Discover True Love -Sajan OS With *my First VM* - Page 11

Beautiful os.cant believe that its ur 1st os.nice writing style.Arranged marr on SaJan.wonderful

Originally posted by: cool_tuli

OMGGGGGG.....
Aashi mujhe Samrat se nai tumse pyaar hai..
Or mai bilkul b thik nai hu..... ☺️ 😍
ye sab.... Omggg this was such a surprising thing..... I always applauded for ur writings but now i guess i need to clap more for ur vm making.... 👏
I really don mind reading such OSs n relating them to such B-E-A-U-Ti-Ful Vms.....
Loved it tooo the core... yaar i think u shud jus keep on doin all these things.... u r sooo perfect with creativity! Ur mind is soo transparent, soo wonderful, soo lovable...
N this post or update was superb..... amazing.... sooooo adorable.... I love you dear. N plss do write sum more of such OSs k!!? Wud luv to read them.... short n sweet!! 😳 😳 😳
This story will always b close to me... coz this is sumthing i actly njoyed!!!!!! 😃 😃
Thanxx for this post... 🤗 🤗 🤗

owwww tuliiiiiiii 🤗 🤗 🤗 love u sweetheart heart 🤗 🤗 🤗 u r so encouraging thanks a tone for ur wonderful and boosting reply it means lot to me 🤗 🤗 🤗 i m seriously glad u liked it muahhh 🤗 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Beautiful os.cant believe that its ur 1st os.nice writing style.Arranged marr on SaJan.wonderful

dear OS is not my first i wrote some OSs in past but this vm was my first attempt 😳 thanks a tone for reading OS and watching VM it means lot to me 🤗 i m seriously glad u liked it 😳

Dearest Aashi,

OS Very interesting concept of bringing SaJan together through an arranged marriage. Quite inspired! ⭐️

I loved this touching line, so simple yet significant. "being small town morena's girl she always followed and obeyed by all but he gave her freedom to follow her heart ,she was always amazed with fact without saying anything how can he understands what she wants and not she recalled their first meet for their arrange marriage" I loved how you illuminated a simple truth that we only 'recognize' our companions as they affect our hearts not merely by their presence alone as commonly depicted by TV/Films. @bold, caught my attention. Again beautifully expounded. That subtle act of his that unknowingly and quite unintentionally became the key that gave him access to her soul.⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved the third paragraph! The manner in which you take a understated moment of courtship and intricately weave a layer through Gunjan's comparison with a neighbouring couple. In this way you highlight a common human trait to compare. We compare to our idealistic ideas, society's conditioning and TV/film stories. Excellently done! 👏

I loved how you effortlessly brought in how love begins to suffuse our realities and our souls by staining everything with the colours of our beloved. Everything reminds her of her beloved because he has come to be everything she loves. I loved this cute instance, beautifully penned 👏⭐️"saying to share him everything which she wants to share to her friends whenever she will feel to tell anything to her friend he will be always there for her and he made atmosphere lively saying if u will have any complain with ur husband ur best friend samrat will be always there for u he will def scold ur husband mr shergill"

Again I loved how you embroidered upon the common feeling of missing a person through comparison to that anxiety felt upon meeting them for that first time. Just genious! My favourite sentiment of the piece. Very insightful! ⭐️⭐️⭐️her heart beat racing more and more now As was mine! You quickened the pace of action of the piece and excellently pulled the reader's heart into her racing heartbeat! Excellent!⭐️⭐️⭐️

back into reality she became restless as if she has lost her one part of life she knew that's the love So true, at the moment we lose something is the moment we understand its worth!"A single rose can be my garden, a single friend my world" He loves her, that is enough AND it is everything! For which she gives her heart openly, miraculously, and generously. Thus, they 'share' each other.

Just beautifully written and with the most wonderful insights and detailed comparisons. A joy to read!

VM. I loved the way you layered your vm like your os, with that echoing of your introductory message through use of text from it, the lyrics and words that encapsulate the moment! Very well done! ⭐️

I loved that 'in dreams' texted moment @1:37. Very cute! 😃 Again I loved how you layered upon the whole with that end dialogue of Samrat and Gunjan, illuminating their complimenting bond.

The song was excellently chosen, 👏aadha ishq, for like SaJan, loves grows and slowly but surely, gradually and eventually, completes itself! You wonderfully selected and choreographed the piece 👏 The fitted the OS perfectly! Very well done! ⭐️The scenes augment the tone set by your os, and so just like Samrat and Gunjan, they compliment each other gracefully. The editing was very well done for your first attempt, I was very much impressed! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

@2:09, for beshamar raate, but that paas paas aate..ghum ho jaate hai' just excellently chosen and edited, the timing Brilliant! ⭐️ Very cute use of 'Bekali mein jal ke' @2:22, again the manner you embroider details, weaving the lyrics, message and SaJan together! Just excellent!

