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anuja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: MayUr-ArTi_fan
Res😃

we res in samee ishtyle🤣

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anuja

@Annu111

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Posted: 13 years ago

#542

shubhu🤗

first of all i must say that the title is awesome👍🏼

i love this movie❤️

the first meeting is so nicely described😳

mayank's looks☺️

and the coffee makes me so nostalgic😳

i loved her nickname and mr mayank sharma can make anything sweet and cute to ye nick name kya cheez hai😆

and dont worry even though the central character winning and all is a cliche it is still its making the OS mast and beautiful👏

so nupur was desperate to meet mayank😉

and dia acting as the cupid made the story so cute😊

lovely confession as usual😃

loved it and the song in between too❤️

continue it if u have the further story in mind😊

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#543

awww...shubhu u made my day...

I was off but u bring smile on my face😊

It was so cute and romantic and the song is just awesome

I love it.

Love you loads...thanx *hugs

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur
Awww...Dat was BEAUTIFUL ❤️😍
such a Luvly OS...😍
read it 2 times...😳
n i was just like this while reading...😍
it was so BEAUTIFUL...😳
i just luvd reading it...❤️
Annu😳

thanks a lot Annu.
i am so glad you loved it.😊
😊

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever
after going through such a disturbing week along with my friends including u,this piece of writing actually came up as a sigh of relief...😊i m actually hving a fresh breath of air aftr reading ur os subhie..u r a writer per excellence and each n every story of urs convey the same vibes over n over again..amazing os dear..the concept is actually v different 4m all other stories i hv read so far...plz do come up wit another mayur os pretty soon..😳
thanks 4 making my day yaar🤗

awww Pallu 🤗
you too made my day.😃😃
i am very glad my OS served its purpose.it brought smile to my friends' faces.

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: acAasthamayur
RES😛
EDITED...
omg Shubhu i loved it sooo much
Loved it to bits sacchi.U were right this os is indeed innocent😆
I love the way u write ,its witty and its the kind of writing i enjoy to read...nothing OTT and full of humour haha

" sach mein jau??" asked Dia. " main abhi greek mein bol rahi thi kya??" asked Nupur" ab jaa bhi jaldi". " oh Nupur you are a sweet heart " said Dia giving her a swift hug." cya tomorrow babes!!!" and she rushed away.
It totally reminded me of my cousin...we both ae like this only😆
The kitchen scene reminded me of Damon Elena...I guess its the after effect of watching vampire diaries so much.I am pretty sure m turning into a mono maniac😳
Baki ka part was lovely and sweet
loved the ending...too cute

P.S in return of my biggg comment i want biggg reply😳

😳😳
to aakhir aapne maan hi liya ke i can write innocent .🤣🤣
last OS was a one off thing ,you could call it an aberration if you want,which i am not very comfortable writing.wo to Anu aur tu mujhe periodically poochte rehte the isliye likha gaya.😆😆
i have never watched vampire diaries. that kitchen scene is purely my imagination.
as for that greek bol rahi thi kya wala dialogue ,not only you Aasthu sisters & friends all over speak that way.😆😆
i hope you like the length of my reply.😆😆
thanks nahi bolungi warna maar khani padegi right???to isi se kaam chala leti hoon.
🤗🤗

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: anuja4mayur
shubhu🤗
first of all i must say that the title is awesome👍🏼
i love this movie❤️
the first meeting is so nicely described😳
mayank's looks☺️
and the coffee makes me so nostalgic😳
i loved her nickname and mr mayank sharma can make anything sweet and cute to ye nick name kya cheez hai😆
and dont worry even though the central character winning and all is a cliche it is still its making the OS mast and beautiful👏
so nupur was desperate to meet mayank😉
and dia acting as the cupid made the story so cute😊
lovely confession as usual😃
loved it and the song in between too❤️
continue it if u have the further story in mind😊

to aakhir meri late lateef ne comment kar hi diya.😃
🤗🤗
you know i added that song while preparing the final draft, initially it was not there, even the title was different.but the song gelled very well with the mood ,did it not??
you know the story was supposed to end here ,but both Niki & you want the next part so...
hmmm...ok i will definitely think about it.😃😃

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

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Posted: 13 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: shubhsArti

thanks a lot Niks.🤗
love you too.

Kanjoos...😳

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anuja

@Annu111

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Posted: 13 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma
😳 😳

chal mai bhi company deti hu🤣

😳😳😳

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma
Kanjoos...😳

😆
awww Niks ,sowwy darling.
first of all love you for all your lovely comments.
love you for commenting despite feeling low.
i am glad you loved Greek god & his spit fire as much as i do.
about your suggestion of continuing this same story is very interesting, i will surely try to write it.
sorry * holding my ears* jaldi jaldi mein small reply kia.😆😆
love you.🤗

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