-komal OS Corner-(JWM MN) OS, 28th july - Page 29

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey komal gr8 job dear
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HI Komal
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Posted: 15 years ago
Life gives another chance!!!
This is the unique form i'm first time using on Mayur and Sajan..
Hope you guys will like it and appreciate it.....
ANd i dont think cv's will sohw something like this......😛
Begins!!!
[The excel college which always known for its education but mostly for fun.Excel college used to be the masti ki pathshala for every student.But to day in that same excel college nothing is about fun but about dead.The excel college is hold hostage under some terrorist.As the old case "the taj hotel" terrorist this time also attacked some of the places in Mumbai again.And this Excel is also included in to this not only excel but also many coleeges as this time the only targeto f terrorist is youngster.]
[The student,teachers of excel keep hostage.But some of them are lucky enough to get rid from there but some are not. SOme are escaping with their love ones from the terrorist.ANd in the "Some" included Samrat,Gunjan,Mayank and Nupur.
[Samrat,Mayank,gunjan and Nupur are in a classroom.]
Samrat: Ab kya karen>?? terrorist ne hume har jagha se gher liya hai....kahin se bhagne ka raasta mil nhi raha hai.........
Gunjan: Mayank ab kya karenge???
[They heard firing]
Mayank: Pata nahi par kuch na kuch toh karna hi padega......varna hum sab maare jayenge....
Nupur: Par kya??
[Mayank looked outside from the window and saw that no one is there.]
Mayank: Raasta saaf hai.....hume chalna cahiye.....
[Everyone was about to move]
Mayank: But if we all go together then it will be more dangerous we should get divide.ok?
Gunjan: But i wont leave dee....
Nupur: Gunjan sun u have to ok? tujhe apne baare mien sochna cahiye...meir fikr mat kar.or mein thodi na tumhari asli dee hun......tumne toh sirf mujhe darja diya hai.
Gunjan: i odnt care.....merel iye tumhari jaan zyada maine rakhti hai.
Samrat: Gunjan dekho agar hum sab saath rahenge toh Nupur ki jaan or khatre mein padh sakti hai.....sirf Nupur ki hi nhi.hum sab ki......or mein janta hun tum yeh nhi chahti....
[Gunjan looked at Nupur with her teary eyes.Nupur nod]
Mayank: Gunjan tum Nupur ki fikr mat karo mein hoon na.....mein Nupur ko kuch nahi hone dunga.........mein usse kuch nhi hone dunga...
[Gunjan was releived after hearing Mayank's words.]
Gunjan: Thik hai Mayank......
[Gunjan hugged Nupur for the last time........]
Gunjan: Apne khayal rakhna dee.......(tears rolling down)
Nupur: Tu bhi....(tears rolling down) Samrat meri Gunjan ka khayal rakhna?
[Samrat holds Gunjan's hand]
Samrat: Dont worry Nupur......mein Gunjan ko kuch nahi hone dunga....
[Samrat and Gunjan left...Then Mayank hold Nupur's hands and looked at her.....]
Mayank: Nupur mein tumhe kuch nhi hone dunga......yeh mera vaada hai.......
Nupur: Mayank ek sawal puchun?
Mayank: Pucho??
Nupur: Tum mera itna care kyun karte ho?? i mean tum toh abhi bhi apni wife Nupur se pyaar karte ho na?
[Mayank felt really bad bcoz he know that Nupur dont remember anything but he was hoping after spending so much time with him.........she would have fall for his love agian...but no it was not that qns of Nupur has broken his heart]
Mayank: Pata hia Nupur kabhi kavar tumhare in sawalon se mujhe hurt hota hai.......
Nupur: I'm sorry Mayank mein tumhe hurt nahi karna cahti thi.......but mujhe kabhi aisa lagta hai ki tumhare dil mein aisi koi baat hai jo tum mujjhse chupda rahe ho.....dekho Mayank aaj shayad yeh hum akhiri baar ek saath hai..kya pata in sab mein koun kal rahe na rahe...
Mayank: Tumne sahi kaha Nupur.........aaj mein tumhe sab kuch sach-sach bata dunga.
Cut to Samrat and Gunjan......
[They are holding each others hand and runnig....Then in some point Samrat saw a terrorist so they escaped in a room....Gunjan was breathe less....Samrat looked at her and by seeing heri n that condition his eyes gets moist......]
Samrat: Gunjan???
[Gunjan looked at him........]
