Memories In the Making-The Sharmas(MN)Link p.149 - Page 10

awesome first part...

Originally posted by: daniella05

awesome first part...

really loved it..

do continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

Happy New Year Everyone!

Originally posted by: Ishita16

Happy New Year Everyone!

I'm really sorry I haven't posted the next part yet. Christmas/New Year season is a very busy time in family. Most of the b-days are during this time and with cousins over at my house, I couldn't work on the next part as much as I wanted to. I've started it though. I still got about 3 pages and editing to do. I promise to update it within 3/4 days (max).

Sorry about the delay. Hope u have a great year ahead!!

its k dear...........

heyy ishita

lovelyyy ff start its nice u kept this way after sg marriage u gave continuity to it
i would suggest one more please add mayank & nupur gone to pune or put some shifting parts like in episode........
as they were shifting to pune ..it would nice to c that too

u write wonderfully i really didn't found that much problem in ur hindi..u wrote lovely dialagues of mayur ...
keep writing :)

Originally posted by: loving_bird

heyy ishita

lovelyyy ff start its nice u kept this way after sg marriage u gave continuity to it
i would suggest one more please add mayank & nupur gone to pune or put some shifting parts like in episode........
as they were shifting to pune ..it would nice to c that too

u write wonderfully i really didn't found that much problem in ur hindi..u wrote lovely dialagues of mayur ...
keep writing :)

hey ishita plz do continue soon....very eager to read it........

wishing u a very happy belated new yr

Author's Note:

Next morning…

The bright blue sky, the sun slowly rising in the east spreading light over this part of the world, the birds chirping, the flowers blooming...It was a beautiful Saturday morning. Sunlight was peeping into the Sharma house through the slightly open curtains. Having slept for most of the previous evening and the night, Nupur was the first to be woken up by the light. She opened her eyes to the an adorable sight, Mayank sleeping like a baby, all cuddled up to her. She carefully got out of his hold on her and sat up, only to realize that they were not in their bedroom. The previous days' events rolled in front of her: wedding preparations, Samrat's late arrival, the wedding, the car ride and then Mayank's dinner surprise. She smiled and looked at her sleeping husband. She was thankful to God for giving her Mayank. He was the best husband and also the best Jeeju…although, she was the wedding planner, it was Mayank who made sure that everything went according to her plan. She knew that while he made sure she slept, ate and rested on time, he had overworked himself and the last few nights, he didn't go to sleep until 3 or 4 in the morning. Even when she was initially hesitant about the Church wedding, Mayank supported it just to fulfill Gunjan's dreams. And last night despite being tired himself, he had taken the trouble to surprise her. She was sure he would be the best father as well. She slightly patted her tummy and said, "U r lucky, u have the best Papa in the world". She bent down and kissed him on his forehead. Soon, she got up and moved to the wash room to freshen up.

When she came back, Mayank was still sleeping. It was almost ten o' clock but Nupur didn't disturb him. She moved to the kitchen and prepared his favourite: Aloo ke parathe. She was almost finished with her work in the kitchen when the phone rang.

"Hello"

"Hello Nupur Beta. Kaisi ho tum?"

"Maa. Main theek hoon. Aap kaisi ho?"

"Mein bilkul theek hoon, beta. Tum batao…how was the wedding? Did everything go smoothly?"

"The wedding was great. There was a bit of tension when Samrat was late but everything was great afterwards"

"Good to know everything went on smoothly Beta. I'm really sorry I couldn't attend the wedding. I tried but there was an important meeting that was scheduled months ago and I couldn't cancel it"

"It's ok Maa. Don't worry about it. Everything happened too quickly that we couldn't give u a longer notice but we didn't want to delay it further"

"I understand... By the way, where is that Patidev of urs?"

"Sleeping"

"Still? It's past 10. Is everything alright?"

"Haan..he is just tired from the shaadi preparations and all"

"Ok. Beta, how is ur morning sickness now?"

"It's much better. We are actually going for a check up today"

"I'm really sorry Beta for not being there. Work has been hectic in the last few months and I'm not able to take some time off. I wish I could be there personally to take care of you."

"Don't feel bad Maa. Mayank is there, na? We both miss u though."

"I miss u both too."

"Maa..do u have to work still? I mean, Mayank is working now, don't u think it's time u get some rest?"

"I know but I love my work..I don't want to quit just yet Beta. As soon as I feel I need some rest, I will quit and come back to you guys."

