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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello guyz...😊

m come up with my first ss after along time as i already wrote an os n got unbelieveable respone...h
i dont know how mch i did justice to ths ss but i tried my level best to make it interesting for u...
i am writing ss for many dayz but cant make it to complete...

yesterday an idea just came up to my mind i wrote it...

fiza: as u insisting me for many days to write sumthg.here i am.hope i wont dissapoint u...😃

hope u like it guyz...


with love
dr maha

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PROMISE

Ptaaakh'''..!!!

Mom: Yeh kaisei awaz hai ?

Dadi: hi hi, kiya hugaya bahu'..? koi dhamaka hua hai kiya?

Dad: yeh aapki sahabzadi ki harkat hai.aj phir sheesha toor diya hai'.

Mom: uff kia karoo mai iss ladki ka? Kaun kahay ga k ye ladki hai?

Dadi: aray jab hi tu mei kehti hu k is ki jaldi shadi kerdi tab hi sudhray gi nai tu hath se nikal jayei gi.

Nupur silently came and hugd her' hello dadi'.

Dadi: hello ki bachi yeh kia kiya hai?

Nupur: aray dadi cricket mai tu aisa hota hai aur phir jab nupur khelai aur sheesha na totai aisa kia husakta hai '.she said with proudness''.

Mom: beta kch tu ladkiyoo wali harket karoo. Kapdai bhi ladko ki tarah pehenti hu'.kal ko sasural walai kiya kahayei gai?

Nupur: kahayigai.. wah wah hmai tu cricketer baho mili hai''she winked and lol...

Maa maine shadi nai kerni atleast not for 4 years'..as I want to spend time with you''

Mom: beta ladkiyaa apnai gharoo mai hi achi lagti hai''

Kiya mai itni buri lagti hu app logo ko k ap log mjhe dur kerna chatai hai ..she made a childish face''.whn dadi saw her she melted ..hug her and said tht will do whtever u want.okii''.. aisa kabhi mat kehna k tu hmai buri lagti hai tu tu hmari jaan hia''.

Nupur: phir aap hmara sath doogi na''

Dadi: haa dogii sath'..

Nupur: promise:

Dadi: haa promise''.

She left with the smile''.

Nupur is the only child of bhushan family..she is an apple of the eye'she is more like a tom boy type'wearing jeans, t-shirts, pants her fav attires''..playing cricket, tennis all are her favourite past time..

She has done a MBA in advertising.her only funda in life is to enjoy and take the best out of it''.inspite of all this she is very clumpsy '''..every week no no no every 2nd day she broke sumthg'..

Nupur best frnd is diya.she is a sister to her.she knows her since childhood.dia is engage and will soon tie a knot''.she everytime convinced her to get ready for marriage but she ignored'.as nupur rejected 100's of proposal and now her family is also fed up'..

Diya pls aab tub hi mjhey sab ki tarah lecture maat daina''.mjhe abhi shadi nai kerni ..shadi is very a boring thg pata nai tujhay q itna interest hai shadi kernai mai''.

Dia: uff nupur aab mai tujhy aur nai samjha sakti 'aab tu lagta hai koi aasman se utray ga jo tujhey sudharay bhi aur piyar bhi kerna sikhayi'''.

Dia: chal ready huja shopping chaln ahai''

Nupur: sachii''.aabhi aayei ready hu''..


They both went for shopping at mall dia entered into cosmetic area and nupur as usual she cant stick to one place so she just startd roaming around having a juice with her'.

Nupur saw a beautiful t-shirt'. enterd the shop and asked for tht shirt'..meanwhile another person came and asked for the same shirt'..


Shopkeeper came back and said we have only 1 piece left''.nupur grab tht shirt and said this is mine as I came first'.


q? aap ka nam likha hai iss pai'.? Pehlay maine issko daikha tha issliyei yeh meri hai..he trying to snatch it frm nupur'''.

Nupur: sharam nai aati ladki se jagda kertai hui?

Mayank: ohh tu ap ladki hai? He said with excitement''

Nupur: wht do u mean? She said it with full of rage'deikhayei nai daita''.aankhai kharab hai kiya?

