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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ruexangel

sooooo sweet!!! i really loved it a lot!

Thank you!! I'm glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: monaloverati

it is mind blowing..........

waiting 4 nxt part.

Thank you! I will continue asap.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
hey ishita
r u updating now?????
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: -Sajjal-

Hey Ishita dear, I never knew you wrote also!😳 This is just beyond my expression of words, it seemed as if i was actually watching the real MJHT with MN in it because you have shown them perfectly as they were in the show. The dialouges, the expressings, everything was just beautiful, MN are just wayyy tooo cute.

The Happily Ever After Begining was adorable😳

MN conversation with their unborn baby was out of this world, really made me awee in admiration as every parents does that, because they want to connect to their child and make sure they know someone is waiting for their arrival.

Brilliant Ishiita

Thank You For Sharing

Sajjal

Actually, this is the first time I'm writing a fiction for my own interest and that too because of Mayur.
Thank you for the sweet comments. My biggest fear when writing was that I would not be able to do justice to such great characters and so am happy to hear u felt like u were watching MN. It really means a lot to me.
Convo with baby - It was my personal favourite part. I agree with what u said about that and ur words say it all ...Yes, every parent does that but it never ceases to make u awee...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: fariaa70

hey ishita
r u updating now?????

Sorry, not updating today. I didn't have any time to write today but will try to update at the earliest possible.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Wae Dear So great update

I love It soo cute
Plz cont Soon and thanks for Pm

Thank you! and I will.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Alisha-MJHT

Brilliant update. Loved it a lot.

Please continue soon and please send a pm when you update.

Thank you! I will. For pm, please add me to ur buddy list. thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: -Sidra-

OMG tht was Beautiful & fantastic...😍 it bring so many emotions.. MN *sigh* 😍 thnxs so mch for writing dis...😊

Thank you! No need to say thanks...I'm happy to write on MN.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: vincikhurana

sry fr the late reply but dis was superb..........!

No need to say sorry. I'm glad to see ur comment and thank you!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ishita...sweetheart.. *hugsss*
what a wonderful peice of writing..magnificently and vividly written..👏
u got hold of the personas of mayank and nupur very well right from the beggining..it was excellent, nupur being sad over bauji's absence, then sleeping, mayank carrying her up..
Mr Sharma is the bestest husband ever..<3, arrnaging a dinner for his wife and bacha...awieeeeee..
then apologizing through his baby, their hug..i am left day dreaming sweetheart..
rest i hope ur exams went well, all the best for ur result..😊
ur hindi was very good, except that u should use :mujhe"..intead of "mujhse"..😳
and sweet heart u will HAVE to continue soon,as i cant wait much for this beautiful beggininng..
Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mehak

ishita...sweetheart.. *hugsss*

what a wonderful peice of writing..magnificently and vividly written..👏
u got hold of the personas of mayank and nupur very well right from the beggining..it was excellent, nupur being sad over bauji's absence, then sleeping, mayank carrying her up..
Mr Sharma is the bestest husband ever..<3, arrnaging a dinner for his wife and bacha...awieeeeee..
then apologizing through his baby, their hug..i am left day dreaming sweetheart..
rest i hope ur exams went well, all the best for ur result..😊
ur hindi was very good, except that u should use :mujhe"..intead of "mujhse"..😳
and sweet heart u will HAVE to continue soon,as i cant wait much for this beautiful beggininng..

🤗Thank you for the lovely comments!! U and everyone else have been so sweet with ur comments. For someone like me, who is writing first time for non-academic purpose, it means a lot.
It was my biggest fear that I would not be able to justify their characters and am glad to see such sweet comments.
Yes, Mr.Sharma is the best!!! 😍If only Mayank Sharmas existed in real life.............
Apologizing thru baby - one of the scenes I've wanted to see in MJHT....
Exams were fine...thanks for the luck and good luck to u on ur results too!!
Actually, my hindi is not good (honestly)....in this part, I just used phrases I know for sure. Thanks for pointing out my mistake. I've corrected it now. Please do let me know of such mistakes in the future. I really appreciate it.
I will try to update at the earliest possible.

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