Mayank-Nupur's Study Scene for a dear friend! ❤️

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Hey everyone! Im posting after such a long time today, but Arjun-Rati always make me do so 😆 . Anyways, lately a lot of my friends here have been convincing me to write One-Shots on ArTi/MayUr, as i have written some earlier and they love the way i write, so im going to give it my best shot, im not at all good as a writer, im not that imaginative when it comes to writing, but the OS that im going to write is requested specially by my really close friend Palak (shinz), she's a really dear friend of mine, we have loads to discuss always, we laugh together, we get along like a house of fire, shes a total sweetheart! 🤗.
Debo, Nidz and Palak have been convincing me to write on MayUr, and its all their motivation for me. Debo and Nidz, i will write more OS's specially for you both, for now im dedicating this one to my bestie Palak, so here i am with a Study scene on MayUr :
After the auditions for the film get over at Excel, there's a sudden tension that arises among all students since their "surprise" exams are starting in 2 days time, they have really less time to prepare, so their share of fun is done for good, all that they have to do is concentrate on their books.
Mayank-Nupur are at their house, Mayank cleaning the house and Nupur cooking in the kitchen, and Mayank is all cool and chilled out since he's the topper of the college but Nupur is so not into it, she adds too much salt & spice to the food since she's really worried about the upcoming exams 😆.
Nupur : (yells for Mayank)...Mayankkkk! Tumhe main kitni baar kahungi ki khaana tayaar hai, please khaalo, mujhe padhaai karni hai, kyunki tum toh pass ho jaaoge, mera kya hoga!
Mayank : (shaking his head)...Nupur main aa raha hoon, tum kyun itna chilaati ho? aur batao khaane pe kya banaa hai?
Nupur : dal, sabzi aur roti
Mayank : accha kya baat hai, aaj itna saara khana, roz toh alloo ke paraanthe banaati ho, aaj kya ho gaya?
Nupur : (very mad at him) ...Khaana hai toh khao, nahi toh fek do!
Mayank : Nupur, tum bhi na, main sirf mazaak kar raha hoon, tum sabse acchi ho aur khaana bahot hi acchaa bana hai..
Nupur finally smiles after all that tension
Mayank : Accha Nupur tum batao, padhaai shuru karein, hamaare paas time bahot kam hai, sirf do din bacche hain
Nupur : Haan Mayank wo toh hai, chalo jaldi karte hain, kal college ke liye jaldi bhi toh uthnaa hai
Mayank gets all the required books, and by looking at those books, Nupur is already feeling sleepy.. 😆
Mayank : Chalo lets get started...
Nupur : Mayank mujhe bahot neend aa rahi hai, main kal padhti hoon, ok, bye, goodnight..
Mayank : ahh tumne kahaa aur maine maan liya? hargiss nahi, yahaan par aao, mere paas baitho, main sab kuch tumhaare saath revise karoonga aur aise tumhaara bhi revision ho jaayega
Nupur : theek hai Mayank, but please thoda jaldi karna, (and she yawns yet again)
Mayank : Ohhh yahaan dekho Nupur, Srk ki photo mere book mein....
Nupur : Kahaan Mayank, kahaan?? mujhe bhi dekhni hai picture srk ki
Mayank : Yahaan koi pic nahi hai, maine jaan boojh ke aisa kiyaa ki tum padhaai mein aur dhyaan de sako (Mayank's stern face)
Nupur : theek hai baba, main padhoongi..
Mayank : Nupur, tumhe khud accha nahi lagta ki jab padhaai acche se ho, toh exam bhi kitna easy jaata hai...aur agar hum acche se studies karenge....hum dono top karenge....
(Nupur interrupts) ...
Nupur : Haaann Mayank...(laughs) tumhe yaad hai wo din jab hum itne dushman hua karte the, aur uss project ke baad toh meri khair hi nahi thii..aur hum dono ne ek doosre ko challenge liya thaa ki dekhte hain iss baar exams top kaun karega...(Mayank interrupts)
Mayank : Haan by god Nupur, wo din hum dono ke liye kitne challenging the naa, mujhe ab tak wo din yaad hai jab tum library mein kitna research karti thii, aur mujhe neecha dikhaane ki koshish karti thii...
and both of them laugh out really loud...and give each other such a cute and a tight hug...
Nupur : Kya pataa tha ki hum dono ek doosre se pyar karne lagegein, aur phir hamaarti shaadi bhi ho jayegi..
Mayank : maine bhi aisa kabhi nahi sochaa tha, aur aaj hum dono sirf ek doosre ke liye hain aur hamesha rahenge
Nupur : chalo ab padhte hain Mayank, bahot baatein kar li..
Mayank : accha ab tum mere saath revision karo aur kal hum dono phir se doosre subjects ka revision karenge..
Nupur : chalo theek hai mere pati parmeshwar..lekin isske baad mujhe koi picture dekhi hai, aur please tum so mat jaana, hum dono ek saath dekhege...
Mayank : haan nupur, aur hum woh baad mein decide karenge...
They are both sitting so comfortable and cosily on their bed, and studying with real concentration....and Mayank is revising everything with Nupur, and Nupur does the same as well, shes learning well and shes also teaching Mayank ....with which Mayank is learning more than what he actually knew...!
Next OS will be probably a movie or something....you guys tell me what to write next...!!
PALAK, hope you liked it girl, Love you so much.. ! Well im not satisfied with this at all, because as i said, im not imaginative at all..🤣 But i still tried my best!
GUYS, please do leave comments and let me know if I should continue writing or not!!
NOTE : Mods, please dont close this topic, ive written it with great effort, hopefully it wont be closed, and i promise to post this is the FF section as well..thanks!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yams!! OMG its awesome sis!!! i tell you u write soo well , u have to write lots more now, this ain't enought!! muaaah! 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was so cute and sweet .👏...............waiting for such a scene
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ha-di-ha! who says u can write well...the intro that u have given me proves that u are not only a wonderful writer but such a good insighter...i mean u wrote perfectly abt me.......that i m such a sweetheart...an angel!! 😆 😳

