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hi,im writing a story 1rst time so plz tell me if its gud n also if any of u dosent like it!!!!!!! becoz i know that its not gud but still........i wanted to share it wid u people!!!hope u like IT............
part 1:pg 1
part 2:pg 3
part 3:pg 4
SAJAN PROPOSAL 1
A SOFT breeze was blowing at a beatiful evening.There was a prom night held in the xl coll.Bhushan house was full of excitement.Nupur was strolling her cuboard in the search of a perfect dress to wear,uday was deep lost in his own world,dreaming that 3 girls were sittin round him,each holding a piece of pizza waiting for uday to eat it and all that......................our princess dia had already vbeen dressed and was sittin in the car waiting 4 his utmost dodo,n nupur.
dia(4rm the car,brekin uday ka dream):dodo!!!!!!jaldi bahar ao warna ill come inside,aur phir!!!!!!!n nupur dear agar tumhara party main jaane ka mood hai tou aajao..........
nups(comin out of the house tryin to wear her jhumka):by god dia,tum bhi naa!!!kisi ko dhang se tayyar bhi nahi hone deti!!!!
dia:wateva!!!!dodo kahan hai,dodo!!!!!
uday:aagaya deeds!!!chilao mat!!!chalo jaldi chalo!!!!!!
All left the house n our cute januable gunjan was left alone,she was waitin 4 her love of the life,SAMRAT to cum.She promised she'll go with him.She opened a buk to pass her time,jab ek dum se horn baja n gunjan ka cellphone started ringin"kya hua yeh"...n the name wich made her hav a smile that could not be stopped"SAMRAT"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she hurried downstairs without even pickin up the phone n saw a cute handsome hunk with his eyes fixed on her!!!!!he was staring at her angel,in a white anarkali dress,n holding the worlds sweetest smile eva!!!!she came to her and complained that he was late ,but samrat was just standing still staring at her.
gun:SAMRAT,TUM SUN RAHE HO???tum late ho!!!
sam(removing gunjan ke hair 4rm her face):par chashmish aaj tum mujhe late samrat bana kar hi choro gi!!!!!mujhe marne ka irada hai kya??????😉
gun was hardly blushing. and smiling.Sam placed his hand on gun ki chin au rmoved her face towards him.😳😳😳
SAM:chashmish,tumhari iss smile ke liye hi tou main har ek pal tarsta hun,aur ab,main tumhari iss smile ko dekh hi nahi sak raha,tumhara sar jo neeche hai!!!
gun was all red.she was blushin hard.😳
g:samrat,tum bhi naa!!!!chale??sab wait kar rahe honge!!!
s:aapka hukum,sar aankhon par!!!
n our shona couple had a romantic bike ride.................................😊
when they reached the colledge,sam whispered in ms.samrat ki chashmish's ear.....
s:chashmish, tumhare liye ek surprise hai,ek aisa surprise jo tumhari puri life change kar dega!!!!!!
g:surprise???kaisa surprise???
sam:agar bata diya tosurprise kaisa???thora wait karo!!!kyu keh sabar ka phal ,hamesha,samrat hota hai!!!samjhi???CHASHMISH!!!n he winks...😉😉
ok so mera laptop has run out of battery!!!!!guyz ill post the rest tmrw if u want to read it......plz tell me that do u want to read any further????i know most the replies would be noo!!!but if u want to then plzz comment... n tell me!!waise therz a big surprise sajan moment in the next part...so plzzzzzzzz to tell me that should i post it or not..thanks 4 reading...
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
Veer Hanuman
