8 Surprises- ss on MN (vm,siggies-pg19,20,21) - Page 2

can we get the rest of the 6(or whatever)installments tonight itself?its interesting.👍🏼

nic thought!!!!!!!!!! luved ur post!!!!!!!!!!! thanx a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey nice OS, continue soon.. looking forward 2 it, plz pm me. :)

hey thanks for the PM.....enjoyed this part, update the nest one soon dear!!!!!!!!

awesum OS dear...
read it frm startin...
its really interestin..
pls add me 2 ur pm list & update soon..
-supriya

Awesome...
Loved it to the core...
Pls pm whenever u update....

here comes the next part

Surprise 4

subah ke 12 baje

suddenly mayanks cellphone beeps

A bluetooth message

.........Waiting to connect to nupur .........

He accepts the connection

......... Connected to nupur ...........

.........Accept file from nupur ........

......... Transferring file MAYUR.nth .......


(you can see the theme file here

http://www.4shared.com/file/hcHFVdl4/mayur.html)

Nupur wahin door ke peeche khadi hokar ye nokia theme file usey bhejthi hein.

Bhejne ke baadh turanth wahan se chali jaati hein.

itne mein mayank ko strike hota hein ki "agar bluetooth connection hein
tho nupur yahin kahin hogi"

woh jath se uth jaata hein aur ghar ke baahar chala jaata hein usey dhoondne.
Magar Nupur kahin bhi nahin mili.

woh phir se aakar apne cell check karta hein . woh us nokia theme ko apply karta hein.

He finds a picture of his and nupurs in every screen.

Main screen and wallpaper - The pic of first morning after their marriage


usey yaad aata hein kaise woh subah uthke nupur ko apne paas dekhkar
khush hojaata hein.
kaise woh usey good morning kiss detha hein

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second screen --- The hug before basketball match




He remembers how nupur felt shy like a newly weded bride
How he hugged her from back and said those sweet nothings.
kaise woh jali thi sara ke naam pe.

Third screen --- Romantic walk after confession.



he remembers the way he felt her first touch after confession.
their romantic rain moments

Mayank apne khayalon mein khoya hua hotha hein tabhi uska cell bajtha hein...

A message from NUPUR

Hey jaan tumhe mera surprise mila. Ab tum mujhe chaahkar bhi nahin bhool
sakthe. mein tumhare paas har waqt rahungi is cell mein, tumhare dil ke
paas hamesha hamesha keliye..

waise meine poocha nahin tumhara trip kaise rahan. Janti hoon tumhine
sab jeeta hoga. waise us jeet ki pehli haqdar tho mein hi hoon. toh us
pehle ko hi tumhara next letter bana deti hoon.

Agar tumhe samajh mein aagaya tho us petal pe likh dena jo dressing table ke paas hein.

waise tumne pichle wale clue mein bahut mehnat kee hein tho is baar is
choti si clue diya hein maine.

Tho milte hein jaan sirf kuchi ghanton ka faasla hein

Mayank bed pe leta hua soch raha hotha hein.

jeet ki pehli haqdar
us pehle ko ..... next letter

jeet - achievement, victory,Success

waise mera slogan tho victory hein

victory - us pehle ko ..... next letter

first letter "V"

he takes the petal and writes the letter 'V' on it.



He rests on the bed and thinks of every moment he spent with nupur. He slowly dozes off to sleep with a cute smile playing on lips



comments and criticism are welcome

thanks for liking the SS. there are 4 more surprises left and an ending part.
I will finish this SS in 2 days. Thanks for liking it

its amazing prerna dear ................loved it just finishedreading all the first four suprises ...........you wrote it really well cantwait forthe next 4 .................plz do update soon ...........

Amazing.... Waiting for the next surprises