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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks 4 the commentzzz............i realy luved all of them....and i am posting the last part of this os.Hope u like it....
SAJAN PROPOSAL 3
AFTER ALL THAT HAPPEND AT THE PARTY samrat and gunjan went 4 a short date to the chai wala.....where they shared a short but romantic,januable talk..........
g:samrat?????
s:haan chashmish,bolo,main sun raha hu...
g:thanks.........
s:kis liye chashmish???(confused)
g:mujhse itna pyaar karne ke liye.
s(smiling):tum hi hi itni januable keh koi bhi tumse pyaar kar bethe..
gun blushes and looks towards the ground.samrat looks towards her sitting like an angel,playing with dupatta.she was really an angel.
s:I LOVE U CHASHMISH...........
G:I LOVE U 2......AND WILL ALWAYS DO...
suddenly,it started raining and samrat hold gun ka haath and usse ek empty tabele mein le gaya..................by that time donp ke kapre totaly bheeg chuke the.aur then,
" aaachuuuuuu" gunjan cheenki...she had a cold.seeing this samrat moved towards her at when they were as close keh each could hear the others heartbeat,sam raised his hand and picked up a dress,a lehnga(the one sukirti aka ridhimma wore on diwali that karan aka armaan of dmg gifted her)and gives it to her.
s;chashmish,jaa ker yeh pehenlo.........
gunjan takes the dress and goes behind a pillar,while sam takes off his shirt as its all wet.gunjan comes out wearing that dress,with open wet hair.sam is lost in her,thinking,"how beatiful she is,her smile,her eyes,everything"
gunjan sees him gazing at her and feels really shy,and plays wid her dupatta...(a bit awkward too)
s:(cumin back to senses):chashmish....waise maine tumhe aaj poore college ke saamne propose kia,kya tum mujhe uska gift nahi do gi?????hmm??šŸ˜‰
g:gift????kaisa gift????
s:tumhe nahi pata????
And he walks closer to her,by the time he reaches her,she is all red.he is as close to him jitna keh aankhon se kaajal,then he moves his head to kiss her,but wen he is bout to kiss her on the lips he stops,and his eyes ask gunjan apolite question,"may i"???she closes her eyes thatt gived samrat the answer,yes.and they have their first kiss....then after a minute they broke the kiss,and samrat removed gunjan ke hairs frm her neck and kissed him on the neck.then he lifts her up in his strong arms and............................................baki jo bhi hua bacho ke liye accha nahi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the end.......hope u liked it.... coz i know that if i wrote a nother part toh i"ll spoil the whole story............as this is the last part so i realy really need ur comments...........or even just a press the like button if u like it..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
i really love your proposal 2 and 3 parts plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
it ws awesomeeeeeee...
grr8888888 ending
fabulous.... mindblowing...
luved it to d core...
pllzzzzz soon write another ff/oneshot, u r a gr8 writer.. n pm me if u write another


love
jyotika
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
itz so januable..........šŸ‘
i want 2 read da next part of it...........😊😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

it ws awesomeeeeeee...
grr8888888 ending
fabulous.... mindblowing...
luved it to d core...
pllzzzzz soon write another ff/oneshot, u r a gr8 writer.. n pm me if u write another


love
jyotika

arry yaar woh abhi end nahi hua 🤣
shayad šŸ˜•šŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sana866



arry yaar woh abhi end nahi hua 🤣


shayad šŸ˜•šŸ˜†


oye end ho gaya hai.... last ka note padh... pure tym mohit ke khayalon mein rehti hai..!!! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
awesomeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
fantabulous update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
superb!!!!! m in loss of words for such a wonderful work.... keep it up!!!!!!!!!! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20


oye end ho gaya hai.... last ka note padh... pure tym mohit ke khayalon mein rehti hai..!!! šŸ˜†

🤣
arry yaar mujh par mohit ka kuch zyada hi asar ho gaya hai šŸ˜† 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
oh my...........nice part please continue!!!and do pm if possible when u update!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
really very nice. liked it to the core

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