MayUr ss Destined To be Loved last part page 145

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Index

1.mayur OS kabhi yadon me aau -page 1
2.Mayur OS Reflexion of love-page 10
3.ArTi OS Tu jaane na...Part-1-page 18
4.ArTi OS Tu jaane na...Part-2-page 25
5.Mayur OS Waiting for u-page 31
6.Mayur SS Destined to be loved-part1 page 38
part-2 page 42
part-3 page 46
part-4 page 52
part -5 page 58
part-6 page 63
part-7 page 69
part-8 page 75
part-9 page 82
part-10 page 89
part-11 page 95
part-12 page 100
part-13 page 108
part-14 page 113
Story till now+Promo VM on page 105
Part-15 page 117
Part-16 page 123
Part-17 page 127
Part-18 page 133
Part-19 page 137
part-20 page 139
Last Part-145
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MAYur OS -kabhi yadon me aau...

It was a cold ,dark night , a young boy wearing black jacket walking towards his apartment...
feeling cold in this damn chilly weather he tried to warm his hands by rubbing them continuously... his face
was showing his tiredness...eyes were sleepy too.

"bas ghar pahunch ke so jaau...ufff this project...seems non ending..."thought Mayank as he reached to his floor .

But to his surprise there was a huge crowd on his floor ...
"Itni raat ko itne log yahan...kya hua hoga..."thought mayank confused,surprised and shocked as well.

"excuse me!Can u tell me what happend?why such a big crowd here???"he asked to a lady infront of him.
"arey tumhe nahi pta ...Nupur ...wo apne bhushan ji ki beti...she...she has passed away...aaj dopaher ko... " told d lady in sad,low
volume.

what??????????

"nupur.. ki death... how...????"

"hmmm...ye to hona hi tha...poor girl...she was suffering from brain tumour from past 6 months...she was in very critical condition...
sweet girl...she never forget to wish me whenever we met...full of life...never having any complaints to anyone...but no one can fight against
one's destiny ..." the lady was murmuring in her own thoughts and Mayank was in his own...

"how can she die???how???"

Mayank came to his room thinking of that strange girl...'Strange'...yes it is the perfect word for her...she was strange otherwise who can smile
in so much pain?who can be so full of energy,full of life,full of happiness knowing that this would not last for a long time?
At least he can't...for him life is always been a burden which he is carrying just because he don't have courage to end it up!

"u will understand the worth of life when u have the fear of loosing it"Mayank remembers her words ..."Mayank u don't know the
pleasure of living,u don't know the pleasure in making someone happy, u don't know how it feels when u bring smile on someone's face..."

Mayank was thinking about that day when the Girl Nupur bhushan knocked his door...and Mayank opened irritatidly thinking who has come to
disturb him.

"yes?"asked Mayank ...trying to recognize her.
"Hello I am Nupur ur neighbour..."
"so?"
"actually i have just arrived and my uncle in not at home and i don't have keys too...so can i wait for him...if u don't mind.."said nupur and smiled.
"come in..."said mayank unwillingly.
Nupur came in examining his room...there were some old paintings on walls,a chair,table,some books and an music system with a thick layer of
dust,seems like no one care to clean it.
nupur opens the closed windows and feels the breeze ...
"tum windows close kyu rakhte ho?"
"aise hi..."
"and ye dust...tum inhe saaf kyu nahi karte mayank?kya tum in sabka use nahi karte?"
she looked at mayank commanding eyes and tone...but mayank said nothing.
"wowww ...music system dekho tumhare laparwahi se ye bechara bimar ho gaya hai...common clean it nahh..."
This time Mayank's patience surrendered..."mujhe ye aise hi pasand hai...aur tumhe agar problem hai to apne ghar me jakar cleaning karo..."replied mayank angrily.
"arey tum naraz kyu ho rahe ho...sirf clean karne ko to kaha hai...kar do"said nupur calmly.
"who d hell is she to order me?does this girl don't have any manners or its her fav timepaas to visit others home and commanding like this?why she is trying to change me?
pta nahi kab iske uncle aayenge aur ye yaha se jayegi..."thought mayank.
nupur was examinig each and every thing in d room and continously giving him suggestions to make them better or to organise his totally unorganised room and his
unorganised life too.suddenly she saw the aishtray on table with lots of aish.
"do u smoke?"
"yes"
"why?"
"this is none of ur business...can u just sit at one place and wait calmly for ur uncle?"replied mayank annoyingly
"u know cigaurete is injurious for health,for life"
"listen don't start lecture okay...and about life...huh...my life is worth of nothing for me or for anyone..."shouted mayank.