I look forward to your own development of this new found means to express yourself.

Very well done, Aashi!

Love Sabah.

Originally posted by: a little faith

Dearest Aashi,

OS Very interesting concept of bringing SaJan together through an arranged marriage. Quite inspired! ⭐️

I loved this touching line, so simple yet significant. "being small town morena's girl she always followed and obeyed by all but he gave her freedom to follow her heart ,she was always amazed with fact without saying anything how can he understands what she wants and not she recalled their first meet for their arrange marriage" I loved how you illuminated a simple truth that we only 'recognize' our companions as they affect our hearts not merely by their presence alone as commonly depicted by TV/Films. @bold, caught my attention. Again beautifully expounded. That subtle act of his that unknowingly and quite unintentionally became the key that gave him access to her soul.⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved the third paragraph! The manner in which you take a understated moment of courtship and intricately weave a layer through Gunjan's comparison with a neighbouring couple. In this way you highlight a common human trait to compare. We compare to our idealistic ideas, society's conditioning and TV/film stories. Excellently done! 👏

I loved how you effortlessly brought in how love begins to suffuse our realities and our souls by staining everything with the colours of our beloved. Everything reminds her of her beloved because he has come to be everything she loves. I loved this cute instance, beautifully penned 👏⭐️"saying to share him everything which she wants to share to her friends whenever she will feel to tell anything to her friend he will be always there for her and he made atmosphere lively saying if u will have any complain with ur husband ur best friend samrat will be always there for u he will def scold ur husband mr shergill"

Again I loved how you embroidered upon the common feeling of missing a person through comparison to that anxiety felt upon meeting them for that first time. Just genious! My favourite sentiment of the piece. Very insightful! ⭐️⭐️⭐️her heart beat racing more and more now As was mine! You quickened the pace of action of the piece and excellently pulled the reader's heart into her racing heartbeat! Excellent!⭐️⭐️⭐️

back into reality she became restless as if she has lost her one part of life she knew that's the love So true, at the moment we lose something is the moment we understand its worth!"A single rose can be my garden, a single friend my world" He loves her, that is enough AND it is everything! For which she gives her heart openly, miraculously, and generously. Thus, they 'share' each other.

Just beautifully written and with the most wonderful insights and detailed comparisons. A joy to read!

VM. I loved the way you layered your vm like your os, with that echoing of your introductory message through use of text from it, the lyrics and words that encapsulate the moment! Very well done! ⭐️

I loved that 'in dreams' texted moment @1:37. Very cute! 😃 Again I loved how you layered upon the whole with that end dialogue of Samrat and Gunjan, illuminating their complimenting bond.

The song was excellently chosen, 👏aadha ishq, for like SaJan, loves grows and slowly but surely, gradually and eventually, completes itself! You wonderfully selected and choreographed the piece 👏 The fitted the OS perfectly! Very well done! ⭐️The scenes augment the tone set by your os, and so just like Samrat and Gunjan, they compliment each other gracefully. The editing was very well done for your first attempt, I was very much impressed! ⭐️⭐️⭐️

@2:09, for beshamar raate, but that paas paas aate..ghum ho jaate hai' just excellently chosen and edited, the timing Brilliant! ⭐️ Very cute use of 'Bekali mein jal ke' @2:22, again the manner you embroider details, weaving the lyrics, message and SaJan together! Just excellent!

I look forward to your own development of this new found means to express yourself.

Very well done, Aashi!

Love Sabah.

OMG sabah i m speechless after reading ur wonderful take on this OS and VM so much glad and happy to have ur wonderful and outstanding reply on this thread seriously touched with ur wonderful and boosting words it means lot to me seriously as beginner its just kind one wonderful boost to make more vms thanks a tone sweety i m so much thankful to for this wonderful reply 🤗🤗🤗

di im very angry with you........😡😡😡😡

Originally posted by: ria_lovesajan

di im very angry with you........😡

u wrote an os and that too with a VM and didn't even sent me a PM????????😭😭😭

sweety i pmed all why u didn't get 😕oww i m seriously sorry i pmed all but i guess it didn't reach u 🤗 oww kindly accept my apologize i don't know how it happened 🤗do kindly read OS and watch VM please 😳

Originally posted by: aashizin

sweety i pmed all why u didn't get 😕oww i m seriously sorry i pmed all but i guess it didn't reach u 🤗 oww kindly accept my apologize i don't know how it happened 🤗do kindly read OS and watch VM please 😳

Originally posted by: ria_lovesajan

aaaawwwiiiieeee di its completely ok.....😛😛

well i'll read it and watch the vm....and then give comment...till then you have to wait.😉

oww thats seriously kind of u sweetheart 🤗🤗 oww i will be waiting hon take ur time 🤗🤗

awesome OS and VM aashi...👏