"Ok but come soon."

"Theek hai Beta. By the way, are you eating healthy and on time?"

"Maa..tum bhi"

"Tum bhi matlab?"

"Ye Mayank bhi na. Always after me, Nupur eat on time…Nupur sleep on time…Nupur slowly…Nupur don't talk like that, my bachaa will get scared…He didn't even let me stay upto talk with Diya and Gunjan the other day, when we had met after so long…Sadu." Though she was complaining, the smile on her face revealed her true state of mind.

Shilpa started laughing at the other end.

"Haan. Definitely a sadu"

"Mrs.Sharma, other wives complain about how their husband is not taking care of them and here you are, complaining about me for taking care of my wife. Definitely one of a kind."

Nupur turned to see Mayank standing at the entrance of the kitchen, with his hands on his hips. He walked over to her and spoke on the speaker phone, "and Maa, tum uski support karenge?"

"Haan..ofcourse, woh mere pyari beti hai"

"Haan haan. And mein aapka beta nahi ho?"

"Aree..when did I say that? U r my beta…my sadu beta". Mayank's smile turned into irritation. Nupur chuckled.

"Maa…", Mayank said.

"Mein mazaak karon Baba. And haven't I taught u any manners Mayu? No wishing good morning, no how are you?"

"Maa. I was waiting patiently to say Good morning and how are you? But u and ur Bahu have already started ur 'Mayank Complaints'. Toh mein kya karoon?"

"Ok ok. Woh baatein chod do. Actually I wanted to know when you two are moving to Pune."

"Ur Beti still have a month until her exams are over and as per my contract, I have to be here until then as well. We'll be moving as soon as it is over. So probably just after the New Year."

"Ok Beta. I'll try to get some days off to come and visit u."

"Ok and at least a couple of weeks. We really miss u," Mayank said

"Ok..I miss u both too. Beta, I need to go now. Take care of yourselves and Mayu, take care of Nupur and don't annoy her."

"Ok Ma. Love you." Mayank said. At the same time, Nupur said "take care of urself Maa."

"Of course. Love u both too. Bye"

"Bye Maa." They both said in unison and turned off the phone. Nupur turned to face Mayank but he turned away. Nupur walked up to him and placed her hands on his shoulder.

"Naraz ho?" He shook her hands off his shoulder but didn't move away.

"Lekin, what did I do?" she said with an innocent expression that he had to try very hard to not smile.

"What did u do? U just called me a sadu"

"It's true though. U r a sadu naa?"

"Kya?"

"Haan. Ek Sadu" She placed her arms around his neck. "lekin mera Pyaara Mr. sadu Sharma. And I love this sadu." She reached up and kissed him on his cheek.

"How sweet…" Mayank said with a sweet smile.

"ok ok….Ab. Go freshen up and we can have breakfast together." She said as she let go of him. He pulled her right back to where she was and this time, he put his arms around her shoulders.

"Mera good morning kiss? U still didn't give me that?"

"Mayank, I just did."

"This cheek wali kiss won't do Mrs.Sharma. I want a Mithai waali kiss"

"Mayank…no. Look it's getting late. We have a doctor's appointment in an hour" Nupur said shyly.

"That's plenty of time, Mrs. Sharma"

"Mayank…no"

"Fine, if u won't give me, I'll get it myself". He leaned towards her lips and she closed her eyes. She opened her eyes when she felt him kissing on her tummy.

"Good morning Baby," Mayank said as he stood up. She stood there smiling sweetly and Mayank took this chance to give a quick peck on her lips, surprising her. When he pulled back, he saw that his wife was still in daze. "Now that's a good morning, Mrs. Sharma"

With that he rushed upstairs to freshen up.

At doctor's clinic,

The doctor had just checked Nupur.

"Nupur, everything is in the normal range now. So continue to take the vitamin tablets I had given you and eat healthy"

"Ok Doctor. Also please tell him I can do the household chores. He doesn't let me do anything these days."

Smiling at this odd request, the doctor turned to Mayank and said, "Mr. Sharma, she is perfectly alright now and can do any of the household chores. Just don't let her lift heavy weights and Nupur, you can do the work but don't strain yourself"

Mayank and Nupur just nodded.

After the appointment, Mayank dropped Nupur at home and ordered her to take rest while he went to talk to some movers. They only had a little over a month left to shift everything and with the exams coming up, Nupur will be busy with review and Mayank with marking. So they wanted to make sure, they get most of the things shifted before that.

