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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

OMG mimi!

that was awesome, fantastic, amazing, mind-blowing, outstanding, superb, magical, terrific!

Words can't possible describe how good it was!

ur one shot totally made my day!

it was absolutely perfect and soooooo beautifully written!....PM this scene to PD......i so want the realization to be like this.

ur FF and one shot amuse me everytime.....seriously speaking if u publish this u'll earn a good fortune....

i felt as though this scene was taking place in front of my eyes.....i cud picture it soo well...

i was soo mesmerised in it that i didn't realize when it ended.....

ahh sam was imagining sheena to be gunjan....

benji was mad at sam....ohh my why can't he even be like this in the show yaar?? he was awesome.....he gave sam some sense atleast!......lol

and listen to ur heart.....its cliche but while reading ur FF it was the most unique....

loved all the questions and the answers sam gave.......

soo sam finally realized that he always loved her.....

"I don't think I can live with myself knowing that I'm responsible for your tears."- awwww sams sooo cute yaar…..can't even see a tear in his chashmishs eyes coz of him.

sams heart beats a 100 times a second…was he that nervous??

You're my angel. I" I hesitate, "I love you Chashmish."- this line totally blew me off..*sigh*....it was soo magical...*claps*

Sheena called sam an asshole…..lol look whos talking…an asshole is calling the most januable guy an asshole….lol and sams expressions must have been priceless just like confused bachha…

Benji smiles at sam and gives him a thumbs up……lol poor sam wud still be surviving the shock.

Awww…..sam loves gunji the way she is…..sooo sweet!

Gunji looks at sam nervously……she must have been in complete shock hearing sam.

Loved loved loved it……it was out of this world!

Keep writing more and more….

*hugs*
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sweetsarah13

OMG mimi!!!!!!!!!
i loved ur ff!!
I've always loved every ff u wrote!
but this one,

OMG! it was soo sweet!

samrat not caring bou anybody else and looking for gunjan!😳OMG!I really really want this to happen!!

Awesome job mimi!!! 👏

Hey Sarah!
Aweeh, lol thank you so much babes, Im so glad you liked it! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: aabha_monaya

OMG!!!wat was tat😲😲😲

My horrid attempt at writing an OS 😆
just truely magical mimi!!!!!!!!!👏its gr8!!!!!!!!!!!marvellous.......ufff wat a scene mimi.....i am so touched!!
Aweeeh, thank you SOOO much hun!!!!!!!!!!! *hugs*
gr8 job.............sam imaging sheena as gunjan!!!!☺️i hope it happens soon in d show!!!!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼mimi dere r a few thngs which touch my heart...and dis has done!!!!!!!!
OMG aweeeh!! HUGE HUGE HUGE compliment! AWEEEEEHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you hun!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: drishti_sajan

OMG mimi!

that was awesome, fantastic, amazing, mind-blowing, outstanding, superb, magical, terrific!

Words can't possible describe how good it was!

ur one shot totally made my day!

Hey Drishti! 😳
OMG no way!!!!! Aweeeh, thank youuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!! Whoaa, I'm glad it did babes!! *hugs* THAT made my day!
it was absolutely perfect and soooooo beautifully written!....PM this scene to PD......i so want the realization to be like this.
I've PMed it to PD, haha let's see what she says 😛

ur FF and one shot amuse me everytime.....seriously speaking if u publish this u'll earn a good fortune....

LOL no way babes, NO FREAKING WAY! 😆 You're so sweet, thanks so much!
i felt as though this scene was taking place in front of my eyes.....i cud picture it soo well...

i was soo mesmerised in it that i didn't realize when it ended.....

aweeeh, what's with all of you and imagining these thngs? I was rereading it, and by god, I cant see anything but grammatical errors 😆
ahh sam was imagining sheena to be gunjan.... Yeah 😳

benji was mad at sam....ohh my why can't he even be like this in the show yaar?? he was awesome.....he gave sam some sense atleast!......lol

I LOVE BENJI! this is how I want his character to be. I DEMAND A BENJAN TRACK!
and listen to ur heart.....its cliche but while reading ur FF it was the most unique....
AWEEEEHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's SUCH a huge compliment, I cant even explain!!!
Haha, Cliched is my middle name [not literally] 😆

loved all the questions and the answers sam gave.......

soo sam finally realized that he always loved her.....

"I don't think I can live with myself knowing that I'm responsible for your tears."- awwww sams sooo cute yaar'..can't even see a tear in his chashmishs eyes coz of him.

I REALLY want him to say that to Gunjan when she cries 😳
sams heart beats a 100 times a second'was he that nervous?? YUPP!!! I kind of stole the Sam from my FF here 😆

You're my angel. I" I hesitate, "I love you Chashmish."- this line totally blew me off..*sigh*....it was soo magical...*claps*

Aweeeh, thank you!!!!!
Sheena called sam an asshole'..lol look whos talking'an asshole is calling the most januable guy an asshole'.lol and sams expressions must have been priceless just like confused bachha'
🤣 "asshole calling Sam an asshole" hahahahaah!!! 😆
I didnt wanna add that word in, but it seemed like a normal response for Sheena 😆

Benji smiles at sam and gives him a thumbs up''lol poor sam wud still be surviving the shock.

Awww'..sam loves gunji the way she is'..sooo sweet!

Gunji looks at sam nervously''she must have been in complete shock hearing sam.

She was VERY shocked! I didnt wanna ruin it by adding her POV into the scene 😛
Loved loved loved it''it was out of this world!

Keep writing more and more'.

*hugs*
Aweeh! *hugs back* I will 😛 I cant promise they'll be good [cuz they never are] but I will DEFO write more 😊 *blows a kiss*

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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

wow dat was amazin ...... loved it all 4rm start 2 finish

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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
OMG MIMI!!
WHAT A SURPRISE!!
I HAVENT WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT!
AMAZING YAAR!!
"I LOVE U CHASHMISH"....
WAH KYA BAAT HAI!!
AMAZING WORK!!
CLAPS 4 UUU!!!
HUGS 4 UUU!!!
KISSES 4 UUU!!!
WAS SOOO MAGICAL!!
JUST LOVED IT!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
haha...chalo, chalo, you don't HAVE TO but but but it'd be awesome if you did :D
Hmm...how about a two shot? :D :D :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
Thank you 268143 , and Anjalika Khanna XD
@bittersweet93- LMAO a 2 shot? Haha... I'll think about it =P
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: _Monu_

OMG MIMI!!

WHAT A SURPRISE!!
I HAVENT WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT!
AMAZING YAAR!!
"I LOVE U CHASHMISH"....
WAH KYA BAAT HAI!!
AMAZING WORK!!
CLAPS 4 UUU!!!
HUGS 4 UUU!!!
KISSES 4 UUU!!!
WAS SOOO MAGICAL!!
JUST LOVED IT!!

Hey Monu!
Aweeh, thank you so much! Means a lot to me that you took out the time to not only read, but comment here too! 😳 *hugs and kisses* Love you loads,
-- Mimi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
I'm speechless
This was really awesome
i could imagine all the scenes as if they were happening just in front of me
beautiful
just superb
fab writer
no words to say anything more

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