complaining tone... rubbing her neck

Mayank stared at her , his mind unable to register what she was saying.

He had tried to convey everything that he wanted to say, starting with how amazed he was at her concern for his mother , how lucky he felt he had her in his life, how much she meant to him, how his world revolved around her, how much he had missed her the last few days, how he hated the fact that she was constantly upset and he couldn't do anything about it, he would see that she was happy from now on...completely.

Taking the cheque and moving out into the centre room, she placed it in the cupboard and took the ointment out. she turned to find mayank right behind her, she showed him the ointment and said," mera gardan mein dard hain. Aur pao mein bhi. Isiliye..." she stopped unable to continue as he stared at her with an odd expression on his face.

She bent her head avoiding his intense gaze. He took the ointment tube from her and taking her hand , made her sit on the cot in the centre. He applied the cream to her neck rubbing gently and asked her how she got it.

Nupur , who was finding it difficult to face him, was glad for a reason to keep her head bent as he massaged her neck. She replied and for the next few minutes their conversation revolved around how she had hurt both her neck and foot.mayank smiled at her explaining how angry she had got at the guys who had teased gunjan.

Both were trying to talk of regular stuff, bring their heartbeats in control and clear up their heads, trying to bring the atmosphere , which felt charged with their kiss, back to normal. Mayank ,after he finished applying the ointment to neck, picked up her foot and ignoring her awkwardness massaged the foot as well. He then sat next to nupur on the bed and said," tho, ab kaisa hai?"

"ok. ", and starting to smile, added," jab mere patidev itne pyar se medicine lagayenge tho saara dard bhaag jaayega na?"

Mayank smiled and said," nupur, sorry aur thanks bhi. " she raised her eyes questioningly.

"woh maa ki bare mein yaad dilaane ke liye."

"maa ka phone aaya tha sham ko, shayad isiliye . warna mujhe bhi unki yaad nahin aata shayad.. Main apne hi duniya mein itni ghum hoon ki kisi aur ka khayal hi nahin . Bas bauji ka gussa sab ke upar dikhaa rahi hoon." She smiled grimly.

Mayank placed his hand on her cheek ," its ok. Itna guilty feel karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai. tumhari jagah koi aur hota tho woh bhi aisa hi react kartha. "

Nupur placed her hand on his , one on her own cheeks and pulled another onto her lap.

"mayank, tum mujse pyar kaise kar sakthe ho? Main kuch bhi teek taak nahin kar sakthi, tum ek dum perfect ho. Main kitne baar tumhe bahar logon ke saamne embarrass kiya hai jaise ki aaj canteen mein ..." as he made to interrupt her,she shook her head indicating to let her continue and he just squeezed her hand .

"main sab ka gussa, bauji ka, gunjan ka, samrat ka, adhiraj ka sabka tumhare upar hi nikaal thi hoon. Jab kabhi kuch galat hota hai, tho main tumhe hi dosh deti hoon. Aur tho aur main tumhara khayaal bhi nahin rakthi. Main khaana ya breakfast bhi nahin banathi, jab banathi hoon, tab kharab hota hain jaise ki aaj namak zyaada tha . aur tum, tum ne khaa liya." She said complainingly. She was complaining to him that he never seemed to complain about her faults where as all she did was find fault .

Mayank took both her hands in his hands and leaning towards her, said," tho main complain karna start kardetaa hoon. Kal se sab ke bare main. Jab tum apne saare kapde phailake rakhthi ho, tab. Jab tum sone ke baad apna bed nahin banathi ho tab. Jab tum sink ka tap teek se bandh nahin karthi , tab. Jab tum khanna banana ke baad kitchen ko clean nahin karthi , tab. " he smilingly stopped for a breath.

Nupur pulled her hands away and said," itna kuch complain karne ki zaroorat nahin hain. Main bhi insaan hoon. Tumhari tarah koi bhagwaan nahin ki sab kuch perfect karoo."

Mayank burst out laughing and bending further , kissed her on her cheek affectionately.

"mayank, mujhe bas yahin dar laga rahtha hai ki tum waqt ke saath mera saara khaamiyaan jaan jaogi aur mujhse pyaar nahin karoge."

Mayank sighed," tum itna insecure kyun ho nupur? Pehle tho itna saara doubts nahin tha"

"pata nahin mayank, jabse shaadi hui hai tab se yehi lagtha hai ki kuch na kuch galat hoga."

Mayank knew she had these insecurities because her father had blamed her. She felt that if her father who had looked after her all these years could throw her out because of her mistakes, so would mayank , inspite of his love for her. But he also knew she didn't realise it. There was no use trying to explain to her, he could only keep her happy, shower her with all his love and hope things would get better in the future.

He pulled her into his arms and hugged her tight.

"chodo, kuch nahin hoga. Tum bolo, maa ne kya kaha? ."

Snuggling close to him, "kuch nahin, bas pooch rahi thi ki..."she stopped feeling awkward to say shilpa had asked where they were going for their honeymoon.

"ki.."

"ki hum dono kitna jagda kar rahe hai." she said and moved back to let him see the glint in her eye.

"aur tum ne kya kaha?"

"yehi ki, unka bte ke dimaakh mein jo chemical reaction hota tha mujhe dekh ke, woh abhi tak aisa hi hai, nahin zyaada hogaya hai, tho jagda roz hota hai." she replied naughtily.

"nahin nupur, ab tumhe dekh ke chemical reaction mera dil mein hota hai, dimaakh mein nahin." He retorted back laughing .

Nupur felt her cheeks turn red and pushing him away, moved further back leaving a gap between them and made to get up but Mayank covered the gap by bending forwards and quickly holding her wrist," ab kaha jaana hai?"

" kitchen mein light off karne ke liye." He let her hand off, lying down on his back , said," ok. "

as she walked away feeling a little lost that he had let her go, she heard him say," yahaan ka bhi light off kardena." with a hint of naughtiness.

she immediately felt her face which was already pink, burn with a sudden shyness.
Edited by np18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi, for all those who asked for MN - which is everyone really including me
😊☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part!!
loved it...
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath
Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath
Ho chaandni jab tak raat deta hai har koi saath
Tum magar andheron mein na chhodna mera haath

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein
Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein
Wafadaari ki vo rasmein nibhayenge hum tum kasmein
Ek bhi saans zindagi ki jab tak ho apne bas mein

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Dil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahin
Silsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahin
Dil ko mere hua yakeen hum pehle bhi mile kahin
Silsila ye sadiyon ka koi aaj ki baat nahin

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz





and yes really want to add that.. finally.. you have shown some.. romantic environment between mayur..thank you so much
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Update!!👏 The last part was hilarious!🤣 But please add some more of SaJan!😒
Thanks for the PM, Continue Soon!...👍🏼
Love,
Nivriti
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww... such an awesum update!!!
i'm soo glad... finally u updated abt MN...nd only MN..😃
part 24 ws really shweet, cute n adorable...
luvd d MN convos...
n mayu.. applyin pain balm 2 nups..☺️
luvd it 2 d bits!
continue soon!!
thnx 4 d pm!🤗

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