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Posted: 14 years ago
wow amazing update
loved the jija saali pairs
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u guys..😊

PART 20:

Nupur entered the room and mayank was completely sunken into his files, nupur went for a bath and when she returned mayank was in the same pose.she shook her head in disbelief.

Nupur stood in front of the mirror and drifted her hair to one side, water drops fell on mayank, He lifted his head in irritaion but as his eyes fell on nupur, he was completely lost.

'Nupur was looking beautiful, wearig a loose, sleeve less white silk night suit, with water dropping from her wet hair and wetting her dress and neck.

Nupur again drifted her hair and water drops again fell on mayank and this time he dropped his pen, and went close to nupur and hugged her from back.

M...ye kia ho raha hai

Nupur was blushing but she pretended to be normal

N...baal shukha rahi hon..

Mayank smiled

M...baal shukha rahi ho ya mujhe bhigo rahi ho.

Nupur was couldnt help smiling, and mayank kissed her shoulder, nupur closed her eyes as she wanted to feel the love of mayan to its fullest extent.

Samrat was constantly staring gunjan, who was busty reading the book, Gunjan realised samrat's irritation so decided to tease him.

G..kiya dekh rahe ho?

S..yehi k meri biwi ko parhai ka kitna shoq hai

Gunjan smiled

G...waise mujhe ik aur chez ka bht shoq hai

S..kia

She moved close to him

G...tumhare itne pass rehne ka

Samrat held her close and both of them were lost into each other.

5 YEARS LATER:

BACHAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!

Mayank and Samrat were having tea and they were shocked out of their wits at the voice

They ran towards the room and there 3 year old paranav was imitating sharukh..

M..pranav ye kia hai?

P..papa main kaisa lag raha hon?

M..ik dum idiot , tumhe tu main..

Mayank was heading towards pranav when samrat ran towards him and hugged him..

S...wow partner tum ik dum rockstar lag rahe ho, bilkul sharukh jaise

M...pehle hi is ki maa kam filmy hai jo tum b shoro hoi gaye ho?

Nupur appered from behind

N..kisi ne muje yaad kiys?

M..bilkul! bilkul!,...dekho apne betey ko

N...haye main sadqe jaon, ik dum sharukh lag raha hai..

M..nupur!

Samrat sensed danger and took paranav with him

N...ghusa ho gaye ho..

M..nupur mera mazak ka mood nahi hai..

N.,.waise pata hai pranav sharukh se zaida ksi aur hero ki tarah lag raha tha..

M..acha!..kaunse ?

Nupur kissed on his cheeks

N,.mayank sharma!

Mayank couldnt help smiling and she hugged him

Samrat took pranv to his room almost running, were gunajan was shocked

G..kia hua samrat?

S..mayank k ghusey se bacha k laya haon..

G..tum be na samrat!..

Gunjan took pranav into her lap.

S...waise cahsmish mujhe b ik dum filmy beti chiaye..thek hai..

G..thek hai, merey khayal se tumhari beti ne tumhari batien sun li hon gi..

she placed her hand on two months old NEHA

G..sun liya beta..

Samrat laughed and kissed her forehaed,

Every thing in thier lives was perfect now and they often remembered the moment of MILEY JAB HUM TUM,. the moment when they met each other!, which had led to a life which was dreamy!...


Do comment guys...and here i end my OS..this was the last part..hope u all enjoyed reading as much as i did writing...😊



Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
what????????????????? is this the end of this ff???????????noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo............cant believe it..i was waiting 4 mayur romance and ended it too soon..y yaar??? u could have shown nupur getting pregnant and mayu taking care of her.....but what to do....after all its ur wish....anyways it was great reading ur ff....loved it to the core...pls do write more mayur ff's....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mehak
Awesome ending
Mayur r too cute.
loved them alot
an then praanav with his shahrukh style was very nice
i enjoyed each n evry bit of this ff

plz do write a new ff on mayurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

take care
thanx 4 pm


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Posted: 14 years ago
hay awesome n happy endind 👏 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was so beautifully written... dear!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ending
i m sad i will miss this os
you r a very nice writter
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Posted: 14 years ago
andd yeah write a new ff on mayur
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!!!! you ended the os!!!!😭
But it was rocking part!! Totally loved it....❤️
You are an awesome writer..⭐️
plzz write another ff...
😊
Edited by jes_jade - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW
very nice dear......
loved it....
thanks for writing such a beautiful OS.......

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