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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwww...this is so sweet, very nicely written...👏
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gr8 start do continue soon
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gr8 start pm me wen u write more😊
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PART 2

TODAY IS THE DAY.TODAY IS MAYUR ENGAGEMENT😉.
at mayank's house:
har koi tayari main laga hain.kuch der main sab nupur k ghar ki taraf nikal jayein ge😊.
IN MAYANK'S ROOM:
mayank is ready.us ne white rang ki shervani pehni he jis per silver work howa he.he is looking really handsome😳.mayank thora nervous feel kar rha hota he k mayank ki mom a jati hain.
MM:mayank beta tum tayar ho na.
M:ji ma.
MM:wow tum kitne pyare lag rahein hoon kahin koi mere bete ko nazar na laga de (and put black tika under his ear).
M:thanks maa 4 the compliment.
MM:vaise mujhe dar lag raha hain.
M:Kyun maa.
MM:kahin meri bahu tuje dekhte hi behosh ho gayi to sagaai pospoon karni parein ghi😳.
M:plz maa. aj k din to meri tang mat khincho.kabhi kabhi sochta hoon samrat ki tang khinchne ki adat ap per gayi he.vaise sam hain kaha.
MM:to tu janta hain use abhi bhi tayar ho rha hoon ga.
M:main abhi ja k dekhta hoon.
MM:batoon main me bhool hi gayi k hum sab ab nikal rahain hain us se keh bas bohat ho gaya tayar kahin hum late na ho jayein. vo sab intezaar kar rahain hoon ge.
m:theek hain maa.main abhi use le kr aya.luv u maa.
IN SAMRAT'S ROOM:
samrat is wisling in front of mirror and talking to himself.
S:wow dude to kitna handsome lag raha hain kahin chashmish tuje dekh k pagal ho gayi to.
M:to teri khobsorti k chakar main meri sagaii cancle.
S:bro aap.
M:acha chal to ready hain na.
S:bas do min.
M:agar to bhool gaya hain to main yaad kra do k aj meri engagement hain na k teri😳.
S:ok lets go dude bhabhi tumhara wait kar rahi hon gi.
M:sam😡.
NUPUR'S HOUSE
everyone is ready to welcome mayank's family.
IN NUPUR'S ROOM:
N:gunjan main theek lag rahi hoon na.
G:haan di bilkul pari lag rahi hoon.mujhe to lagta hain k aj jiju hoosh se gayein😉.
N:gunjan to bhi na and she blushed😳.
G:kya di tum kyun sharma rahin hoon mayank hi to hain.
N:acha to samrat ko dekhte hi teri bolti kyun band ho jati hain😃.
G:di.she blushed😳
N:ab to kyun sharma rahin hain samrat hi to hain.
G:acha di sorry.di
N:haan bol.
G:mujhe tum bohat yaad ao gi. main tumhare bina kaise rahoon gi😭.
N:us ka to intazaam hain humare baad samrat ki hi bari hain.tayar rehna tuje hum jald lene ayein gain😳.
MAYANK'S family enters the house.nupur's mom do arti and welcome them.mayank and samrat are waiting for nupur and gunjan. and suddenly lights are off.
that's enough for today.i will update u soon.do comment if u like it plz.
Edited by mahakmev - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome OS. Please continue soon and please send me a pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice part dear...pls continue soon............
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dat wz gr8 yaar do cont sooon
n thnx 4 de p.m
luv
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