Mayank: deikh hi tu raha hu he said it with zeal'.mera matlab hai ladkoo ki shirt ap lai rahai tu maine soocha k aap''.. he smiled'..

Nupur: kiya socha aap nai '.haa kiya ''? Buhat aachay se janti hu tum jaisei ladko ko ladkiyoo se baat kernai ka bahana dhodhhtai hu'''

Mayank: excuse me''..mai bahana nai dhoodta ladkiyaa mjhse baat kernai ko marti hai'''

Nupur: poor girls'''.aankhai kharab hugii unki''.

Anyway yeh shirt meri hai aur mai loogii gi isskoo'''

They both startd to fight and thn voice came as the shirt has been Cleave..Both looked eachother with frown look''..

Nupur: waise bhi mjhey yeh ziyada pasand nai aayei tum hi rakhoo issko'''

Mayank: aacha kharab hugayei tu tum rakhoo ''.chaloo nikaloo paise '..daikhyei bhi sahib apki shirt inn madam nai kharab ki hai tu app in se paise laileijei'''he was abt to move whn nupur grab his hand and said'''..

Nupur: ohh hello mr'..Mayank my name is mayank'.''.he said it with a broad smile'. Wht ever''..wht do u think of urself? Haa''. Yeh pagal kisi aur ko banana'..yeh shirt tum nai kharab ki hai tumhi paisei doo'''.

Mayank: jii nai madam'aur waisei bhi mai ittni cheap shirts laita bhi nai hu''tum pai hi yeh suit karay giii''.

Nupur burst out and spit a juice on him''

Mayank: wht have u done'? He was abt to move towards her whn he heard his name''..

Dia: mayank?

Mayank: dia tum? Wht a surprise?

Dia: ya'..kaisei hu? Yaha kaise? Kab aayei?

Mayank: theik hu''kal hi aaya hu'..? tum kaisei hu?

Dia: mai bhi thei k hu'''ohh .meet nupur my best frnd''.nupur he is mayank ur jijus frnd'''

Nupur saw him with annoyance'' mil chuki hu iss kharoos, batemezz, aatitude se'''.

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Do tell me whther u like it or not'. And pls leave ur precious comment''😊



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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one dear and nice start tooo
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Hay very nice Part cont soon
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lol...very cute do pm me
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heyyy loved the starting do pm me plzzz
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Originally posted by: mahakmev

lol...very cute do pm me



thanks a lot dear...

sure will pm u...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maha
plz update nest part
waiitng for ur next update

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when are you updating apu?
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Originally posted by: roshneerakhali

when are you updating apu?

will update on sun...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 2

Dia: mai bhi thei k hu'''ohh .meet nupur my best frnd''.nupur he is mayank ur jijus frnd'''

Nupur saw him with annoyance'' mil chuki hu iss kharoos, batemezz, aatitude se'''.

Dia: aray tumloogo ko kiya hugay ahai..yeh ghar nai hai'

pointed towards nupur.zaror tumnai jagda start kia huga'.

N: maine nai tumharai iss soo called mr.Kharoos nai kia hai.

M: kiya kaha' maine? he become annoy and just move towards nupur whn dia interruptd'.aacha aab bas karoo kitna scene create karoo gait um loog'.hum chaltai hai mayank tumse phir miltai hai'.tc.bye'.

M: okii bye'he said inteasing tone to nupur'..

Nupur ignores him and left''

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At nupurs house:

Dia: uff'.with irrition samajh nai aaraha kaisa dress loo'

N: iss mai tension laine ki kiya baat hai'.koi simple sa shalwar suit loo aur phenloo''kiya zarorat hai itna kharcha kernai ki'?

D: r u mad? Ye shadi hai koi school function nai.sab ki nazrrai mjhpai hugi'..and I want it to be look fab'''she said with overconfident'.

N: haa haa sab tu yahay daikhnai aayei gai k dia madam nai kiya pehena hai'..tv pai live aayai ga''breaking news k sath''chal'.said it with taunt'..

