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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys..this is my first attempt of writing sumthing...about my darling...i hope it makes some sense....

sometimes in dreams
i wonder what i see

a lake with the lace of shimmering moon light
awaits for the warmth of your sight

a girl in the meadows,sings along with birds and bees
looks for you with a hope of relief

a day to brighten herself with a smile of thee
making itself worthy for the world to see...


sometimes in dreams
i wonder what i see

eyes of many awaiting for thee
to re-enter their lives ,make them happy..

wondering around with love and belief
confronts an angel in the way i lead..

with a beautiful look and heart so pure
smiles....assuring to be forever with me.....

miss u a lot angel rati / nupur...❤️

sorry for any ....mistakes😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: vidusha

hey guys..this is my first attempt of writing sumthing...about my darling...i hope it makes some sense....


sometimes in dreams
i wonder what i see

a lake with the lace of shimmering moon light
awaits for the warmth of your sight

a girl in the meadows,sings along with birds and bees
looks for you with a hope of relief

a day to brighten herself with a smile of thee
making itself worthy for the world to see...


sometimes in dreams
i wonder what i see

eyes of many awaiting for thee
to re-enter their lives ,make them happy..

wondering around with love and belief
confronts an angel in the way i lead..

with a beautiful look and heart so pure
smiles....assuring to be forever with me.....

miss u a lot angel rati / nupur...❤️

sorry for any ....mistakes😊

😛😃Smile👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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if you wrote this, hats off girl. i wish you could see what i can while reading each line of this poem. its simply mind blowing.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That is so sweet Vidusha👏...n beautiful😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very well written👏

thnks for pm:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that's just beautifully written Vidusha...

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