coming to ur OS now........my my....i so want to see them studying together...woh bhi issi tarah...!

i loved ur light sense of humour......mayank toh pass ho jaayega lekin nupur...LOL 🤣

poor girl...ab geek se shaadi karne ke kuch toh pros and cons hain! 😆

but awiee...such a cute mayank.....considerate......loving and yet firm! me loves it!

and i loved how they talked silly and important...all at once...just like how ppl normally do...!

and all in all...it was superdocute fantastically awwie OS!

and its rightly dedicated to a person like me...!

and and and......thanks for writing it for me....u are one chocolate cake of a friend...warm...sweet.... 😃.and yummy ahem ! 🤣

oh and me loves u loads and loads.....just like benji loves sam...amd umm...dia loves nupu7r...and umm.....jennifer annistion loves courtney....!!! 😆

🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Such a cute scene I loved it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome Yamz............... now i insist u post............... it in Future Scenes thread and mail it to Cvs................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow yamini di...
It vz superb os...
Aww lyk d way how dey remembrd der challange n how dey both revised it togedr it vz cute..
Write more os
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You know what YAms the best thing abt MN scenes is that we can always add a conflict n resolution and trust me such scenes always turn out good. Its got to do with their characters..
SO I really liked this attempt A LOT!! Who says u cant write, u surely can u surely should.

I remember loving ur balcony mein date wala OS too

Please fwd this to u know whos 🤣 cheers!! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Ragssss, Anu, Kulsumd : thanks sooooo much guyssss! 🤗
@ Anu...ok im gonna post this there...thanks for reminding me 😆
@theneha and Aysha...thanksss a ton guys!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yamz i didn't you write OS also..........wowwww
It was jsu so lovely............Nupur feeling sleepy with the sight of books.........🤣 just so like Nupur........... aww i miss those days when Nupur challenged Mayank........... golden days.....*sigh*

It was amazingly written.........
do write next one over Movie.......... that will be fun.............😆😊

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