New MJHT Poem on current track(pg15) - Page 15

Originally posted by: hgrhr

OMG....!!!!!

I'm officially declaring that i'm in loooveeee with your poems anku..!!!

*sigh*

Falak...this was SO romantic that it was goosebumpy...i tell you...every line....like screamed Mayur passion..!! LOL

I get it tere wild thoughts finally bahar iss tareeke se nikalte hain....ahem..except for the dissections of course...hehe.....itne romantic lines....how do you write yaar..!!

I'm in love with each and every para....such beautiful depiction of their love...!!

and of course like always....last line was the cherry on the cake..!! you end with a bang..!! 😉

omg....i'm soo glad you started posting poems again..!! i was misisng them....!!

and ...wow....just wow...!!

this was one mild blowing poem...!!👏

Originally posted by: falak01

JAANE KYA HOGA....

Chaahat mein kitne hi deewane bane..
Iss mohabbat mein na jaane kitne khud se anjaane bane..
Kisi ne khol diye raaz dil ke,to koi ab bhi chup hai..
The kabhi jo itne kareeb,aaj unme bhi faasle bane..

Ek taraf wo pyaar mein dosti ko dhoondta hai..
Wo ek baar phir haalat se majboor hota hai..
Apne dil ki aawaaz ko ansuni kar..
Wo phir se dosti ki raahon ko chunta hai..

Yahan wo phir se kashmkash mein ghiri hai..
Ek baar phir pyaar aur dosti mein se kisi ek ko chun rahi hai..
Hai wo bekhabar uske pyaar se..
Aur khud ko ashkon mein dubo rahi hai..

Udhar koi hai jo pyaar hote huye bhi kisi ko dard de raha hai..
Jise har pal hasaane ka wada kiya tha,use phir aansoo de raha hai..
Ek aur galatfehmi le aayi hai toofan iss rishtey mein..
Wo phir se apne pyaar ko galat samajh raha hai...

Idhar wo tanha khud se pooch rahi hai..
Kyun zindagi aise imtihaan le rahi hai..
Chaaha tha jise toot kar usne hi ilzaam de diya hai..
Aakhir kyun ye mohabbat mujhe itna dard de rahi hai..

Pyaar se bhaag kar wo dono kahin door ja rahi hain..
Apne dil ko yoon hi behlaa rahi hain..
Bina maajhi ke unki zindagi ki naav...
Unhe ek naye saahil ki ore le jaa rahi hai...

Apne pyaar ko rokne ki hasrat mein...
Wo dono bhi ab un pariyon ke des jaa rahe hain...
Jahan milegi unki mohabbat unse ek baar phir..
Aaj wo un raahon ko apna rahe hain..

Uljhan hai dilon mein itni...
Saagar mein lehrein hain jitni..
Koi dil se haarna nahi chahta..
Koi dil ki baat manna nahi chahta..
Na jaane inki kahaani kya mod legi.
Haar jayega pyaar ek baar phir...
Ya uss paak mohabbat ki jeet hogi!!!!

Originally posted by: hgrhr

I wish there was a super duper like button here....or a LOVE button here so i could press it for this poem..!!

👏

I'm running out of words to comment with on your poems yaar....there's nothing left to say after reading it....one is totally speechless...!!

Each character's feelings you got stot ON..!!! all the insecurities, misunderstandings they're going through....loving each other but not being able to say it....not being able to understand...all of it...!!

I wanna cry after reading this....aajkal episodes dekh ke agar aise brilliant poems padh lo toh who would not get emotional...!!😭😭😭

mind blowing job...i can't even tell which was the best because its impossible to tell...!!!!

You ROCK yaar....tujhmein talant koot koot ke bhara hua hai..!!!

keep it up...!!

do write more..!!

"Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash....."
anku another marvellous creation by the most xcellent adorable poet i have seen in my friends so far....not everyone possess such God gifted potentials as u..just one small request.......dont ever stop enriching ur emotions through the creations at any cost...love u loadsssssssssssssss and all the best 4 ur future ones🤗

Originally posted by: falak01

lolz...😆😆

cindy u r here...😲😲😲

aaj to exam start hone wale the tere.....😲😲😲

achha to mood fresh karne ke liye aayi hai???😳

thanx dear...glad u liked it....luv u...