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PART8:

mayank is now eagerly waiting for nupur.

M(thinking):ise kehte hain sabar ka imtehaan lena....................................nupur ye sab janbooj k kr rahin hain.........................ek baar shadi hon jayein gin gin kar badle lon ga(smiles)😉.

now mayank is eagerly waiting for nupur and finally she comes with gunjan.she is wearing a beautiful red lehenga with golden work on it.she is looking really very gorgeous😳.at the time mayank see her mayank is totally stunned😲.he was not believing his eyes.she is looking really very beautiful.gunjan saw mayank in this state.

G:dekho tu di jiju ko.............................kahan tha na k jiju tu gayein kaam se.

nupur blushes.both came down and everyone gather around them.mayank and nupur are standing in front of eachother.mayank is still looking at nupur and is smiling.nupur is looking down and when she saw mayank,mayank winks at her😉.she blushes.she is feeling very shy.she has never gone through such a wonderful feeling.now samrat is observing everything.samrat looking at mayank.

S:kaka zara pani tu dena mujhe😆.

MM:kya hova beta tabiyat tu theek hain na?😆

S:main tu theek hon mam...................per aap ko nahin lagta k yahan kuch zada hin garmi hon rahin hain............kyun bro?😆

mayank was not listening to him he was completely lost in nupur's beauty😛.samrat hits mayank.

S:tu tumhein kya lagta hain main nain theek kahan na.

mayank came back to his senses.

M:hm.....kya hova tu ne mujh se kuch kahan kya.

everyone start laughing😆.

S:i can understand................ab aap ko bhabhi ko dekhne se fursat miley gi tu pta chale ga na k kisi ne kuch kahan k nahin.

mayank feels little bit of embaracement😳.

MM:tu rehne de mere bete ko tang mat kr............chalo ab varmala ka time hon geya hain.

now they give varmala to mayur.

music starts.

mayank nupur ko ishara kata hain k vo bohat payari lag rahin hain.

peelon tere neelein neelein naino se shabnam(mayank is looking at nupur and is smiling)

peelon tere geele geele honton ki sargham(nupur looks at mayank and blush)

peelon hain peene ka mausam(mayank winks at nupur)

tere sang ishq tari hain,tere sang ik khumari hain,tere sang chain bhi mujh ko ,tere sang bekarari hain(nupur ko uper uthate hain per kisi na kisi trah mayank use har pehna deta hain aur sab clap karte hain)

ter sang ishq tari hain, tere sang ik khumari hain,tere sang chain bhi mujh ko tere sang bekarari hain(nupur mayank ko pehnane ki koshish karta hain per vo idhar udhar ho rahan hota hain,nupur sad face banati hain)

tere bin ji nahin lagta(mayank nupur ko dekhta hain)

tere bin ji nahin sakta(mayank nupur k paas ata hain)

tujh pe hain hare main ne warein do jahan,kurban,meherba,han mein tu kurba sun le sda(mayank apna sar nupur k samne jukata hain,nupur us ko dekh kr muskurati hain aur har pehnati hain)

NOW IN MANDAP:

music(time for pheras,both stand)

hosh main rahon ku aj main(mayank apna haath age karta hain looking at nupur lovingly)

tu mari bahoon main simti hain mujh main samai hain yon(nupur mayank ki ankhon main dekhti hain aur apna hath us k hath main rakhti hain)

jis tarha tu koi hamnadi tu mere sine main chupti hain sagir tumhara main hon(their is a lovely eyelock b/w them and both r smiling)

peelon teri dheemi dheemi lehron ki cham cham(now both r taking pheras taking eachother hands)

peelon teri sondhi sondhi sansoo ko har dam(mayank hold her hand more tightly_

peelon hain peene ka mausam

tere sang ishq tari hain tere sang ik khumari hain tere sang chain bhi muj ko tere sang bekarari hain(teen phere ho jate hain aur nupur age hoti hain)

tere sang ishq taru hain tere sang ik khumari hain tere sang chain bhi mujh ko tere sang bekarari hain(baki k char phere hote hain)

music(pheras r complete and both r sitting in mandap)

sham ko milon jo main tujhe tu bora subha na mane k kuch man jati hain ye(mayank nupur ko mangalsutra pehnata hain and wispers in her ear i love u)

her lamha her gari her peher hain teri yadoon se tarpati muj ko jalti hain ye(mayank nupur ki mang main sindoor dalta hain and they look into eachother eyes)

peelon main dheere dheere jalne ka ye gam(now gunjan put thali infront of them and both take their hands in it)