D: tu nai samjhay gi k yeh din haar ladki k liyei buhat imp hota hai jab teri shadi hugi na tab maloom chalay ga tujhey'''

N: uff.pata nai tum loog itnai heavy dreeses kaisei pehen laitai hu.mai tu jeans aur kurti pehenoogi tumhari sahdi pai soch liya hai maine.itnai heavy dress mjhse nai sambhaltai ''.

D: with open mouth''😲 nupur tum jeans pehenoogi''? For god sake pls insanoo walaii kapdai pehenoo'..

N: q yeh insanoo walai kapdai nai''.itni cool lagoo gi''she winked at her'..😉

Whn they both fighting over dreeses dadi enters the room and listened wht nupur said and becum anger''..

Dadi: cool ki bachi😡'..she angrily lookin at her''khaberdar agar tu nai ye moyei jeans ka nam bhi liya tu'..tooba tooba aaj kal ki ladkiyaa ko zaraa sharam haya nai hai'..koi bada buzurg betha hai uss ka bhi khayal nai bas jeans moyeeii pehenloo''..

Hmarai zamanai mai tu saar se bhi dupatta nai utarta tha''..aur aaj kal ki ladkiyaa'' she pointed ths time dia as she wore mini skirt''..tujhey sharam nai hai yeh kiya pehena hai '..kapdai chotai hugayai thei kiya''( dia feel embarrassed😳 and lookin down while nupur was laughing)

N: lekin dadi''.

Dadi: chup ker'.mai aab teri liyei kapdai bano gi aur vo tujhey pehenay paray gai'.sunliyaa''.

N: meri jeans''.making baby face''.

Dadi: bhar mai gayei teri jeans'''aray dum nai ghut jata tum loogoo ka.itni tang jeans pehen k''..

N: dadi''.ek bar ap bhi try karoo .kasam se elizebeth ko peechai chorr doo gi''.she winked at dia''.and dia agreed with her''.

Dadi: hiting on her''.hey bhagwaan iss omer mai mjhey kia gunah ker warahay hai ''..she left the room with sadness and dia and nupur burst out with laughter'''.😆

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Dia parents was in abroad so all the preparations of wedding is being done by nupurs parents as she was like her daughter'.dia and nupur decided to buy wedding dress together so they went for the shopping with adhiraj and mayank'..nupur all the time botherd dia tht y he offered mayank ''.

While shopping nupur create a scene..she went in perfume shop and trying different perfumes'.she tried atleast 25 perfumes and put together in line''shop keeper now seems to be irritaed whn mayank enters and said''..

Mayank: wht r u doing..?

N: r u blind? Nazar nai aarah aperfume try ker rahi hu''give him a tough look and again busy in perfumes'.

M: abhi tak koipasand nai aaya?

Shopkeeper: madam pls aab koi pasand kerlijei ..hum apko aur nai try kernai daisaktai''

N: meri marzi mai jab marzi try karoo'tum chup karay rahu'..

M: nupur aisa nai hota''don't try to create a scene now everyone is watching u''..koi pasand hai tu loo nai tu chaloo yaha se''

N: mai nai jao gii tumhay jana hai tu jao''.

M: theik m going''. Kch hua tu mjhey mat kehna''went out'

N: haa haa jao jaiese moi koi toor phoor karoo gi na'''.

Shopkeeper: madam pls hmarai aur bhi customers w8 ker rahay hai ap pls select keijei''.

N: mjhey koi pasand nai aaya ap logo k pas itni variety hi nai hai''she said this with self-importance as she was the expert in perfumes''.:)🤣

Shpkeper: he becum mad..pasand kerna hota nai hai aajatai hai moo uthak''hmara bhi time waste kiya aur khud ka bhi''.