"listen i am sorry...i don't want to give u any lecture but i just want to say that u'll realise the worth of life when u have fear of loosing it!"said nupur calmly.
"worth of life...huh...i don't want to live"
"Mayank,i don't know what had happened with u...i don't know anything about ur past but u noe nothing is larger than life...tumhe pta hai
mai aaj kisi ke ghar me jakar wait kar sakti thi but i came to u because i wanted to know why have u packed urself in ur home?kyu tum kisi se baat nahi karte?milte nahi?
i think tum is apartment me kisi ko jante bhi nahi aur na koi tumhe..."

"mai kisi ko janna bhi nahi chahta...mujhe kisi se koi rishta nahi banana...i have seen changing relationships and only i know how it feels when ur closed one leave u alone."

"Mayank! u have locked all doors of ur heart...try and open them may be some one enter and change it as i have enetered and changed ur room"

Mayank looked at her,her eyes were shining,her lips were broad with smile and he lost in her eyes for a while...when the doorbell rang.

nupur opened it,"arey uncle aap aa gaye...aap chaliye mai aati hu"

"okay Mr.Mayank sharma...mere uncle aa gaye..mai bhi chalti hu,sorry to disturb u" she said naughtily and winked.
"phir kabhi aaogi?"asked mayank
"han aaungi"
"kaise?like a fresh breez?"asked mayank and surprisingly he smiled.
"nahi...like an experience in ur life...a fresh breeze blows away but experience stays with life"she said and disappeared.


"she rightly said an experience stays with life...forever...as u r the best experience of my life and u will always alive in my heart...forever..Ms.Nupur Bhushan..death can not separate u from my life" thought mayank and smiled.

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Faria. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey ruchi
it was a very sad yet beautiful story
my eyes bcme moist while reading it
ahhhhhh u have written it beautifully
loved it dear
do write more
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brilliant work Ruchi .
but why such sad story? want a happy- shappy one from you next.
Edited by shubhie - 14 years ago
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ooommmggggggg Ruchi my friend
wooooooooooooooooooooooo very beautiful FF
wooooooooooooooo very touching story
u are brilliant story writer
keeping rocking

i must says u are one of the outstanding story writer
but yaar this part is very sad i hope next part u ll' be update exciteing
soooo i am looking forwards
all the best 👍🏼 and thanks for PM me
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awesome brilliant mindblowing loved it jaaneman
u write really well dear
this is is sad but i loved it
do write more
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tum logo ne phirse meri nups ko maar dala.......😭
b/w it was a sad story bt very meaningful.........
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Ruchi ist congrates for ur ist OS...
and My eyes are teary now....
very nice OS...
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Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

tum logo ne phirse meri nups ko maar dala.......😭
b/w it was a sad story bt very meaningful.........

Chal ab sad na ho....😊
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Originally posted by: -Faria-

Hey ruchi
it was a very sad yet beautiful story
my eyes bcme moist while reading it
ahhhhhh u have written it beautifully
loved it dear
do write more


thanx a lott fariha😃

ur comments means a lott to me..thank u so much for liking it😃
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Originally posted by: shubhie

brilliant work Ruchi .
but why such sad story? want a happy- shappy one from you next.


arey yaar was missing MAYur...and was sad too...
but next time pakka happy one😃

thanx for liking it🤗

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