Manjari's OS Gallery--*I love You*(SaJan) - Page 5

Originally posted by: aashizin

no no this OS is perfect there is no need of sam's pov bcz its theme is heart break first sam gone through and then gun ,see may be after all this with gun's pain he would realize his love but he never tried to say this to gun bcz he said her love as his mistake ok i am giving u example u watched hum tum were rani also broke him up bcz he meant it mistake and then he realize now it would be same situation it gun would not marry with neil bcz this suits totally to hum tum movie's that concept except marriage part or if i include marriage part then it would be like bachana ae haseeno where ranbeer realized his mistake and made her to realize his husbund's love for her and then she found her real love in him bcz she was also broken by ranbeer

Originally posted by: saduf

Oh My God! that was such a fantastic OS too emotional and too touchy..just loved it

Originally posted by: -mysterygirl-

awesomeeee os loved it do write more and plzzz pm me wen ever u write

Originally posted by: monayafan

congo congo👏👏👏

ress .. CONGOO and add me (:

manju.....awesome............add me 2 your pm list hamesha bhooljaati ho.....................n mashallah..........kya baat hain beatifully written..........



-luv neefa-

Originally posted by: roknstarz_mjht

manju.....awesome............add me 2 your pm list hamesha bhooljaati ho.....................n mashallah..........kya baat hain beatifully written..........



-luv neefa-

loved it yaar........plz add me in ur list...............lkeep it up......sure dis 2 will b ur forte.......

Hiii manjari sis woww u opened ur os gallery also wowww Congo dear hopeeee to get many many os by u anyways awwww ur 1st os in dis gallery was damn sad I felt so so so sad for gunji ufff poooor her it was really heartbreaking bt really well written manjari u r really good in writing man n now u have written everything I mean ss, ff, os n u r rock In everything do continue soon now

Wao manjari awsm cncpt yar,realy luv d os ,superb. do write mre ff s n dun 4get me to pm plz add me to ur pm list.
luv u
vritika