Later in the night

By the time Mayank was returning home, it had started raining. When he walked into the house, he was surprised to find it so quiet and dark. It was just not like Nupur to stay in this kind of atmosphere. 'Maybe she was still asleep,' Mayank thought to himself as he walked upstairs into their room but it was empty. The blankets were ruffled a little and so Nupur had woken up. He went around the house to check the other rooms but didn't find her anywhere. He decided to call her cell and when he checked his pocket for his cell, he realized he had left it on the dining table. He was about to move towards the stairs, when he heard some noise from the terrace. He turned to see the most beautiful sight on earth. His wife was there dancing slowly in the drizzling rain. It took him back to Ahmedabad trip days. It was on a night like this that he had realized his love for her. Yes, he had felt something for her earlier but the realization came after the dance in the rain. Though 5 years have passed and they had gone through a lot of ups and downs, their love hadn't changed. Whether it was the happy times or the sad times, it was their love that helped them move on.

Looking at her today again in the rain, he felt like the luckiest man on earth. She was simply beautiful from both inside and outside. Dressed in a white churidhar suit and with her hair open, she looked nothing less than an angel. Nupur felt the presence of someone else and turned to find her husband standing by the terrace door. She gave him one of her childlike smiles and gestured him to join her. Mayank was shaken out of his trance and he moved towards her. Dressed in white shirt and blue jeans and drenched in rain, he looked nothing less than a greek god. She looked in his eyes and noticed the immense love, the passion, the care. She knew that look and as he neared her, her heart fluttered faster. Mayank and Nupur stood with less than an inch gap between them. Mayank looked into her eyes, to find it reflecting his emotions. He hugged her and she responded back. He moved his mouth to her shoulders and placed his kisses on her shoulder blade. Slowly moving towards her neck, he left a trail of kisses. She moaned in response as she tried to hold herself steady. A roaring thunder brought them out of their dazed state. They moved back and Mayank regained his senses.

"Nupur, u've been in the rain for too long. Let's go in now," he said as he slightly pulled on her hands. She silently obeyed and they moved to their room.

"Go and change. U r going to catch a cold," he said as they entered their room. Nupur was also getting a bit cold and so she moved to the washroom with the clothes. When Nupur came out, Mayank was sitting on the sofa in their room, in his tracks and vest and there were two cups of hot milk in his hands.

"Doodh peelo," he said as he handed her one glass and he took the other glass.

Nupur had just finished drinking her glass of milk when she noticed that Mayank's hair was still wet. She shook her head as she thought, "Mayank bhi na…he advices me about how I might catch a cold but he can never take care of himself". She grabbed her towel, which was lying on the chair nearby and walked to him. Before Mayank could say anything, she had started drying his hair. Mayank didn't have the habit of drying his hair with a towel and he didn't like anybody doing it for him either. But he didn't say anything today as he was back in the trance. Why wouldn't he be? The love of his life was standing few inches away from him, drying his hair while her hair was falling on his face. Although she had dried her hair, the odd drops of water fell on his face and he was finding it hard to control his emotions. He suddenly hugged her waist and his hands crawled up at her back. Her heart started beating faster and she felt herself getting weaker. If it wasn't for him, she was sure she would not be standing up right now. He stood up and started placing kisses on her neck, her forehead, her cheek and the passion grew with each passing moment. Finally, his lips found hers and sealed it with all the love and passion. She responded back with the same love and passion. After a few minutes, Mayank pulled back when he felt that she was out of breath.

"Nupur, tum theek ho? I'm sorry I just couldn't control myself after seeing u in that rain," he said as he moved away. He felt guilty for letting his urges take priority over her health.

Nupur, who was blushing, was taken aback by Mayank's reaction. Although she was still feeling shy, she couldn't help but ask,

"Mayank, kya hua? Mein bilkul theek hoon and why r u sorry?"

"No…I mean u…um u r expecting and I…what if" he didn't finish but Nupur understood her husband's predicament. She walked over to him, cupped his face and kissed his forehead.

"Mayank, it's ok…I'm just in the first trimester..and," she couldn't complete her sentence as she felt shy but Mayank and Nupur understood each other's silence as well as their gestures. The next moment Nupur found herself cradled in Mayank's arms and he was taking her to the bed. For another night of pure love.

ishita ............that was very beautifully written.............loved it sooooooo much......the care the love the romance eveything was written amazingly.............loved it lots.......cant wait to read more........