MN OS 'Mayank's absence and presence'

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hiii guys me writing another OS.......

I know you guys were fed up as i have already written an OS today.......

But cant help myself.................Today im having OS fever..........

This OS on how Mayank leaves Nupur for two days........And what Nupur conditions get.....

One short begins!!!

[Nupur is setting the dinning table.......Mayank came and hold her from backside.]

Mayank: Nupur aaj mein bohot khush hun........

Nupur: Kyun?

Mayank: Yaad hai maine ek company mein scholarship ke liye apply kiya tha.

Nupur: oh haan.........

Mayank: I get it..........

Nupur: Kya??? by god kya news hai.(she huged him tightly)Chalo humare goals ki taraf yeh humara pehla steps........

Mayank: Haan..........Par Nupur tumne suna toh hoga i 'kuch pane ki liye kuch khona padta hai'.

Nupur: Matlab?

Mayank: Woh actually mujhe ek interview dena hoga or apne kuch certificates bhi dikhane honge...

Nupur: Toh?

Mayank: Iss company ka main stream banglore hai.....Toh mujhe do dino ke liye banglore jana hoga............

Nupur: Banglore??? do dink el iye.(she get tensed)

Mayank: Haan Nupur.........waise sirf do din ki hi toh baat hai......Or mein soch raha tha ki banglore ja hi raha hun toh maa se bhi mil lunga........

Nupur: oh......

Mayank: Nupur agar tumnahi cahti ho toh mein nahi jaunga......

Nupur: Aisi baat nahi hai Mayank........tumne iss ke liye bohot mehnat ki thi so tumhe jana cahiye.Or meri fikar mat karo mein tumhare bina reh lungi.

Mayank: Accha toh tum yeh keh rahi ho ki tum mujhe miss nahi karogi?

Nupur: Mein kyun miss karungi........

Mayank: Dekhte hai koun kis ko kitna miss karta hai?

Nupur: Dekhenge....Ab khana kha le?

Mayank: Hmmmmm.

[Next day........Nupur wakes up and noticed that Mayank was not their.......She gets worried]

Nupur: Kahin Mayank chala toh nahi gaya.....woh aise kaise ja sakte mujhe bina bataye...(worrying)....

[She went to her another room but didnt find him..........Then she enters the kitchen and found him making break fast..]

Nupur: Mayank tum yahan ho?

Mayank: Haan.....kyunk kya hua?

Nupur: Kuch nahi..........tum yahan kya kar rahe ho.?

Mayank: Woh socha jaanese pehle tumhare liye breakfast banakar jaun.........hmmmmmm breakfast is ready...........

[They had thier breakfast.Mayank is all ready to leave for airport.]

Mayank: Chalo Nupur ab mein chalta hun apne khayal rakhna.

Nupur: Tum bhi. Sambhal ke jaane,Kuch ulta sidha mat khana,Apne sehat ke khayal rakhna,Raat ko zyada der jagna mat.

Mayank: Or kuch??

Nupur: Haan or mujhe yaad karna.

Mayank: Yeh tumhe batane ki koi zarurat nahi hai kyunki woh toh mein karunga. Bye...

Nupur: Bye!

[She gave him a good bye kiss......]

Mayank: Wow! Ab mera safar bohot hi accha jayega. APna khayal rakhna.

[Nupur shook her head.]

[Mayank left..........Nupur's eyes became moist.]

[The gang is sitting in canteen.]

Benji: Nupur kya hua?

[Nupur was very sad.]

Samrat: Dude Mayank do din ke liye banglore jo gaya hai.Or jab Mayank wahan toh Nupur ka dil yahan kaise lagega.

Gunjan: Dee tum fikar mat karo jiju jaldi aa jayenge.

Nupur: Hmmmmmmm....Ab mein chalti hun bohot der hogayi hai.]

[Nupur is cooking...She lost in Mayank's dreams.Then she realised that she had put the milk on the gas to get boiled.She imediatly without thinking tried to hold the container which burns her hand.]

Nupur: Ouch!!!bohot jal raha hai....

[Then she flashback the moment where Mayank had put ice on her burn hands......She thought if Mayank would have been there he would have done the same this time also.]

[She is so badly missing him.That left tears in her eyes.Then the phone rang.It was Mayank to inform her that he reached to his destination safely.And will be back soon.]

Next day.........

[In the college Nupur is sitting alone in the corridor of the college...All alone thinking about how they had a talk about their future,dreams and goals.hen her mobile rang,It was Mayank.]

Nupur: Mayank kaise ho tum?

Mayank: Mein toh thik hun...

Nupur: Mayank tum ho kaha?

Mayank: College mein.

Nupur: College mein???

Mayank: Zara piche toh ghumo.

Nupur: Piche?

[She turned around andsaw Mayank standing there smiling. She ran towards him and hugedhim tightly.]

Nupur: Tum aa gaye?

Mayank: Haan.

Nupur: Par tum toh kal aane wale the na?

Mayank: Tumhara pyaar mujhe khich ke le aya orwoh scholarship approve hogaya hai.......

Nupur: Oh Mayank.........I LOVE YOU.......tumhe bilkul andaza nahi hai maine tumhe kitna miss kiya.

Mayank: Maine bhi..'I LOVE YOU TOO'

Hope you'll like it and not get mad at my bad writing😆
Do cmment.....😃

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It was totally awesome!! Loved it 👍🏼
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awesome os...

Wah mayank k jane se pehle hi tumne jane ka os likh liye...g8

Mayank ne jane se pehle nupur k liye brkfst bana liye..cho sweet.

N den d goodbye kiss..im actually imaging it...

Bechari nupur mayank ko kitna miss kar rahi thi.

N then nupur k pyaar ne mayank ko ek din pehle nupur k paas pahunch gaya...nyc.

Hope k show may b aisa hi ho.

*kulsum*
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thnxx nidzi,aswathy dee,ayeshu,kulsum,adi and Dee.Mayur_Arti ..... it means alot..............🤗
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awesome OS yaar i hope they show sumthin lyk dis!!
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lovely os please write more atleast we will not miss mayur in mjht by reading this i can actually imagine mayur in it loved it 😊
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awesome os....

enjoyed reading it..
cont soon..
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aww..............such a cute os...............i hope in show also they show that he is going to bangalore.........
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it ws gorgeous
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Hi Komal
it was nice and lovely OS.
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