Samrat: Kya tumne mujhe meri 3 saal pehli ki galti ke liye maaf kar diya hai??
Gunjan: Samrat...yeh sahi waqt nahi hai yeh sab puchne ke liye...
[Samrat holds her hand]
Samrat: Nahi Gunjan yahi sabse sahi waqt hai kyunki kya pata aaj yeh humara akhiri saath ho....kya pata iske baad mein na rahun.
[Gunjan put her hand on Samrat's face...]
Gunjan: Please aisi baatein mat bolo Samrat.............mein tumhare bina nahi jee sakti..yeh baat sach hai ki mein tumse naraz thi par tum nahi jante us waqt mein tumhe kitna miss karti thi...har waqt mein sirf tumhare baare mein sochti rehti thi........her lamha rooh ti thi sirf tumhare liye...............or agar tum mujhe chod ke chale gaye na toh mein zinda nahi reh paungi Samrat tumhari yeh chashmish zinda nahi reh payegi......nahi reh payegi..........
[She totally broke out in pain and put her head on his chest and started crying....Samrat hold her and console her.....]
Samrat: DOnt worry chashmish mein tumhe kabhi chod ke nahi jaunga......
Gunjan: Vaada karo mujhse??
Samrat: Vaada raha.........mein tumhe kabhi bhi chod ke nhi jaunga...
Cut to Mayur....
[Mayank told everything to Nupur.....He told her how she and Nupur first met.how thier love grown.....and how that disaster thing came and took away his Nupur from him....He told her that she is none other than his Nupur.........The only Nupur he love so much........]
Nupur: TOh mein hi tumhari Nupur hun??(shocked)
Mayank: Haan.......mera pyaar Nupur........
Nupur: I cant believe it.........i mean yeh kaise ho sakta hai??
Mayank: Yahi sach hai Nupur........
Nupur: Agar yahi sach hai toh tumne mujhe yeh baat pehle kyun nahi batayi?
Mayank: Mein darr gaya tha .........
Nupur: Darr gaye the??
Mayank: Haan tumhe mein dobara khona nahi cahta tha....maine socha kahin yeh sab janne ke baad tum mujhe chod ke chali gayi toh....
Nupur: Agar tumhe yahi darr tha?? toh mujhe aaj kyun bataya?
Nupur; Tumhi ne toh kaha na ki shayad yeh humara akhiri pal hai........toh kahin me marr gaya toh mein nahi cahta tha ki tumhe andhere mein chod ke jaun......
Mayank: Aisa mat bolo Mayank......tum kahin nahi jaoge.........mujhe vishwas hai...
Mayank: Nupur kya tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti??
Nupur: WOh.........
Mayank: Bolo Nupur???Haan ya na??
Nupur: Pata nahi.......
Mayank: Kya??
Nupur: Mayank yeh baat sach hai ki mujhe tumhare saath rehna pasand hai,tumhare saath rehti hun toh bohot accha lagta hai,tumse milti hun toh cehre pe achanak se ek smile aa jati hai,tum dard mein nahi dekh sakti,tumhare baare mien zada kar sochti hun......par jab bhi yeh jawab apne dimaag se puchti hun toh............koi jawab nahi milta.....par dil bolta hai haan yeh pyaar hai par dimaag........
Mayank: Pyaar ke mamle mein kabhi bhi dimaag ki nhi sunni cahiye sirf dil ki suno or yeh baat mujhe tumhi ne sikhayi hai Nupur.....
Nupur: Mayank......
[Mayank get lcose with her and hold her...........]
Mayank: Meri aankhon mein dekho Nupur?? or ab bolo kya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho??
[Mayank get even closer to her.....Nupur totally get lost in his beautiful eyes.....She was thep ain of loosing his love one in his eyes.........]
Nupur: Mayank.......mein tumse.........
[Then all in sudden some people started firing at them.Mayan khod Nupur's hand and run.....]
Cut to Sajan.........
[The people are firing on them as well and they are runnig......But then Samrat stops]
Gunjan: kya hua Samrat??
Samrat: Gunjan mein nahi cahta ki hum alag hojayen..
Gunjan: Hum alag nahi honge........
Samrat; Nahi Gunjan............mein aaj tumhe puri tarike se pana cahta hun....taki tumhare saath jee or mar sakun...
Gunjan: Matlab???
[Samrat cut his finger and blood started coming out.He sacred the blood in her maang.Gunjan was shocked.]
