Me and My shell- MJHT OS. Epilogue on page 27 - Page 19

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SajanRox11

Heyyy!!!!

Supoerr updateee!!
par yaaaaar... uska dil phir toot gaya!!
Nahiii..
N WHAT????? NO NO NO.... U R NOT ENDING THIS FF!!!!!!!
THIS IS IMPOSSIBLEE!!!
DONT DO THISS!!!
I LOVE IT!!!
PLZ NOO NOO NOOO!!!!!!
But its ur wish at the end.. but id still wanna convince u not to....
PLZ...
N I lovee it!
Samrat ko pehle i love youu bolna chahiye thaaa....
Humm.. ab plz plz continuee soooooooon


Heyy manjiri!!
thanks fr liking this story so much, but everything comes to an end dear! and i too felt bad about it. but i'll soon start another one. thanks for ur comments an support buddy😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu_sajan4ever

omg omg omg ammy wat an OS dear loveee ur OS awww da starting poor nups i felt so sad for her bt den glad she found gunji den i loveee gunur friendship loveee how gunji use to make her participate in activities n helped her classes n all awww n den dey in college n nups changed loveee how u showed real life situations dat all happens in real life u beautifully potrayed it anyways nups got busy in her other activities n gunur started going to different directions den mayu came in her life n den nups stopped hanging out wid gunji awww porr gunji she used to feel lonely n all aww n den omggg nupsie insulted gunji infront of everyone awww dat was so heartbreaking n how mean was nupsie ughhh den gunji moved to banglore n she detached wid everyone aww poor gunji bt den sammy came in her life loveeee all sajan scenes dey were so so awesome especially sammy lovee him aww he made gazar ka halwa n rajma n all wow wow dey den fall in love n all bt never shared der feelings den wow wow gunji won the 1st prize in painting exhibition wow awesome thnx to sammy n den nups cmae to banglore n den omggg poor gunji her heart broke as sammy was all plan of nups omggg she cred whole night aww lovee how showerd da emotions n all n den last part omgggggggg y did u ended dis OS oh nooooo anyways loveeee da last part awww da letter nups wrote aww so touching n den loveee gunur scene yay dey r frnds again n dem omggggggg sammy said i love u n all n ow dey got engaged awesome loved it loveeee reading ur OS gr8 work ammy👏👏👏 hopeee to see more OS n ff from u


Hey anu!!😛
Wow!! i mean i was soo surprised to see such a long comment. It was a quick review of the whole story.. I loved ur comment... thanks buddy... and i'm glad that u liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Thanks aradhana...!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ammykhan

wowwww awesome

perfect ending
loved it


Hey ammy.. thanks dear!!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was niceeeeeeeee


Hey shafoo!!
thanks buddy!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dr.Zombie

Hey Amy!!!!! Wonderful ending to this wonderful story....

Starting from da very day of its beginning I am in love with dis one n wen it came to an end today, though I felt bad fr sometime then I thought every thing has its end be it gud or bad...

just like Gunjan's misery n hatred....to be frank dear, If I wrer in Gunjan's place, I wud have never forgiven Nupur (dunno why!!!!!), but the best part was the letter, where Nupur poured her heart n apologized for her mistake infact a grave mistake, whhich changed some one's life forever!!!!!!

But again Samrat came to Gun's life as an angel to end her misery....Loved the whole update n the ff to the core dear...you are simply amazing n innovative....All I can say is to please write more n more........

love u a lot!!!!!!!

ur's
Aditi



Hey adi😳
Same here dear, me too felt sad while writing the last part... but everything has its end... and i had to end it....😕
well u'll never be in gun's place bcoz u dont hav a frnd like nupur, u hav a frnd like me😉 and i'll never ignore u for my lover...😳
but i do wish u get ur angel soon, and u get all d happiness...

