Posted:
Hi guys, this is my first attempt to write some thing on MN..
I am posting the first part of short story... If u guys like it i will continue..
8 surprises
Mayank went on a study trip for one week.
Nupur uski intezar mein har din ek saal ki tarah guzaar rahin hein,
Mayank bhi usko dekhne keliye tadap rahan hein.
Days flew by 1...2...3..4...5...6...7
Finally wo din aagaya... Nupur ke mayank ka ghar aane ka din...
nupur mayank keliye kuch alag karna chahithi hein...
shaadi ke baadh pehli baar itne dinon keliye wo alag rahein...
donon ko ye din yaad bhi tho rakhna hein
Nupur : Mayank mein tumhare liye intezar kar rahin hoon.. ye din hamare
liye bahut yaadgar hoga.... waiting for u... jaldi aajavo mayank.
Subah ke 8 baje
Nupur is seen taking the shower and humming the song Khudajaane (
Mayanks favourite).
She came out with a bath robe, went to the closet and is searching for
something.
Finally she found it. she went into the dressing room. she came out
wearing a white dress, white earrings, white bangles and white chain.
kisi shayar ki khwaab se kam nahin hein.
she crosschecked herself and came out of their sweet home leaving the
first surprise behind
subah ke 9 baje
mayank is back home.
woh dharwaja kholke chupke se andar aata hein ( nupur ko surprise jo
dena tha)
wo BEDROOM mein jaata hein --- magar nupur tho wahan nahin hein
wo BATHROOM mein jaata hein --- magar nupur tho wahan bhi nahin hein
KITCHEN ki taraf jaata hein --- magar nupur tho wahan bhi nahin hein.
wait wahan tho kuch aur hi hein ............ Nupur ka FIRST SURPRISE
A BUNCH OF 8 WHITE ROSES....
He smiles at the rose and takes them ... but to his surprise every petal
of rose has "MAYANK" written on it. mayank is overwhelmed by the
gesture. He finds a note under the bouquet
"A rose is a symbol of my love for you. Its petals shine in beauty, its thorn show its pain."
Search for the rose that has something special written on it and write
it on the petal. ( there is a white petal of rose in a box)
note: Mayank hum is din ko bahut yaadgar banayenge... mere paas aane keliye kuch seediyon se gujarna padega,, ye hein tumhara pehla seedi...
Ise solve karne keliye tumhare paas sirf ek ghanta hein....ab agle seedi
keliye intazar karna... Love u mayank and waiting for u desperately
Mayank bhi ye khel khelne keliye tayyar ho jaata hein...
wo us roses ko leke apne bed pe baith jaata hein. har petal pe mayank
likha hota hein...
us alag si petal ko dhundne ki bahut koshish karta hein... finally at
9:55 he finds the petal... with I written on it....
he shouts I I I in the happiness of finding it...
Nupur wahin khidki ke paas khadi hothi hein aur mayank ko dekhkar hasti rehti hein
Finally mayank ne pehla seedi aur surprise paar kar li
7 more to go
comments and criticism are welcome
do tell me any bloopers...
surprise 2 : page 2
I am posting the first part of short story... If u guys like it i will continue..
8 surprises
Mayank went on a study trip for one week.
Nupur uski intezar mein har din ek saal ki tarah guzaar rahin hein,
Mayank bhi usko dekhne keliye tadap rahan hein.
Days flew by 1...2...3..4...5...6...7
Finally wo din aagaya... Nupur ke mayank ka ghar aane ka din...
nupur mayank keliye kuch alag karna chahithi hein...
shaadi ke baadh pehli baar itne dinon keliye wo alag rahein...
donon ko ye din yaad bhi tho rakhna hein
Nupur : Mayank mein tumhare liye intezar kar rahin hoon.. ye din hamare
liye bahut yaadgar hoga.... waiting for u... jaldi aajavo mayank.
Subah ke 8 baje
Nupur is seen taking the shower and humming the song Khudajaane (
Mayanks favourite).
She came out with a bath robe, went to the closet and is searching for
something.
Finally she found it. she went into the dressing room. she came out
wearing a white dress, white earrings, white bangles and white chain.
kisi shayar ki khwaab se kam nahin hein.
she crosschecked herself and came out of their sweet home leaving the
first surprise behind
subah ke 9 baje
mayank is back home.
woh dharwaja kholke chupke se andar aata hein ( nupur ko surprise jo
dena tha)
wo BEDROOM mein jaata hein --- magar nupur tho wahan nahin hein
wo BATHROOM mein jaata hein --- magar nupur tho wahan bhi nahin hein
KITCHEN ki taraf jaata hein --- magar nupur tho wahan bhi nahin hein.
wait wahan tho kuch aur hi hein ............ Nupur ka FIRST SURPRISE
A BUNCH OF 8 WHITE ROSES....
He smiles at the rose and takes them ... but to his surprise every petal
of rose has "MAYANK" written on it. mayank is overwhelmed by the
gesture. He finds a note under the bouquet
"A rose is a symbol of my love for you. Its petals shine in beauty, its thorn show its pain."
Search for the rose that has something special written on it and write
it on the petal. ( there is a white petal of rose in a box)
note: Mayank hum is din ko bahut yaadgar banayenge... mere paas aane keliye kuch seediyon se gujarna padega,, ye hein tumhara pehla seedi...
Ise solve karne keliye tumhare paas sirf ek ghanta hein....ab agle seedi
keliye intazar karna... Love u mayank and waiting for u desperately
Mayank bhi ye khel khelne keliye tayyar ho jaata hein...
wo us roses ko leke apne bed pe baith jaata hein. har petal pe mayank
likha hota hein...
us alag si petal ko dhundne ki bahut koshish karta hein... finally at
9:55 he finds the petal... with I written on it....
he shouts I I I in the happiness of finding it...
Nupur wahin khidki ke paas khadi hothi hein aur mayank ko dekhkar hasti rehti hein
Finally mayank ne pehla seedi aur surprise paar kar li
7 more to go
comments and criticism are welcome
do tell me any bloopers...
surprise 2 : page 2
Ghum Hai Kisikey Pyaar Meiin