peelon tere gore gore hathon se hamdam(maynk hold nupur hand tightly and nupur blushes)

tere sang ishq taru hain tere sang ik khumari hain tere sang chain bhi mujh ko tere sang bekarai hain(now they r finding ring and mayank got it)

tere sang ishq tari hain tere sang ik khumari hain tere sang chain bi mujh ko tere sang bekarari hain(nupur makes a sad face,mayank looks at her lovingly)

tere bin ji nahin lagta(mayank give ring to nupur)

tere bin ji nahin sakta(nupur take out the ring and is very happy)

tujh pe hain ware main ne harein do jahan kurba meherban han main tu kurba sun le sda(mayank and nupur look at eachother and smiles)

after sometime nupur ki bidaai hoti haim vo boht roti hain aur sab se milti hain.nupur hugs her mother.

NM:tu mujhe bohat yaad ayein gi😭.

N:maa main ap k bina kese rahon gi ..................mujhe apne pass rehne do na😭.

they cry alot.mayank can feel nupurs pain.now she hugs gunjan.

N:gunjan tu apna aur maa papa ka khayal rakhna aur apna bhi.

G:di tum bhi😭.

nupur was crying alot mayank holds nupur.

M:bas nupur plz mat ro.

to lighten up the atmosphere.

G:vaise di tum kitni jothi hon?

M:matlab?😕

G:dekho na jiju................kab se is din ka intezaar kar rahin thi k kab shadi hon aur ap k sath ap k ghar jayein.her pal ap k saath rehne k sapne dekhti rehti thi....................aur ab maa se keh rahin hain k mujhe yahin rehne do................agar ma nr rok liya tu bohat pachtayein gi😆.

N:gunjan tu😡

and she smiles

M:chalon thanx gunjan tumhari waja se hi sahin ye muskurayi tu.....................ab chalein ya yahin rehne ka irada hain.

nupur gives mayank and evil look.

S:bro agar bhabhi yahin reh gayi tu ghar ja k tum karo ge bhi kya?😉

mayank gives him an evil look.both sit in car and leave.

IN CAR:

samrat is sitting in front of the car and mayur r behind.mayank holds nupur hand.

M:tum theek hon na?

N:hmm.

after sometime mayank holds her hand more tighly😳.

N:mayank kya kr rahin hon choro mera haath.

M:no.

maynk ki ring achanak nupur ko chubti hain.

N:ouch.

samrat turns.

S:kya hova bhabhi?😲

meanwhile mayank hold her hand and become tense.samrat smiles and turn back.mayank gentely kiss on her hand😳.

M:dard ho rahan hain.

Nupur is looking at mayank lovingly.

M:dard ho rahan hain kya?

N:ho rahan tha per ab nahin...............aap ki davai tu bohat jald kaam karti hain😊.

both smiles suddenly jump ata hain.nupur mayank pe girti hain.dono ek dosre k bohat kareeb hote hain.dono ek dosre main kho se jate hain.dono ki dil ki beat bherne lagti hai.

S:ahem ahem😳

both came to their senses.

S:thori der main ghar ane hin vala hain ab itna bhi intezaar nahin hota k yahin hi........😉

nupur blushes.

M:ha ha very funny tu age dehan de t acha rahain ga.

atlast they reach home.sari rasmain hoti hain.mayur are sitting b/w mayank cousins.

1 COUSIN:kya hova bhabhi ap itna ghabra kyun rahin hain😉.

2 COUSIN:han is main ghabrane ki ka baat hain........................hamara mayankitna bhi shetan nahin hain.😳

both feel shy and a bit of embaracement.mayank standup and goes from their.mayank mom after sometime take nupur to mayur's room.

AT NIGHT:

nupur is standing near window and then mayank enters the room.

that's it for today guys.i am really very busy these days so thats why i am updating after long time.i tried my best hope u all like this part do comment and tell me how u like it.i will update the next part whenever i will have time till then take care.with lots of luv

mahak

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hayeeeeee
lovely update yaar
mazaa aa gaya
loved it so much

but u stopped at such a crucial point
not fair

plz update soon
MAYUR r the worlds best jodi
i love them so much

n thanx 4 d pm
Edited by mayur_my_jaan - 15 years ago
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Hayyeeeeeeee its gonna be very romantic now.............Eagerly waiting for it
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awsomw i want to read the next part upload fast please
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sweet n lovely update dear thanks 4 d pm
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Wow superb update
now mayur r married
loved the whole update
it was too good
plz do continue soon

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