yeah i'll keep writing and i want ur comments on each n every story i write....😳

Luv ya...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy ammyy!!
that wasnt ap[roper end!
One more update wid sajan marriage!
Anyway.. guess you wanna end this.
N now coming to your update..
Loved the way Samrat proposed!!
N lovvveed the way gunjan sed u stole mine and i stol yours!
LOL!!
Lovelyy!! A short n sweet ff!
Thanxx amy!
for such an awesome ff!
Wish ull make another one sooooon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome Amyyy ..loved it ..cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
aweosmeeeee updt loved it three of the updates r superb loved the ending and really sorry for commenting late i was actually busy in skool and all that n thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Buddies!!😳

Thanks for all your wonderful response to this OS. I was so surprised to see some of your reactions on the end of this story. But it has to end here. But well, i dont wish to break my friends heart. So here i am with an Epilogue. Its not an UPDATE, but just an Epilogue. And i wud like to mention here 3 people becoz of whom i wrote this.

1. Rachna(Shrama_nats) : coz she wanted to see some honeymoon moments..
2. Ashi(Aashizin) : Ccoz she was heartbroken wen i ended this Story...
3. Manjiri(SajanRox11) : Coz she thought this was not a proper end, and she wished to see sajan married.


Well i dont know whether this part satisfies you ppl or not, but sweeties, i dedicate it totally to you....


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"Uff.. Samrat, Run..." Gunjan Shouted as the rain started pouring from the sky. They ran for shelter and soon got one. It was a wooden hut-like creation near the lake.

Samrat looked at Gunjan, who was busy enjoying the weather outside. She looked cute in the pink halter neck top and blue jeans, her hair completely wet.

"Wow! Its soo beautiful, isn't it?" she asked looking at the lakeside admiringly.

Samrat followed her gaze. Yes, Lake Tsophu was indeed beautiful, but not more than his beloved wife. His eyes turned towards her again.

"Samrat, Thanks!" She said, still looking at the scenery outside.

"thanks for what?"

"For bringing me here, in this paradise.." she said dreamily and rested her head on his shoulder.

"I knew you'll like Bhutan, its beautiful, serene and unblemished.. just like you." he said gazing at her lovingly and wrapped his arms around her waist," but you didnt give me any reward for this..."

"Reward?" gunjan said , puzzled.

"Yes, you know , for bringing you here... in this paradise.." He grinned mischievously.

"Samrat, please.." Gunjan blushed reading his mind, and turned her eyes down. Samrat raised her chin, and leaned closer. she could feel his breathe on her face and it raised her hairs. She tried to speak something , but he stopped her and pulled her closer. he looked in her eyes with love filled in his, and brushed her jawline. he kissed on her forehead, her eyes, her cheeks, and just as their lips were about to meet..


"Ahem Ahem.." the voice made them jump literally.

"Nupur!! Mayank!! what are you two doing here?" Samrat said in shock.

"Well we are on our second honeymoon, My friend.." Mayank said grinning.

"And you found only this place appropriate for that in the whole world?" said samrat.

"Yepp. i love Bhutan!! This is paradise, but very few people come here... " Mayank said with evil smile.

"Ya.. except us!" samrat was irked.

"err... actually, we were following you.."Nupur said and gave mayank a hi-five.

"But we invited you on our wedding.." Gunjan said shaking her head.

"Yes honey, but mayank liked the idea of following you so much.." Nupur said and winked at mayank.

"Nupur, you are the worst best friend ever!!!" Gunjan said with fake anger.

"I know honey... " Nupur said and both of them giggled.
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"Umm... nupur, i think we should go now. The rain is stopped now, and u know, we just spoiled someone's special moment." said mayank, as nupur giggled.

"I'm glad you have the realization." said samrat.

"Bye buddy." Mayank said with a smile, "And if you need any help, we are there, our room is in the same hotel as yours. Just in front of you.. you know.." and the couple left samrat and gunjan, dumbstruck.

Samrat and Gunjan couldnt help but smile. They knew their friends were just impossible. Well, it could be dealt later, but right now they had an unfinished task to complete. and they had to do that before their friends disturb them again. 😉

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