SaJan One Shot: Samrat's Confession - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi mimi ! 😊

I m new here. I read it & its just MAGICAL(tht wud b the appropriate word for ur one shot.) I hope something like this happens in the serial too. & ur writing skills were soooooo gr8 tht i thought i was actually reading an episodic update. TOOO GOOD πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Keep it up dear! πŸ‘πŸΌ

I also read tht u had already written another OS. Can u plz PM tht & also ur FF.

vinyasa(urff vinu)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: trouble_maker

Mimi!! 😲 What have u done?!?!?!

NOTHING! [I hope] LOL πŸ˜†
Ok this scene is like THE most beautiful, magical, mesmerizing and poignant scene I have EVER read!!!! And I mean it seriously.
AWEEEH!!! OMG no way!!! *major blush attack* THANK YOU MAPLEEE!! *hugs*
Gosh, I should take up writing One shots as a career, LOL no editing, no nothing. It takes me 5 mins πŸ˜†

I really have NO words. Everything, everything was just PERFECT!!! Sammy not believing he saw Gunji at first, hesitating to think about his feelings, and then thinking about all the old moments and realizing he loved her all along, Benji taking Gunji away and finally those confession lines...literally blew me off! Simply brilliant! N such details and soooo true to the character and storyline, I wasn't reading the scene, it felt like I was watching it. πŸ‘
AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
OMG OMG OMG *dies* That comment just blew me away- LITERALLY (do you see me flying..yeah, that's not a bird..that's ME) πŸ˜†
Thank you SO much babes, I cant believe you liked it this much... makes me SOO happy knowing that!!! *blushes like a moron* you're SOOO sweet!
And I HAD to add a BenJan scene in there πŸ˜† Im thinking to use a similar scene for my FF (last part) but that'll be more detailed πŸ˜†

Pm this to PD NOW. I want Sammy's confession to be EXACTLY like this.
LOL Aweeeeh!! Okay, I'll PM it to PD πŸ˜›
God, NO WAY! Sam's confession in the show will be SO much more amazing, I have a gut feeling 😊
U are seriously very very talented my Cake Chor!! Love ya! πŸ€—πŸ€—
Aweeh, thank you my Canadian Maple Leaf!! πŸ˜† πŸ€—Love you like a sister! *blows a kiss*

And I want you to continue this scene...you must!
Hahah, babes, it's a one shot πŸ˜†
I'll see what I can do

@ Asthu- Will reply to your essay later. I'm replying ...it's gonna be LONG πŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
mimi that was something beyond words! you have touched my soul today with a wonderful, amazing, superb, awesome, fantastic, mesmerizing script!

hats off to u dear πŸ€—

i want this to be used in the play! ☺️ plz forward to PD. thanks jaan.

luv
avani
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal



Well
I've been a Simon Cowell and recognised a talent in you

LOL that guy scares me πŸ˜†
You're so sweet though, thanks a ton!
Now spread it like fire
LOL πŸ˜†
God....Maths and History really are making me go crazy
Aweeh, hun...math is like MY WORST SUBJECT! I suck at it ... I DETEST history, but I do pretty good on it 🀒
Oh god
And thank you for the wishes
It means a lot to me 😳
Aweeh, anytimee, all the best! Make us proud πŸ˜‰

@Khushboo_pat - Thank you so much hun!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjhtsajanfan25

Wow! Where do I begin? It was amazing, and I felt as if I was seeing this right before my eyes. You did an amazing job! I loved it. Please continue writing more πŸ˜ƒ

-Jia

Hey Jia!
Aweeeh, oh my gosh, thank you SO much sweetheart! <3
I'll defo write more 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mimi0295

And I HAD to add a BenJan scene in there πŸ˜† Im thinking to use a similar scene for my FF (last part) but that'll be more detailed πŸ˜†
O WOW in ur FF too... OMG Im already excited for the last part...but nooooo then ur FF wud end 😭

God, NO WAY! Sam's confession in the show will be SO much more amazing, I have a gut feeling 😊
N my gut feeling is that its gonna be a big disappointment MJHT these days have been a big letdown itself πŸ˜’

Hahah, babes, it's a one shot πŸ˜†
I'll see what I can do
Watever me dont careπŸ˜† u ARE writing another "one shot" of like when sammy confronts gunji after all this...warna my chappal.... πŸ˜†

N ya ur welcome but u deserve all this praises πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—


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Posted: 16 years ago
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I swear to god Binu, you and your chappal threats have got me scared for my life. I was considering leaving the country today. LOL
Achaa, I'll write another part to this when I get the time. No promises though! LOL
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LMAO Mimi..YAY my chappal jadoo! LOLZ....
Okies whenever u get time...i no u have exams coming soon too..so no hurry =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

omg mimi dat was awesum!!!!

samrat imagining gunjan and then his feeling start to show was realli gd and they way he realises the things he has done for gunjan was superb!!! im just speechless right now i was so touched reading it
do continue soon

Hey Shazz!!!
Aweeh, thank you so much!! Im so glad you liked it 😳
Haha, babes this is a one shot, not a FF... so I won't be continuing [unless Binu's reading this πŸ˜†]
@Shafoo-thanks so much!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Aranya

OH MY GOD!!!

Mimi its something so beautiful and magical i cant even describe what it is!!!
WOW.....U r superb!
Man I loved the part where Sheena got angry and the Benjan scene was amazing!!!
By God....I thoroughly enjoyed reading it....man the part where Sammy really understands about Gunjan being his forever was written so well!!!
I am hoping PD will add this......do PM her!!!!

Aru!
Aweeeh, thank you so much babes! Im so glad you liked it 😳
Hahaha, should I PM this to PD? I dunno... lol but thanks so much for reading/commenting babes! Totally made my day 😊
Thanks roxthefox

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