Samrat: Aaj hum pure hogaye Gunjan........aaj se tum meri patni ho.......or cahe jaise bhi muskilen aaye..par mein tumhara saath humesha dunga.......tumhe kabhi bih khud se alag nahi karunga.....kabhi nahi.........
[Gunjan hugged him...........]
Gunjan: Mein aaj bohot khush hun Samrat.....ab mein marr bhi jaun mujhe koi fark nahi padega,.......
Samrat: Ssshhh!!! aisa nahi bolte.....
[Then they saw that police has enter the building......And safely taking people out from the builing.Sajan ran towards them.....They took them out of the building....]
Gunjan: Samrat dee toh yahan nahi hai?? Matlab woh or Mayank abhi bhi uss building mein phase hue hain??
Samrat: Kuch nahi hoga jab tak Mayank or Nupur ek saath hai unhe kuch nahi ho sakta....
[Mayur are runnig......and then one terrorist cover them forn front with a gun.........Mayur noticed that police are behind them..]
Police: Humne tumhe charo taraf se gher liya hai.........u have no way to run so surrender....
Terrorist: NO way......i still have these two....if you hurt me i'll kill them.......
[Polie was confused what to do.....but then Mayank noticed that a policemen was hidden behind the pillars...He told Mayank that he will through the gun towards him and he have to shot (in action).Mayank nod]
[Mayank whishpered Nupur]
Mayank: Nupur tum hilna mat woh dkeh rahi ho na...woh policemen.........woh mujhe ek gun dene wala hai ..... toh tum ghabrana mat ok?
Nupur: ok......apna khayal rakhna??
[As soon as the policemen through the gun Mayank hold itand turn but as soon as Mayank turned the guy started firing.....When Nupur saw all this her head started paining..she remember all the moments with Mayank........and then she finally remeber the accident thing....She remember the whole and saw at Mayank she ran towards him to saw him.......]
Nupur: Mayank...........
[She grab Mayank and fell on the gorund.As the way was clear the policemen shoted the terrorist..........]
[Mayur are saved now......They are out ofthe building.......]
Gunjan: Dee tum thik toh hona??
Nupur: Mujhe kuch ho sakta hia kya?? mein bohot khush hun ki tum sab thik ho??
[Then Nupur noticed Gunjan's maang]
Nupur: Gunjan teri maang kyun bhari hui hai??
[Gunjan looked at Smarat..Samrat smiled at Nupur.....Nupur get the point]
Nupur: Tum logon ne shaadi karli kab???kaise??? or Samrat mien toh tumhe chodungi nahi..
Samrat: Nupur tum thik hogayi??
Nupur: matlab?? mujhe hua kya tha??
[Smaraty looked at Gunjan and smiled.Gunjan hugged Nupur tightly.......]
Gunjan: Dee mien bohot khush hun tum vaapash aa gayi.......
Nupur: Par mein gayi kahan thi?
Samat: Btw Mayank kaha hai??
Nupur: Woh police ko apna statement de raha hai...
[Mayank came and hold Nupur.........]
Mayank: Mayank statement de chuka........tumlogon ko pata hai aaj Nupur ne apni jaan ki fikr na karte hue meri jaan bachai.
Nupur: Mayank maine tumhe vaada kiya tha na ki maut ko pehle mujhse guzarna hoga......well ab yeh sab batein chodo........
Samrat: Saih kaha meir saali..ab toh hume ghar jake celebrate karna hai...humari shaadi or tumhari vaapashi...
Mayank: Haan or ab hum sab ek saath rahenge.r8?
Gunjan: R8...
[Then in last they all hug eacother......]
The End.........
Hope you'll like reading it.
Do comment...........😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yaaaayyy...
Me First..😃

I Just Loved This OS...
Superb...
Awww...
SaJan Married I Am Proud Of Samrat....👏
And Nupur Saved Mayyuuu...
Aur Usko Sab Kuch Yaad Agyaa...
Yaayyy...
Your OS Was Shooo Mindblowing...
Keep It Up <3...
*Sana*😳
Edited by SaJan_Sana4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
*Edited *
haye meri jaan bahut filmy hote jaa rahi hai !!!
Too many movies u r watching nowdays!! 😆 😆 😆
But nice idea of usin terrorists !!!
Kahin se hamari Nupur ko bhi jaldi le aaynege to accha hai !! 😳
Edited by Naughtynatty - 15 years ago

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