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_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

amazing os...do pm me 4m now on..😊

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MrsJaimeFraser

@MrsJaimeFraser

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

lovely OS Shubhie.................🤗

keep writing more............😃

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever
amazing os...do pm me 4m now on..😊

Thanx Pallavi 😛

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Deblina_ArTi
lovely OS Shubhie.................🤗

keep writing more............😃

thanks Debz

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vasantha

@VasuKaShlicious

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

awesum OS shubhie... 😃 😍

loved every bit of it... hw he tried to avoid throwing hs burden on hr.. finally he ended in the way he didnt want to.. and the way she understood hm by silence without any words.. and i agree they just need eyes to knw each other.. i m sure words fall short n ths case! 😊

i would lyk to hug mehak and amy for making shubhie to post ths OS.. if nt v al hav missed this superb one! 🤗

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anuja

@Annu111

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

subhie this is awesome😳i loved it dear. do write more and ur first attempt is so nice then afterwards to u will rock😃

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: VasanthaArTi
awesum OS shubhie... 😃 😍

loved every bit of it... hw he tried to avoid throwing hs burden on hr.. finally he ended in the way he didnt want to.. and the way she understood hm by silence without any words.. and i agree they just need eyes to knw each other.. i m sure words fall short n ths case! 😊

i would lyk to hug mehak and amy for making shubhie to post ths OS.. if nt v al hav missed this superb one! 🤗

thanks a lot Vasu🤗

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: anuja4mayur
subhie this is awesome😳i loved it dear. do write more and ur first attempt is so nice then afterwards to u will rock😃

Anu 🤗, thank you for the encouraging me.

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

OMG shubie! that was so beautiful!!

firstly it was extremely well written, i am really impressed by your vocabulary and sentence structure - well done!!

then the story progression, a high-fi celebrity, which breaks up in the arms of his lover1 nothing could be better. their conversation was so real and so natural - lovely.

the intimate moments were passionate but written in a very subtle manner - excellent

and the best part was the taming to a teddy bear!

excellent and keep writing! i really enjoyed reading it and sorry for being late! and plz KEEP WRITING!..i will be waiting..

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: -Mehak
OMG shubie! that was so beautiful!!

firstly it was extremely well written, i am really impressed by your vocabulary and sentence structure - well done!!

then the story progression, a high-fi celebrity, which breaks up in the arms of his lover1 nothing could be better. their conversation was so real and so natural - lovely.

the intimate moments were passionate but written in a very subtle manner - excellent

and the best part was the taming to a teddy bear!

excellent and keep writing! i really enjoyed reading it and sorry for being late! and plz KEEP WRITING!..i will be waiting..

thank you so much Mehak,🤗 it means a lot coming from you.you along with Amy are my inspiration you know.😛