Nupur hears and turned around kiya kaha maine time waste kiya hai'..aaray tum hotai kaun hu mjhey yeh kehnay walai'..tumjantai nai hut um nai kis se panga liya hi'..she smack her hand on glass and 2 perfumes drop on the ground''.😲😲

For the time being nupur couldn't understd wht happen but whn she came to her senses she atsrtd in high tone'.awww😲''yeh apnai kiya kia bhai sahib''? Apna hi loss kerdiya?shame on u''.she trying to console him'.. Ab apnai owner ko khud jawab daina''.she was abt to leave whn shopkeeper starts''madam yeh apnai kiya hai aur ulta hmay kehrahi hai apko aab iss k paise dainai paray gai ''

Nupur: maine nai kiya''.kis nai kaha tha k perfume ki bottle ko corner pai rakhoo''ap ki ghalti hai khud bhugtoo'm going''..

Meanwhile mayank ,dia and adhiraj sort out the pblm but nupur was stil blaming tht shopkeeper''.and dia, mayank and adhiraj were just laughing out😆''as they were thinking wht kind of person she is'how could she do such type of stuffs'''..and mayank was just drool over her''

After the hectic shopping all came to nupurs house for the dinner''..nupurs parents greatly impressed by mayank specially dadi'..moment of happiness was going on whn shilpa ante and adhiraj went to the room as she want to show thm their weddings things'..

Dadi: looking with loads of love at mayank''.. kitna piyara bacha hai'..

N: dadi shakal(face) pai nai jayei''..shakal se tu monkey bhi cute lagta hai''..😛

Dadi hits her aisei nai kehtai ghr aayei mehmann(guest) ko'..and depart for kitchen to bring sum sweets for mayank''.

M: with smile'''dadi '.yeh apki patakhaa aisei hi thei bachpan se ya abhi hui hai'''

N: ohh hello' yeh patakhaa kis ko kaha hai''😡

M: maine patakhaa tu patakhaa ko kaha hai tumhay q bura lag raha hai'..said it with innocently''.

N: she anger at him'' tumnai mjhey kaha hai ..tumhari itni himmat...

M: himmat tu aur bhi buhat kch kernai ki hai tumhaa tu kaho''..he winked at her and gave her a naughty smile''..

N: daikhoo mr.kharoos..!!mjhey se panga mat laina nai tu pachtao gai''.

M: yahi tu mai chata hu'.she strted day dreaming.

Aacha ek baat tu batao tum kabhi piyar se baat nai kersakti.yeh haar waqt ghusai mai q rehti hu''..?

N: meri marzi mai jaise marzi baat karoo'..tum ki ko kiya'.? Showed him tongue'.

M: with mischievous smile''. maine socha if tum piyar se baat karoo tu kiya pata hmai bhi kch kernai moka milay''. ☺️

N: kiya kaha?'..she becum hell furious at him and just pick up a cushion and throw at him'.mayank quickly bent down and at the same moment dadi was cuming out holding a plate'..and cushion strikes her and plate fall on ground'..

Nupur shocked..shit yeh kiya hugaya hai''.?

Dadi: hi hi maar gayei'.kaun kamb***t hai ye'..?

M: awww'😲😲..maar diya dadi ko''ran towards dadi hold her and said nupur tumhay sharam nai aati dadi ko maartai hui '''kiya bigada hai bechari dadi nai'..he winked at her'..nupur becum more furious as she burst out at any moment''.

Ap theik hai dadi?

Dadi: haa beta''

N: sory dadai mai tu mayank ko'.

M: kia mjhey''..? made sad face😔''daikha dadi apnai apki patakhaa mjhey maar rahi thei '.mai tu bas issko samjha raha tha k aise harkatai maat kiya karoo'..yaha guest ko agar aisei treat kiya jata hai tu mai nai aaoga'

Dadi: iss patakhaa ko tu bhagwaan pochay '..aray beta tu isski baat ko dil pai mat laga.yeh tu aisei hi hai'..

Mayank was still controlling his laugh and whn dadi left he laugh out louder''😆

Nupur was hell shocked at mayank behavior she cant believe tht mayank can go tht far'..i'll surely kill u'..and ran towards her room''..left mayant think abt her and made him smile'''

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Hope u like it'..as ths ss is basically on nupur and mayank nook jhhook so m just taking ths ss on tht pattern''.


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Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago

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