Mayur FF part 4 updated on pg 14

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i (mitali) n my friend ketki have tried to write an ff on mayur so itz our first try hope u all like it
MAYUR FF
Character sketch

Mayank sharma

Mayank sharma is a cool , shy n caring person who stays in usa . he is too rich but have no attitude or u can say does not show off this wealth n all. cause of some reasons destiny takes him to india. he is unknowing of the fact that something is waiting for him in india that will change his life completely.

Nupur bhushan

Nupur bhushan a bubbly , sensitive n a caring person . she is too much pampered by her family as she is the only child . her easy going life takes a twist n make her meet mayank sharma lets see weather this meeting will be a blissful one or like a bad dream

Part 1
(In usa )

Mayank's dad was insisting him to go back to India to his mom (mayank's parents had a divorce so he used to be half time in India n half time in usa)

Mayank: dad I don't want to go to India mera sab kuch yaha usa main hi hai n I m very happy here mujhe waha nahi jana

Dad: nahi beta u need to go there . tumhe bohut acchi tarah se pata hai ki tumhare mom aur mera divorce ho chuka hai n as per the courts decision u have to stay with us for 8 yrs. from soo many years u were living with me but now the time has come when u must go back to ur mom n stay with her

Mayank: par dad main yeh sab kuch kaise chod sakta ho ? aur aap ka kya hoga mere bina?

Dad: beta u have to move on in your life see tumhare mom bhi tho tumhe bohut miss karte hogi na? tumne kabhi bhi unke bare main soccha hai aur tum mmere chinta chod do I m too good here

Mayank : par dad?

Dad: no beta I don't want any excuses u have to go n that's final

Mayank ; okk dad so kab jana hai?

Dad: beta tumhare parso ki flite hai

Mayank:dad itni jaldi

Dad: hain beta

Mayank: ook but I will miss u a lot

Dad: ya beta I will miss u too par kya kare ye din tho aana hi tha main chah kar ke is din ko nhi rook sakta

N then they hug each other tightly

Mayank had already started packing n at last the day arrived when he had to go to India to her mom

Mayank n his dad at airport his flite was about to arrive in half n hour. But mayank n his dad both were very upset n in that sadness they were not even speaking to each other.the silence was killing each other in their hearts n they both jst wanted to stop the time n wanted to be with each other but the fate never changes kisi ne sahi kaha hai "kismat main jo likha hota hai woh ho ke hi rehta hai" both were dying in their hearts bt a thought arouse in mayanks mind n he jst started saying

then suddenly the announcement starts in which passengers have to go for checking their luggage n then cry at his fate n taking no time hugged his dad tightly

Mayank:bye dad I will miss u love u dad hope we get too meet soon

Dad: I will miss u too beta love u n yeah ek din hum zarror wapas milega

Mayank: bye dad !

n leaves from there

The flite takes off from there n mayank lands into india😃

and guys if u all like it don't forgot to hit the like button😛 n write u r comments too , who ever wishes too read more plz tell me i will add u in my pm list😳


part 2 - pg5 😊
part 3-pg 9 😊
part 4 - pg 14 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow its great yaar
cant wait for the next part
update it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woh awsome lovely ketka keep wrreit mora
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice concept..........plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept dear!
do continue soon
nd plz add me to ur pm list 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey mitali it was very lovely thanks for pm do continue soon 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OO My Princess Wonderful start...
Really Liked it
Mayank and his Dad sharing really nice Bond...
All the Best Mitali and Ketki
Thnx for the Pm Shona...
Edited by -moona- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice start
do cont it
and plz pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start. add me to your pm list plz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice starting
add me to pm list

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